ChronosCrowler Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Aw........thats so touching!(*sob*)Mamamiya!!!!!Can't Wait for another chapter!!! Note to self again: Don't do the Crowler thing...its kinda embarassing...XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 OK was it just me or did we sound like a after school special?! LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 hheheh! just like talking in outside the school grounds of duel academy!!!hahah! You Slifer Slackers!!! Get Back to your DORMS this instant!!!MAJOR NOTE TO SELF: Stop acting like crowler!!!it's getting really embarassing DUMB ASS!!!XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Yeah guys it isn't just my fan-fiction It's Chronos Crowler' date=' Lord Wyhe, and Frlf fan-fiction. Thanks guys it wouldn't be a good fan fiction without ya[/b']So true!I have great yugioh ideas stored up,so I come to this website & join up for such reasons.I would want to make fan-fics if not for the problem that I can't write up good duels.Thus,I resorted to giving my ideas to those who can give life to my characters.For that,I give my thanks again.I hope to see Faust,Professor Ford,Henry & Yern Ee soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Chapter 4 Water Girl part 2 Stacy's field7-colored fish 1800 ATK1 face downTravis's field Slayer Solider 1300 ATK1 face-down Stacy- I draw Now I play The Field Spell a Legendary Ocean. Kai- Oh no Travis could be in big trouble. That spell card give all water type monster a 200 ATK/DEF point boost. Stacy- That's right duelist. You forget one thing though It downgrades all water monster levels by 1 so level 5 monsters become summon able. 7-colored fish 2000 ATK Stacy- Now I'll summon mermaid knight in attack mode! Mermaid knight 1700 ATK Travis- Oh crap! Stacy- Now Mermaid knight attack his Slayer Solider (Slayer Soldier was destroyed) T:3100 Travis- I activate Slayer Contract Trap. By giving up 300 Life points I can bring the Slayer that was just destroyed back to the field. So attack his Solider again! T:2800 Slayer Solider 1300 ATK Stacy- That's OK Cause When a legendary ocean is on the field mermaid Knight can attack twice in 1 battle phase. Now Attack him again my monster! (Monster Destroyed) T:2400 Travis- I'll activate my trap again! T:2100 Stacy- You're doing it again Travis- Yes! Slayer Solider 1300 ATK Stacy-OK I'll attack your Solider with 7 colored fish! T: 1400 Travis- I'll activate my trap again. T:1100 Slayer Solider 1300 ATK Kai- Your losing terribly!!! Stacy- He's right you know! Travis- Um Kai who side ya on. Kai- Well.. Travis- pick a team dude, pick a team. Stacy- I end my turn. Travis- I'll sacrifice my Solider to summon Slayer Sniper! Slayer Sniper 2500 ATK Travis- This card can destroy 1 card on the field. I choose your face-down The Face down was Gravity Bind. Travis- ohh Good trap thank god i destroyed it. Stacy- Crap! Genny- Travis could have the upper hand in this duel. Travis- Now I'll attack you directly with Sniper. Kai & Stacy- How! Travis- by giving up half my life points he can attack you directly! T-550 Travis- Go Sniper attack her. S-1500 T-3050 Travis- Now I end my turn. oh and the battle damage is added to my life points. Stacy- I Sacrifice my mermaid knight to summon Levia-Dragon - Daedalus Levia-Dragon - Daedalus 2800 ATK Stacy- Now I'll activate his effect by sending a legendary ocean to the grave and all cards are destroyed except this card! Travis- Damn! Levia-Dragon - Daedalus 2600 ATK Stacy- Now I"ll attack you directly with Levia Dragon T:450 Stacy- One more attack and your finished. Travis- Draw I play Slayer reborn. this will bring back a Slayer from my grave I summon Slayer sniper. Slayer Sniper 2500 ATK Travis- Now I'll activate his effect I give half my life points to attack you directly. Attack her directly! T:225 S:0000 Travis- yeah I won now I get your badge Stacy. Stacy- I guess you won fair and square. She handed him her badge. Travis- Now lets go guys. Stacy: should I send him to the Utopia Master Sigurdur Sigurdur- No were gonna wait till this tournament is over. Then we will attack. End Chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 hmmm,who's this "Sigurdur"? (mystery character) & decent game.Fan-fic advice: describe your characters & card visuals better. ("show them,not tell them"says my S2E English teacher) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Got it man Sigurdur is the leader of the Hyper riders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Got it man Sigurdur is the leader of the Hyper riders.Ah Ha!!!Just as I suspected! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Well plz at your first post.. put a list of the characters and their role in the story.. im kinda lost :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 awesome chapter i love your story can't wait for chapter 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Ujj! I like whhat happened between chapter four ehehh!!! Great!!! Sweet!!! HAHA!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Chapter 5 warriors and samurai Travis- Guys who gonna duel next? Genny- I will. I want to duel You Kai. Travis was shocked! Kai- You really want to duel me. It will be a quick duel if you duel me. Genny- it can't be that fast. Your no Zane Truesdale. Kai- I'm better then Zane Truesdale. Genny- You wish! Kai- well I'll show you then. Let duel Genny. Genny[/b]- You know what I'll duel ya. Lets begin. K:4000G:4000 Genny- I'll start. I play Lady Warrior of the Wasteland in Attack mode! Lady Warrior of the Wasteland 1100 ATK Genny- Next I'll play 2 face-down. Go ahead Kai Kai-I Summon Six Samurai Zanji in attack mode! Six Samurai Zanji 1800 ATK Kai- Now I play Double summon. this lets me summon twice this turn. Now I summon normal summon again Six Samurai Nisashi in attack mode! Six Samurai Nisashi 1400 ATK Kai- Now I'm able to summon my Great Shogun Shien to the field since I have 2 Six Samurai on the field. now Go Great Shogun Shien!!! Great Shogun Shien 2500 ATK. Kai- Now I play heavy Storm to destroy all spell and traps (2 trap were destroyed) Genny-This is quite a long turn. Hurry! Kai- Now I'll attack your monster with Nisashi. (monster Destroyed) G:3700 Kai- Now all my monster will attack you including Nisashi cause Nisashi can attack twice a turn. Genny- Ahh!!! G:0000K:4000 Genny- That was pretty good. I guess I'm out the Tournament. Ka- No that didn't count. Lets go guys i still got to find Shane Kaiser. Travis- Um Guys do you feel like were being watched? Genny- yeah now that you mention it. Kai- ah you guys are just hallucinated. ???- Oh it's not in you guys head it's me. Someone jumped out of a tree it was a a Man. [/u][/i][/b] Kai-who the hell! ???- my name is Thomas white! I'm a plant duelist I have come to challenge you Genny Coven to a duel!!! Genny-Well then I accept your challenge. (They activated Their duel Disk) Genny & Thomas- Duel!!! Sorry it's short Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 cool chapter nice cliffhanger, man kai is strong and he is in slifer red yowsa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Uhmmm...Its Great but i think!!! There should be a short academy sketch before the other fight happends...GREAT FANFIC THOUGH!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 yeah an academy sketch would be awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Glad you agreed!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 I'll give you guys a academy sketch after chapter 6 is that Okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 yeah that would be cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Yeah!!!Can't Wait For it!!!(*Having insomia!!! can't sleep!! Can't stop thinking about CH 6!!!*) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Chapter 6 Plant party! Genny- I'll start us off with a favorite of mine called Mataza the Zapper in attack mode. (Mataza the Zapper 1300 ATK) Genny- Now I play 1 face-down. your turn Thomas. Thomas- I'll summon cyber sunflower in Atk mode! (Cyber Sunflower 1400 ATK). Thomas- Now I'll attack your monster with Cyber Sunflower. Genny-Oh no you don't I activate Shadow Spell! This decreases your monsters ATK by 700 and your monster can't attack. Also it's position cannot be changed! Cyber Sunflower 700 ATK. Thomas- Darn! I play the field spell Photosynthesis. This give all plant-type monster the ability to inflict damage to your life points even if your monster is in Defense mode. Also Plant type monsters gain 400 attack points! Cyber Sunflower 1100 ATK. Genny-Are you finished Thomas- I play 1 face-down. you may take a turn! Genny- Alrighty I guess I'll be able to summon Dark Blade in Attack mode! Dark blade 1800 ATK Thomas- oh no! Travis- Man Genny's already gonna get a early lead in the duel Kai- I don't know Travis. That Thomas looks like he knows what he doing. Travis- I guess Genny- Now I'll attack your Cyber Sunflower with my Dark blade! Thomas- Hold it right there! I activate Garden Shield! This negate 1 attack that is directed to a plant Type monster. Then it destroys your attacking monster. Genny- Dark Blade! Well I still have Mataza the Zapper he can attack twice in 1 turn. Destroy his Cyber Sunflower! T:3800 Genny- Now I'll attack you directly with Mataza again! Mataza slashed Thomas in the chest! T:2500 Genny-I now end my turn. Thomas- Okay I summon Cyber Plant A chrome plant appeared on the field. Cyber Plant 1700 ATK Thomas- Now I'll attack your Mataza! G:3600 Thomas- Now for Cyber Plant's effect! For every card on the field you lose 300 Life-points. There are 2 so that's 600 attack! G:3000 Thomas- Now I'll play 2 face-downs. go ahead and go! Genny- Draw! I summon Gearfried the Iron Knight in ATK mode! Gearfried The Iron Knight 1800 ATK Genny- Now I play the spell Lightning Vortex! by discarding a card from my hand I can destroy all monsters on your field. Thomas- NO! The card busted into little Pixels! Genny- Now Gearfried Attack him directly! Thomas- Whatever I activate Forest Mirror. This card reflects the damage back to you yet I still take the damage. Boys- AHH! G:1200T: 700 Thomas- I'm not finished! I activate Wind leaf! Now you take damage equal to half your monsters attack points! Kai- In other words he loses 900 ATK points. Little thorns hit Genny. G:300T:700 Genny- I end my turn with 1 face-down Thomas- I play Cyber Rose in attack mode! Cyber Rose 500 ATK Thomas- Now I'll attack your you directly and end this duel! Genny-I activate Call of the haunted! This lets me bring a monster back from my grave to the field! I choose my Gilford The Legend! Gilford The Legend 2600 ATK Thomas- Were did that com from! Genny- When I played Lightning Vortex. I had to discard one card to my grave! Thomas- That means I lose. G:300T:0000 Genny- Now I get a badge. Awesome! Thomas- Good job. Thanks. Kai- Lets go back to the dorm and meet the professors. Travis-I'm starving lets go eat. End Chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Good 6 chapter is up!! ^_^.. i can't wait what will hapen next here..!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 awesome chapter just 1 error i see sometimes you say atk points instead of life points can't wait for the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 Awesome!!! Plantaliscious!!! hehe XD!!! Can't Wait for the next chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 Chapter 5:short,but it clearly indicates Kai's skillsChapter 6:good,like the original cards (wonder who made them)Advice: don't start a duel over nothing.Intro new character (even if he appears for 1 ep) then proceed with duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 Very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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