john20412 Posted May 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Chapter 12 Dark Light at the end of the tunnel Travis- I don't know why Destino said we will have trouble at the end of this tunnel. we walked all this way and we are at the end of the tunnel. Genny- Yeah. Lets hurry and go to the end of the tunnel. ( They ran to the End of the tunnel and walk into a Huge Dark Area) Itsuki- Someone really need to decorate this place! Yukiko- Um... Why is it so dark in here? ???-Welcome Duelist to your the magician 4 challenge. You be dueling myself the Tomb leader and my highest officials. (three duel monster walked) . Itsuki- Dark magician!!! Yukiko- Dark magician Girl!!! Genny- Dark magician of Chaos!!! ???- Then you shall duel me. (another duel monster stepped out) Travis- Dark paladin!!! DP(Dark Paladin)- It is I Dark Paladin. Now here is what you are dueling for. ( A Dark wall turned around revealing R.X, Raymond, Kai, and Wong tied to a wall) Genny- Let them go!!! DP- I know you want them free So I'll make a deal. Each time one of the duelist on your team beats someone on my team I'll release them. Yukiko- Sounds Good but who goes 1st to duel? DP- all of you will duel at the same time but I will not duel until you three are finished dueling. Itsuki- Cool as long as you keep your word! DP- Good now choose your opponent. Genny- Dibs on Dark magician of Chaos. Itsuki- dark Magician will have to do. Yukiko- dark magician girl is all mine! DP- now that you have chosen your opponent begin your destruction. (They all activated their duel disk). Yukiko & DMG (dark magician Girl)- Duel!!! Itsuki- & DM (Dark Magician)- Duel!!! Genny & DMC ( Dark magician of Chaos)- Duel!!! Y-4000DMG-4000I-4000DM-4000G-4000DMC-4000 Yukiko- I'll start by playing Zombie Enforcer in attack mode! Zombie Enforcer 1300 ATK. DMG- Is that all?! Yukiko- now I play 2 face-downs. Your move. DMG- I'm gonna start with a bang! I summon Sprite Magician in Attack mode! Sprite magician- 1650 ATK. DMG- Next I'll attack your Zombie! Fairy Dust! Yukiko- Sorry to disappoint but I activate Negate attack! This will stop your attack right in the moment. DMG- My monster is unaffected by Traps! Yukiko- NO! (Monster Destroyed) Y-3650 DMG- I place 1 facedown. Yukiko- My Draw! [Meanwhile at Genny's Duel] Genny- ok I summon Celtic Guardian in Attack mode! Celtic Guardian 1400 ATK. DMC- If that is all... Genny- Of course not I play Quick summon this lets me summon another monster I summon Alpha The Magnet Warrior! Alpha The Magnet Warrior 1400 ATK DMC- Now are you finished? Genny- I play 1 face-down. Now you can go. DMC- Finally I summon Dark Emender in Attack mode! Dark Emender 1000 ATK. DMC- I love this card so much because It can attack you directly! Genny-Oh no!!! G-3000 Genny- That's all? DMC- I place 1 card face-down. Take a turn if you dare! [ Meanwhile in Itsuki's duel] Itsuki- I summon Royal Knight in attack mode. Royal Knight 1300 ATK. Itsuki- That will be all. DM- Laugh, Laugh. I Summon Blow magician. Blow Magician 1700 ATK. DM- I will now attack your Royal Knight. Itsuki- Crud! (monster destroyed) I-3700 DM- now I place 2 face-downs. Go Peasant. Itsuki- Who you calling a Peasant!!! [Meanwhile at Yukiko's Duel] Y-2100 DMG-3000 Yukiko- My move i summon Zombie Knight lv2. Zombie Knight lv2 800 ATK. DMG- You don't stand a chance against My Light summoner! Light Summoner 2200 ATK. Yukiko- Not now but I play level up! This will bring Zombie Knight lv2 to Zombie knight lv4! Zombie knight lv4 1900 ATK.Yukiko- I'll attack you with my Zombie knight! DMG- But my monster is 2200 ATK points! (Monster Destroyed) Y-1800 DMG- You know when Light summoner destroys a monster it's defense points come out of life points. Yukiko- I know! Y-300 Yukiko- Now your monster is weaker! DMG-what! Oh no! Light summoner 1700 ATK. DMG- What did you do to my monster?! Yukiko- When Zombie knight attacks a monster it loses 500 ATK points. DMG- No matter what Your gonna lose this duel. Yukiko-Nope I activate my 2 face-downs called Zombie hope and Zombie slash! Zombie hope brings a Zombie type monster back from the grave. I choose Zombie Knight lv4. Zombie Knight lv4 1900 ATK. DMG- So what happening with Zombie slash? Yukiko- It raises my Zombie's attack points by the difference between our life-points thats a 2700 ATK point boost. Zombie knight lv4 4600 ATK.DMG- 4600 attack points!!!!! Yukiko- Yes Indeed Now attack her summoner!!! (Monster Destroyed) DMG-100 Yukiko-How did that feel! I end my turn by playing 1 face down! Zombie Knight lv4 1900 ATK. DMG- Draw I play polymerization I fuse my Flame magician with Dark Magician to summon Black Flame Knight! Black flame Knight 3000 ATK. DMG- time for your demise. Attack her Zombie knight lv4! Yukiko- I activate my face-down called Draining shield! This negates your attack and adds that monster attack points to my life-points. Y-3300 DMG- No matter I play Rain of mercy this gives us both 1000 life-points . Y-4300.DMG-1100. DMG- Black flame Knight inflicts 1000 points of damage per turn to you. Yukiko- Not fair! Y-3300 [Mean while at Genny Duel] G-2600DMC-2600 Genny- Gilford shock his world! Electric pulse Slash!!! DMC- My rain magician will not get destroyed that easy I activate Magic Cylinder. This will reflect your attack back at you! Genny- Never I activate Mystical Space Typhoon Destroying your Trap! Now continue your attack Gilford!!! Gilford the Lightning 2800 ATK.Rain Magician 2400 ATK.(monster destroyed) DMC-2300 Genny- I end my turn. DMC- I play Ice Magician! Ice magician 1300 ATK.DMC- Now I play Staff of deception! this raises my Spellcaster's by 1500 for 1 turn. Ice magician 2800. Genny- Now they are tied! DMC- Attack Ice magician! Genny-You too Gilford! (Gilford Destroyed) Genny- What's the deal why was your monster not destroyed!? DMC-He can't be destroyed in battle. Genny- of course! DMC- I end my turn. Ice magician 1300 ATK. [Meanwhile in Itsuki duel] I-1500DM-2900 Itsuki- Kings knight destroy wonder magician!!! King's Knight 1600 ATK. Wonder magician 1200 ATK.DM-2500 Itsuki- How was that I end my turn. DM- I now sacrifice double magician to summon Dream magician. Dream magician 2600 ATK. DM- Now her knight! GO! (monster destroyed) Itsuki- Darn! I-500 DM- Almost done with you! Itsuki- I'm finished with you though. I know it is a cheap way to win but I play Life force drain! I give up half my life-points to play a trap! I activate Ring of demise this destroys a monster on your side of the field and inflict damage equal to monsters defense points. It only affects you though. DM- that make me lose!!! DM-0000 Itsuki- okay release Wong! Now dark paladin! (Wong was released from her chains) Wong - thanks Itsuki I owe you one. [Genny's duel] G-700DMC-1000 Genny- Exile force Attack him directly! Exile force 1000 ATK. DMC-0000 Genny- Alright released R.X Dark Paladin. (R.X was released from his chains) [Yukiko's duel] DMG-100Yukiko-300 Yukiko- Zombie knight lv8 Attack her Black flame Knight. Zombie Knight 3200 ATK Black flame Knight 3000 ATK. DMC-000 Yukiko- You know the deal Dark paladin! let Ray go! (Ray was released from his chain) DP- NO but how did you defeat my best officials in a duel?! Itsuki- We had a reason to defeat them and Travis is about to defeat you Dark Paladin! DP- We will surly find out. Travis- Lets go then. ( They activated there duel disk) Travis & Dark Paladin- DUEL!!! WILL Travis Beat Dark Paladin and save Kai find on the next episode of Yugioh GX- Battle's at Duel Academy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Very nice hahah! The Magicians bwaahahahahah!!!!Great idea john! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 You've done it again awesome chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Good man! It's long enough which gives lots of time for a good story development! Congrats! You have a gift in Fan-Fiction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Chapter 13 End of the tunnel Part 1Enjoy Travis- So shall I Start of off? DP- Sure. Travis-Time to break out my brand new deck I got before we came to this world. Draw!!! I Summon my E-Dragon Huntoro. E-Dragon Huntoro 1900 ATK. Travis- Next I'll add double summon. So I can special summon my Slayer Wolf! Slayer Wolf 1200 ATK.Travis- Now I end my turn. Genny- Why haven't I seen this deck. I'm his brother!!! Travis- Calm down Genny. So i didn't tell you is that a crime!? Genny- No I guess not. sorry for snapping at you. Travis- it's okay. Just enjoy the duel. DP- If you guys are finished. I need To begin my turn. I summon Magician's Valkyria in attack mode. Magician's Valkyria 1600 ATK. DP-next I'll place 2 card face-down. Now I'll attack your Slayer Wolf with my Magician's Valkyria! Go destroy his monster!!! (Monster Destroyed) T-3600 Travis- That is okay. DP- I End my turn. Travis- Now I play E-Dragon Elenagic in attack mode. E-Dragon Elenagic 1550 ATK. Travis-Now for his effect. I can destroyed 1 monster on the field when he is summoned. I choose you Magician's Valkyria!!! (Monster destroyed) Travis- Now I will attack you with Elenagic directly! DP- I activate 1 of my face-downs called Call of the haunted! this will bring my Magician's Valkyria to the field!Magician's Valkyria 1600 ATK. Travis- Man now I lose 50 life points. T-3550 Travis- Well I still have another attack. I'll attack your monster with my Huntoro! GO! DP-I activate Magic Cylinder! This will send your attack back at you!!! Travis- Ahh! T-1650 Wong- I'm not enjoying this to much. dark paladin has a huge lead in the duel. Travis- No worries guys I may be losing now but I'll make a come-back. R.X- You better. Travis- I End my turn. DP- Draw I summon Kings Knight in attack mode! King Knight 1600 ATK. DP- now I'll attack you with my Kings knight! Destroy his Elenagic! (monster destroyed) T-1600. DP- I end my turn. Travis- Now I draw! I sacrifice my Huntoro to summon E- Dragon Octovio!!! E- Dragon Octovio 2200 ATK. Travis- Now I'll play E- Dragon Seal! This spell give all E- dragon a 700 attack point boost! E- Dragon Octovio 2900 ATK. Travis- now I'll activate his effect. It decrease all monsters beside E dragons attack point by 600. DP- 600 attack thats a whole lot of points taken off. Travis- Yes it is. Kings knight 1000 ATK. Magician's Valkyria 1000 ATK. Ray- alright Travis is about to get a good lead in this duel. Genny- lets hope he keep this potential lead. Travis-now Attack his Magician's Valkyria Octavio!!! (monster destroyed) DP-2100 DP- wow i just lost a huge amount of life points! Travis- Now I just turned the tide of this duel. DP- oh on the contrary I still have more life points then you. Travis- Life points are not everything. I play 1 face-down and end my move. DP- Draw I play pot of greed I can now draw 2 cards. Next I'll summon Queens knight in attack mode!Queens knight 900 ATK. DP- Now I'll activate kings knight's effect. When both kings knight and queens knight are on the field I an allowed to special summon Jacks knight to the field from my deck. Now Come Jacks knight. Jacks knight 1300 ATK. Travis- what you gonna do you can't destroy my monster. DP- I'm gonna play swords of revealing light. this will keep you from attacking for 3 turn. By then you will have been defeated by me. Travis- sure. You realize you have yet to see my ace card. DP- Well bring it out. Travis- sure. DP- I end my turn. Travis- Draw I summon E- dragon Anteria in attack mode. E- dragon Anteria 2250 ATK. Travis- I end my turn. 2 turns left. DP- Draw I summon Skilled dark magician in attack mode. Skilled dark magician 1300 ATK. DP- Now I play Mystical space typhoon destroying your seal! Travis- oh no! (The seal was destroyed) E-Dragon Octovio 2200 ATK.E-Dragon Anteria 1650 ATK. Travis-that was my strongest spell card. DP- too bad now. I end my turn. Travis- I summon E dragon Spenpare in attack mode! E dragon Spenpare 1950 ATK. Travis now I play a 2nd pot of greed to draw 2 cards again. Then I end my turn. 1 turn left. DP- Draw time to get rid of the Octovio. I play Mage power. I equip it to my jacks knight. for every spell or trap card on the field the equiped monster gains 5000 Attack points!!! Yukiko-Oh no That card is one of the most powerful equip spells in the game!!! DP- I count 3 including Mage power So that is 1500 Atk point boost! Travis- OH MY GOD!!! Jack knight 2800 ATK DP- now destroy his Octavio!!! (Monster destroyed) Travis-1000 DP- now all my monster re gain their attack points that they lost. Skilled Dark magician 1900 ATK.Jack knight 3400 ATK.Queens knight 1500 ATK.kings knight 1600 ATK.Travis- okay this is bad! Skilled dark magician can now be sacrificed with 3 spell counters to summon Dark magician from my deck!!! Dark magician 2500 ATK. Genny- oh my we are actually seeing the great dark magician. Travis-umm... stop worshiping the magician and root me on. Genny- sorry. DP- Now Attack his Spenpare Dark magician. Go! (monster destroyed) T-450. Travis- that hurt!! Dp-I'll make it hurt more next turn. Will Travis survive this duel with dark paladin find out on the next episode of Yugioh GX- Battles at duel Academy. Episode 13 End of the tunnel part 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 awesome chapter can't wait to see who wins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Hey John, I just wanna say that your doing a good job and to keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 chapter 14 The end of the tunnel part 2.chapter 14 The end of the tunnel part 2. Travis's field.1 face downE- Dragon Anteria 1650 ATK3 card in hand Dark paladin's field.Dark magician 2500 ATK.Jack knight 3400 ATK.Queens knight 1500 ATK.kings knight 1600 ATK.2 cards in hand Life points:T-450.DP-2600. Travis- Alright time for the final turns. I sacrifice My Anteria to summon E- Dragon Deiadara in attack mode.E- Dragon Deiadara 2100 ATK. Travis- Next I'll attack your Queen's knight. I'll teach you a lesson for not switching you monsters to defense mode! (Monster destroyed) DP-1400 DP- You don't have the right to lecture me!!! Travis-I place 1 more card face down. DP- Draw I Sacrifice my Kings knight to summon an old favorite of mine. Dark Magician Girl!!! Dark magician Girl 2000 ATK. Travis- I always wanted to see her in person. DP- Well your gonna see her in action as well. I'll attack your E- Dragon Deiadara with Dark magician Go! Travis- Negate attack activate! This negates your attack and ends your battle phase. DP- I end my turn. Travis- Draw! I summon E- Dragon Narion in attack position. E- Dragon Narion 1700 ATK. Travis- Now I'll activate his effect I send 1 monster on my field to the grave and then I can draw 2 cards. I send Deiadara to the grave so I can get my 2 cards. DP- why did you send your one of your strongest dragons to the grave just to get 2 random cards. You have 3 cards in your hand now. I doubt that they are gonna help you. Travis- that is where you are wrong dark paladin. I got to wonderful cards. one of them is called E-dragon cycle. This spell brings an E-dragon back from the grave. DP- Oh No!! Genny- Oh yeah I know exactly what monster he is gonna get back. Travis- I don't think ya do Genny cuz I bring E- dragon Elenagic back to the field in attack mode!E-dragon Elenagic 1550 ATK. Yukiko- but why him! Travis- So I can activate his effect when he is summoned he can destroy 1 monster on my opponent side of the field. Genny- Now it make sense. DP- let me guess your gonna destroy dark magician? Travis- nope I gonna destroy Jacks knight. (monster destroyed) DP- You destroyed him because of Mage power. Travis- now your catchin on. Next I'll play your Special switch. This switches all monsters on your side of the field to defense mode and there position cannot be switched for 3 turns. Dark magician 2100 DEFDark magician girl 1700 DEF. Travis-Now for the cherry on top I play Mystic Wok. This spell add the attack or defense points of any monster on my field to my life-points. I choose Narion's Attack. T-2150. Ray- nice he brought his life points up. Travis- I end my turn. DP- Draw! okay since my monsters are rendered use less I'll sacrifice them both to summon my one of my strongest monster. Buster Blader!Buster Blader 2600 ATK. Genny- Travis is screwed. Buster Blader is like the Dragon Slayer of duel monster! DP- Correct Coven. cause for every Dragon on the opponents side of the field Buster Blader gains 500 ATK points. I count 2. (Also I know that Buster Blader's effect uses both the Graveyard and the field I only used the field because it would be less devastating.)Buster Blader 3600 ATK. Travis- OH CRAP!!! DP- Attack his Elenagic Buster blader! (Monster Destroyed) T-100 Buster Blader 3100ATK. Yukiko- oh no Travis is almost out of life points! Travis- I'm gonna end this duel next turn. Even though I'm in so much pain. DP- Try to stop me. I end my turn. Travis- Draw! I play my last pot of greed so I can draw 2 cards. Next I'll play E-Dragon Sagi in attack mode!E- Dragon Sagi 1300 ATK. Buster Blader 3600 ATK. Travis- Sagi's effect lets me add a field spell from my grave to my hand. (Gets E- Dragon Seal out of his Grave) Travis- next I'll play E- Dragon Seal giving all E- Dragons a 700 ATK point boost. E- Dragon Sagi 1900 ATK. E-Dragon Narion 1700 ATK. Travis- Now time for the final monster you will ever see. I will remove these 2 E-Dragons from the Grave in order to Special summon MY strongest monster E-Dragon Levacora!!! E- Dragon Levacora 3000 ATK. Travis- I can't forget to add the boost. E- Dragon Levacora 3700 ATK.Buster Blader 3100 ATK Ray- That's a whole lot of monster right there. Travis-Next I'll activate his effect. By sending the top 2 cards of my deck to the Graveyard My monster can attack twice this battle phase. Now attack his Buster blader get your revenge on that Dragon Slayer Dark claw Slash!!! (Monster Destroyed) DP-800 Travis- Now finish him off Levacora Dark Claw slash!!! DP-0000 Travis- Now release Kai from his chains. (Kai was released from his chains automatically) Kai- Thank you for saving me from that monster. Travis- No problem. Now lets get out of here. (Then suddenly the ground started to shake a huge rip appeared in the ground). Wong- whats happening!? R.X-I don't know but I don't like it. Travis- Guys look into the Rip It a portal. Genny- Maybe it will take us back to duel Academy!!! Itsuki- Lets jump in. (They all jumped into the portal not sure if they were going back to Duel Academy. When the portal was over they hit the ground hard and lifted there heads up). Travis- Guys were back to Duel Academy! Is the journey over for the gang find out on the next episode of Yugioh GX- Battle's At Duel Academy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 awesome,awesome,awesome this is your best chapter yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Very good. sorta like a plot twist lulz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 I second all of your motions!I love the battle! (*sigh*) DP should have used himself in that battle nut it's fine ^_^!These are great Chapters! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Chapter 15 R.X to the rescue!Chapter 15 R.X to the rescue! Travis-Come on guys let tell the Chancellor's about what happened come on. (Genny grabs Travis's Shoulder.) Genny- Do you think he is really going to believe us Travis? Wong- He's right. What happened to us was pretty unbelievable. Yukiko- think this through first. Travis- Then what are we gonna... Kai- WATCH OUT!!! (A Curse Of Dragon came swooping down at the teens they jumped to the ground). Ray- Here it comes again!!! (before the Dragon got them another Dragon knocked Curse of Dragon Back and Destroyed it). R.X- That was my blue eyes white Dragon that knocked it back. ???- So you stopped my attack! ( a very pale guy in a dark cape stood in front of the group). R.X- Yes. What you gonna do about? ???- I'm gonna defeat you in a duel. I heard of your encounter with Death Blossom. I'm am from the same clan as Death Blossom. We are called the Hyper riders. I myself am Dragonove#1. Genny- what do you mean #1? Dragonove#1- I'm only the first of the Dragonove's. There are 2. I'm a very weak duelist. but The real Dragonove is very strong. So You are in for a challenge when you meet him which will not be very soon. R.X- Alright then lets go. Travis- hurry and beat this dude so we can get to duel academy. R.X- Why don't you just go to duel academy I'll meet ya halfway. Kai- alright we will just don't lose. (They ran away to the academy) (They activated there duel disk) RX & Dragonove#1- Duel R-4000D-4000 RX- I'll start by summoning Armed Dragon lv3 in attack mode! Armed Dragon lv3 1200 ATK. Dragonove- are you done? RX- I place 2 face-downs. Go ahead Impatient. Dragonove- Draw. I summon Luster Dragon in attack mode. Luster Dragon 1900 ATK. Dragonove- Next I'll attack your Dragon! (The dragon was about to blow fire at Armed Dragon until a huge monster scared the Dragon away) Dragonove- What just happened here? RX- I activated Threating Roar. Ending your battle phase automatically. Dragonove- Whatever. I place 1 card face-down your move. RX- Time for me to shine. I now send my dragon to the grave to special summon my armed Dragon lv5 in attack mode!!! Armed Dragon lv5 2400. RX- Now I'll summon a mirage dragon in attack mode! Mirage Dragon 1600 ATK. Dragonove- Alright Now I'll activate my Just dessert trap card. this will inflict 500 points of damage to you for every monster on your field. (The trap was destroyed) Dragonove- How in hell did you do that?! RX- mirage dragon effect allowed you to not activate Traps during the battle phase. Dragonove- lucky. RX- Now I'll attack your dragon with my Armed Dragon! (Monster destroyed) D-3500 RX- Now I'll attack you directly with my Mirage Dragon. But before I do activate my facedown Dragon gain! this will give my monster an extra boost. How every many life points I'm gonna give up is added to his attack points. I'll give up 3900 life-points! RX-100 RX-so my monster gains 3900 extra attack points! Mirage Dragon 5500 ATK. RX- So now I'll attack you directly!!! D-0 (The guy decomposed into a pile of ashes.) RX- Okay now that was weird. Meanwhile... Travis- Okay guys were here. lets go in. (Someone was blocking the entrance) Ray- who is he? Genny- hey thats Thomas! Thomas White! Thomas- Guys I've been waiting for ya. We have to find another way in. Yukiko- But why? Thomas- If we walk in they are gonna challenge one of us to a duel. I saw what happened to them. They had lost there soul. Genny- Their Souls!!! Thomas- Chancellor Armstrong is in there he was taking hostage. Yukiko- We have to save him! Thomas- I know. But we have to get past them. Travis- Umm... why don't we duel them. Thomas- I had to wait for one of you. It's 2 in there. Travis- I'll duel with you. what do ya say? Thomas- Sure. I'll duel with you. Travis-well lets go. Itsuki- I hope they don't gonna lose. ( They walked through the door) what troubles await our heroes and what happened to RX?Find out on the next episode of Yugioh Battles at Duel Academy!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Good! i want to see whats next! ^_^ great chapters! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 bravisimo superb awesome chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 ^_^!!!VERY SPECTACULAR!!! HAHA! THE BATTLE OF THE DRAGONS!!!heheh! Dragonouv #1 was really pwned!!! ahhaha!!! great chapter john cn't wait for the next chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 Chapter 16 Dark riders release!Chapter 16 Dark riders release! ( They busted through the door with there determine faces on) Thomas- Let duel now so we can save our chancellor! Travis- Yeah lets go... uh where did the guards go?! Kai- they were here a second ago. Travis- Well lets continue to our chancellor. itsuki- Sounds good. (They walk on and on until they see someone in a white suit and were protecting a door.) Travis- Move along please. ???- I shall not move unless one of you duel me! Thomas- Some ones a little feisty. ???- My name is pride and I'm one of the Dark riders! Travis- Don't you mean Hyper riders? Pride- No Dark Rider have less experience in dueling then Hyper riders. But I have just enough to defeat any one of ya! Wong- How about me? Pride-You look like worth my time. Sure lets duel. Wong- Your gonna be sorry you ever challenged me! (They activated there duel disk). WOng & Pride- Lets duel! Pride- I'll begin by summoning Solar flare Dragon in attack mode! Solar Flare Dragon 1500 ATK. Pride- Next I'll add one heck of a spell called Dark room of nightmare! This Spell activates when you lose damage that is not Battle Damage you lose an extra 300 life points. Wong- Is that it? Pride- of course not. I now play pot of greed to draw 2 cards. Next I'll ad quick summon letting me summon another time. And looky at the card I'm gonna play UFO turtle in attack mode! UFO Turtle 1400 ATK. Pride- Now since it's my End phase you lose 500 life points thanks to Solar Flare Dragon! (A flame thrower hit Wong she fell to the ground) W-3500 Wong- Burning, Burning!!! Why is it actually burning! Pride- Your in a shadow game with a Dark Rider. Your not only gonna lose the duel your gonna lose your soul Also my other spell called Dark room of nightmare activates adding 300 extra points to your Downfall! (A DARK Ball hit Wong this time. She only stumbled). W-3200 Wong- your gonna have to do better then that to defeat me! Thomas- Oh yeah the Soul necklaces. Wong here catch! ( Thomas threw a necklaces with abnormal Writing.) Thomas- They are called Soul Necklaces and they will give you the power to hurt the opponent back! When he loses life points he gonna feel it as well. Pride- it's no matter I'll still defeat you easily. Wong- We shall see. Draw I summon Luster Dragon in attack mode! Luster Dragon 1900 ATK. Wong- Now I will allow you to feel the pain!!! Attack his UFO turtle. Go!!! (Monster Destroyed) P-3500 Pride- Now I can activate UFO turtle's ability. When he is Destroyed in battle I can special summon 1 fire type monster with 1500 attack points or less from my deck then I can shuffle. ( He scanned his deck and found the card he was looking for then he shuffled his deck). Pride- I choose my 2nd Solar Flare Dragon and I'll summon him here and now! Solar Flare Dragon 1500 ATK.Solar Flare Dragon 1500 ATK. Wong- No matter. I play 2 face-downs and end my turn. Pride- My draw I summon my Ultimate Baseball Kid in attack mode! Ultimate Baseball kid 500 ATK. Wong- What is that piece of crud gonna do? Pride- Defeat you. It's Special effect gives it 1000 extra attack points for every fire type monster on the field besides this monster. Wong- There are 2 others on the field! Pride- Nice counting. Now His attack points rise to 2500 ATK. Ultimate Baseball Kid 2500 ATK. Travis- oh this is so gonna hurt her! Pride- Now I'll attack your Dragon with my Kid Go! Wong- Ahh! (Monster Destroyed). W-2600. Wong- oh no I'm gonna lose!!! Pride-Thats right now My Dragon Attack her directly! Wong- Hasty little one are you not? I activate Magic Cylinder! This Reflects your attack back at you. Pride-uh oh! ahh! P-2000 Wong- Next I'll activate Draining Shield. This adds your monster attack points to my life points and negates your attack. Pride- I'm aware of that! W-3900 Pride- Well now I can activate there effects each of my dragons deal you 500 points of damage plus my dark room of nightmare help too. thats a total of 1300 damage coming straight to ya. Wong- Ahh! W-2600 Pride- I end my turn by playing a face-down. Wong- alright my move! I play Cyber Harpie lady in attack mode. Cyber Harpie lady 1800 ATK. Wong- Now I play Double Summon so I can summon another Luster Dragon. Luster Dragon 1900 ATK. Wong- Now I play the ritual spell card called Celestial calling! Now this duel can really begin. what is this Celestial calling gonna summon for Wong. Find out this and more on the next episode of Yugioh GX Battles at duel academy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 Wow!!!! This Chapter even has my favorite cards ultimate baseball kid and solar flare dragon! cards from "Blaze Of Destruction" Very good job! John!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 mna this is my fav 2 this is awesome man keep making the chapters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Now that I have returned from my China trip,I see that you have been working hard with your fanfic & I have bring to you a careful review of them.Ch.12:love the part with the Duel Spirits,but shocked that the best magicians of Yugi would be the "bad guys" (but why they didn't use their card)Ch.13-14:that duel reminds me of the duel between Jaden & the Gravekeeper's Chief (he didn't use his own card & DP's deck is a copy of Yugi's)Ch.15:amazing on how you put Dragonov as 2 beingsCh 16:thanks for showing my character at last!I would love to see what happens next. Advice: don't bring up surprises or plot twists so fast.In Ch.15,you should have waited until R.X. defeated Dragonov #1,then he explains the truth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 so many episodes brilliant idea and so popular Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Well thanks i had plenty of help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Let me see:there are 2 groups of antagonists (the Hyper Riders & the Dark Riders)So,can you explain the 2 teams'plans & how they are different from the other group? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Well Dark Riders are like the Students of Hyper Riders. There plans are just the same. There origin are exactly the same They were created by Sigurdur The Hyper Rider Leader. And that is pretty much all you need to know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPstaring07 Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 I love all 3 of the chaptrs. It reminds me of WATCHING the yu gi oh GX shows... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
john20412 Posted May 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 chapter 17 The first lostchapter 17 The first lost Pride's field... Solar flare Dragon 1500 ATK.Solar Flare Dragon 1500 ATK.Ultimate Baseball Kid 2500 ATK.Dark room of nightmare. Wong's field...Cyber Harpie lady 1800 ATK.Luster Dragon 1900 ATK.celstial calling. P-2000W-2600 Pride- So what thats spell card do? I'm dying to see. Wong- Don't be so happy. cause My Celestial Calling will be your down fall in this fight of ours. Pride- Show me what ya got! Wong- Alright I will. Celestial Calling allows me to summon a Celestial beast to the field. I send Luster Dragon and Cyber Harpie to the Graveyard in order to ritual summon an ancient force as powerful as Heaven itself breaks free into my service.From the Mountain of Buddha's Palm,I unleash thee, Celestial Beast Goku! Celestial Beast Goku 2700 ATK. Pride- What was with the speech to summon the monster? Wong- that is a habit of mine. Now to attack your monster. Go Goku destroy his ultimate baseball kid! (Monster Destroyed). P-1800. Wong- Now I play pot of greed so I can draw 2 cards of course we already know that. Now I'll activate his effect. I send 2 cards to my grave. For each of those cards My monster can attack you monsters. Go destroy them Goku! ( A big flaming barrier protected The Dragons0 Pride- Wow you forgot. Solar flare Dragon's 2nd effect if there is another pyro type monster on the field they will be protected in battle. So you cannot declare my dragons as attack targets. Wong- I end my turn. Pride- My turn Gaia Soul the Combustible Collective come to the field! Gaia Soul the Combustible Collective 2000 ATK. Pride-Now for his sweet effect I send both my Solar Flare Dragons to the graveyard and then my monster gain 1000 ATK points for each one. Do you count what I count cuzz I count 2. Thats 2000 extra attack points! Gaia Soul the Combustible Collective 4000 ATK. Travis- oh my God!!! Thomas- A level 4 monster that has 4000 Freaking attack points. it's unreal. Wong- Well you are not the one about to go head on with it!!! Pride- Now I attack your Goku with my Gaia! (Monster Destroyed) Wong- ahh!! W-1300 Pride- Now I'll play double reborn! This lets me summon 2 monster from my grave but I play 1000 life points for the monsters. I bring both my my Dragons back to the field P-800 Solar flare Dragon 1500 ATK.Solar Flare Dragon 1500 ATK. Pride- Now I have enter my end phase and that means the end of you cause you lose 1300 points. 1000 from both of my Solar flare Dragons and 300 from my Dark Room of Nightmare. W-0000 Wong- Guys... Please defeat... Him! ( She then decomposed into dust) Yukiko- Wong NO!!! Travis- Your gonna pay for what you have done! Thomas- and I'm gonna be the one to collect the bill Pride- Well your gonna have to catch me later cuzz I have to meet the master. Thomas- come back here!!! Kai- There is nothing we can do now. We lost her. Travis- This master is gonna pay dearly.I'll make sure of that. But for now lets just go through the door. ( They all walk through the white door it lead to a room that had crayon drawing all over the wall). Ray- I don't remember this room being in duel academy. Where did it come from? ???- It came from me. ( a little girl no more then 8 years old jumped from the ceiling of the room. she had a cheerful expression on her face) Itsuki- um who are you? ???- My name is Joy Faust and I'm a Dark Rider I'm also the daughterof the Hyper Rider Faust. I have come to destroy you guys. Yukiko- there is no way she is a Dark Rider There must be a age limit. Joy- Well my Dad is over 600 years old so i doubt that there is a age limit. Ray- Whoa 600 years old. how can you live for so long. Joy- He gave himself to Master Sigurdur. Kai- I'm tired of the this master person. Joy- Well enough about me. Lets get this duel on the road. Who will volunteer? Kai- I'll duel her. Joy- wonderful. Now lets begin. Thomas- guys wait take this Soul necklace it will protect you and give you the power to compete in a Shadow duel. Matter of fact why don't you all take them. (Everyone took a necklace) Thomas-Armstrong gave them to me. Kai- Alright Here goes a duel. Kai & Joy- Duel! J-4000K-4000 Joy- Me 1st. I summon Sonic Duck in attack mode! Sonic Duck 1700 ATK. Joy- Next I'll add 1 face-Down. Time for you to go. Kai- Alright I draw. I summon The Six Samurai - Nisashi in attack mode. The Six Samurai - Nisashi 1400 ATK. Kai- Now I add the equip spell called Black pendent. A oldie I know but a goodie. It raises my monsters attack points by 500. The Six Samurai - Nisashi 1900 ATK. Kai- Now I'll attack your Sonic Duck! Joy- So predictable I activate Sakuretsu Armor. this card destroys the attacking monster. Kai- Like I was not expecting that. I play samurai rebirth. This brings back The Six Samurai - Nisashi in attack mode. The Six Samurai - Nisashi 1400 ATK. Kai- also when the monster equipped with black pendent is destroyed you lose 500 life points. J-3500. Joy- no matter are you finished with your turn? Kai- I place 1 card face down and thats all she wrote. Joy- Draw! I summon Harpie Lady 1 in attack mode. Harpie Lady 1 1300 ATK. Joy- Now I'll attack Your Nisashi with Sonic duck. (Monster destroyed). K-3700 Joy- Now I'll attack you with Harpie Lady! Kai- I activate Return of the Six Samurai. This will bring The Six Samurai - Nisashi back to the field but he will return to the grave at the end of my turn next turn. The Six Samurai - Nisashi 1400 ATK. J-3400 Joy- Hmm... I play 1 face down. Your turn. Kai- Alright I now summon Grandmaster of the Six Samurai in attack mode. Grandmaster of the Six Samurai 2100 ATK. Joy- um... how are you able to do that without a sacrifice? Kai- it's an effect. when there is another Six Samurai monster on the field i can special summon this monster. Joy- aw man this duel is turning in his favor I got to turn this around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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