Skuldur Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Awesome vid man i like it Keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 CHARACTER INTRODUCTION NOW FINNISH!!!CHECK NOW!!ANd OH! GUYS!!! PLS HELP SPREAD THE WORD ABOUT THE VIDEO OK!!!! Great video! (I should know,since I do that kind of stuff in school all the time)I especially like how you protray Faust,the very 1st character I sent in. (he really looks like the mad scientist I envisioned)You should send all your videos to john20412 himself via PM & ask him to post them up on the first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 THANKS GUYS GLAD YOU LIKE IT!!!Don't worry i already pm him ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PirosThe3rd Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Awesome vid! Man!!!!When I viewed I thought that i was already watching a new anime!!!XD!!!ANd Great Chapters 8 & 9!!! Guys!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 I Agree! Great Chapters!!!Im dying to see the next chapters!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 I Agree! Great Chapters!!!Im dying to see the next chapters!!!me too! (does fanboy-style scream of 9000 decibels) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 I Agree! Great Chapters!!!Im dying to see the next chapters!!!me too! (does fanboy-style scream of 9000 decibels) Gald you agree! andHuh? Wat do you mean?"(does fanboy-style scream of 9000 decibels)" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 i think he means it's very loud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Chapter 10 Tomb of the doomed part 1Chapter 10 Tomb of the doomed part 1 Travis- (groggy) uhh my head. ( he craws over to Itsuki) Travis- Wake up Itsuki. ( She didn't budge) Travis- Oh god I didn't want to do this because my head but... WAKE UP ITSUKI!!!! (she shot up) Itsuki- Where the fire!!! Travis- What fire? Itsuki- Oh sorry. Where are we? Travis- I can't answer that. But where are the guys. Itsuki- Obviously I can't answer that! Travis- It's no reason to bite my head off... (mutters) God. Itsuki- Lets get off the dirt I'm all dirty. (They stood up) Travis- Come on lets look for them. (15 minutes later) Travis- look there's a tomb lets check that. Itsuki- Um... I don't think we should. How many TV shows have seen when people walk into tomb, houses, or any place they never been in and always got in trouble! huh! Travis- A lot but this is real life so lets go. And what's the worst that could happened. Itsuki- Don't say I didn't tell ya so cause I did. Travis- oh come on! ( They walked into the tomb) Itsuki- good so far. (10 min later) Travis- Hey do you here that sound. It sound like chanting. Itsuki- lets check it out. (They walk to the chanting) Travis- ( whispering) oh no there's Genny and Yukiko. (Genny and Yukiko were hanging form rope from a sealing unconscious.) Itsuki- Oh no! I'm gonna save her. Travis-not without me your not. (The chanting stop) Itsuki- Oh crud they now we get to see what we look like. ( The chanting came from some scarfed Duel monsters) Travis- Are those dark Enchanters? Itsuki-I think so. Those are rather new. Dark enchanter- ha bu ta shi Travis-Excuse me? Dark Enchanter- Ha bu ta shi Itsuki- speak English ???- NO my dark Enchanter Do not speak human language! Travis-and who might you be! ???- I'm the The Temple CO leader. Itsuki- He means your name. Co Leader- My name is Destino. Travis- Well anyway can we have our sister and brother and we will be out of your way. Destino- No my people need to eat and I'm hungry! Itsuki- Well you can't eat them that just not cool Destino- Who said I was cool? Travis- Look you just can't eat my brother or her sister! Destino- Look I'll make a agreement. We duel and if I win I eat all 4 of. if not I'll let you guys go. Itsuki- that kinda sucks but okay I agree. Travis- I'll duel you come on. Itsuki- but... Travis- I'm dueling him okay! Let start Destino- Alright Travis and Destino- Duel!! T:4000D:4000 Travis- I'll start. I summon Slayer wolf in attack mode! Slayer wolf 1200 ATK Travis- Now I'll play Slayer Moon! A Dark Moon appeared on the field. Itsuki- What's that!!! Travis- Glad you like it. this gives all Slayers a 300 ATK point boost. Also I can fuse Slayer Monsters without polymerization! Slayer wolf 1500 ATK Destino- Come on here I'm hungry. Travis- Well stay that way I play 2 face-downs your move. Destino- I summon Destiny hero Double dude In Attack mode. Destiny hero Double Dude 1000 ATKDestino- Now I play United We Stand my monster. This give 1 monster 700 ATK point boost. I choose of course my Double Dude. Destiny hero Double Dude 1700 ATK Itsuki- Oh your in trouble now! Travis- Oh shut up! Destino- Now I'll attack your Wolf! (Monster Destroyed) T: 3800 Destino-Now my monster can attack you twice in one turn. Travis- I activate my Magic Cylinder! This Negate your attack and directs it back to you. D:2300 Destino- Oh you punk! Travis- Oh your gonna be no challenge. Why is Travis so confident! Does Destino Have a plan to Defeat Travis Find out on the next episode of Yugioh GX- Battle's at Duel Academy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Good ^_^ R.X and Raymond disappeared =O can't wait for more.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 exciting can't wait to see what happens next Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Awesome!!! A Duel monster spirit! a tomb keeper! and!!! Destiny hero!!hahah!Great Chapter! 9 I think you should edit it cause you brought out CH10By the way! guys did you like the Character Introduction video? @_@IM ALL EYES TO WAIT FOR THE CONCLUSION OF THEIR DUEL! Oh yeah! Man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Chap 10 is really great!I can hardly find any flaws with it,let your work soar beyond all boundaries to become the best one of them all. (after all,all your reps come from this fanfic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 I second That motion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 [this message is to john20412]anyway,can you update the title? (some people may think you're at ch.9) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Chapter 11 Tomb of the doomed part 2 Travis's field Slayer moon- spell card 1 face-down Destino's field Destiny Hero Double dude 1700 ATK united we stand- spell card T:3800 D:2300 Travis- I guess it's my turn. I summon Slayer warrior in Attack mode! Slayer warrior 1800 ATK Travis- Now attack his black hat double dude. (Monster Destroyed) D:2200 Destino- Ugh! You little brat!!! I'm gonna hurt you! Travis- Bring IT!!! I end my turn! Itsuki-(thinking) Man why is Travis not getting scared? Destino-I summon Destiny hero Doom lord in attack of course. Destiny hero Doom lord 600 ATK. Travis- you can't touch my monster. It's way to weak. Destino- Who said anything about Attacking? I activate Doom Lord's effect. It removes one of your monster from the game for two turns. ( Doom Lord waved his hand and slayer was gone) Destino- But when I activate his effect my monster can't attack this turn. Itsuki- Phew. Destino- He is not out of the fire yet! I play double Summon! This lets me summon another monster this turn. I sacrifice my Doom Lord to summon Destiny hero Dasher! Destiny hero Dasher 2000 ATK. Travis- Not to bad. Destino- I'll make my dasher faster by sending Destiny hero sword master to the grave to give all destiny heroes on the field gain 800 Attack points. Destiny Hero Dasher 2800 ATK Itsuki- dang nice boost! Destino- Thanks you! Now Attack him directly dasher!!! Travis- No problem. I can stop him I activate Spell caster's Shield! Itsuki- Explain the card. Travis- When my opponent attacks He take half the damage I take! Destino- Oh no! T:1000D:700 Travis-AHHH!!! (Travis falls to the ground) Itsuki- Travis!!! Destino- Did you feel the shock of the Attack. Your dueling energy is low! That's why the attack nearly killed you!!! Travis-So why didn't you feel the shock of the attack? Destino- My dueling Energy is high that is why! Travis- I'll make sure you will feel pain though!!! Destino- I play 1 face-down. Make your turn! Destiny hero Dasher 2000 ATK. Travis- My move! Slayer Warrior comes back to the field from Destiny hero Doom lord's effect. Slayer warrior 1800 ATK Travis-I play monster reborn. This will bring my slayer Wolf back to the field.Slayer wolf 1500 ATK. Travis- Now I'll sacrifice my monster to summon Slayer Angel!!!Slayer Angel 3500 ATK. Destino- What is that!? Also how are you able to summon a level 9 monster with only 2 monster? Travis- Slayer wolf counts as two tributes when summoning a Slayer monster! This monster destroys all face-down spell and traps. (face-down Destroyed) Itsuki- Cool Travis-Now I'll attack your Dasher! End this duel!!! Destino- AHH!!!! D:0T:1000 Destino- I have been Defeated. But now You have to find your way out of here! ( Genny And Yukiko woke up) Genny- Uhh... where are we. AHH!! Dark Enchanters!!! Yukiko- Calm down they are not gonna harm us. Travis- Get them down!!! (They got the 2 down) Yukiko- Lets get out of here. Destino- Yes you may leave. Now go find your way out of the tomb! (thinking) if you can. (They walked deeper into the tunnel) What other challenges do our heroes have in store for them selfs? Find out what on The next episode Of Yugioh GX- Battle's at duel academy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 awesome chapter wonder what they'll meet in the tunnels dundundun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 (*GASP*) That angel is strong!Oh Im excited to se the next Chapter! Good job john! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death's Seduction Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 great chronos how u make the characters for your video like jordan also could u make me some characters like that for rep but i have to like them-SAMBAU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Well SAMBAU, your character must be in the fanfic for me to make him... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Another awsome chapter! and ChronosCrowler, your character intro was very cool as well! Btw im riolutrainer on youtube....just to clarify Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 chapter 11 is good work,keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Oh Guys! if you have youtube accounts! pls comment on my work ok!thanks!and john? where are the other chapters im dying to read them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 i must appear in the next chapter! yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PirosThe3rd Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Awesome vid man! but sorry i don't have a youtube account XD!oh and john!!!still loving the fanfic! im waiting for the next chapter!oh is my character accepted? you know Michael "The Virus" Blues Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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