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good chapters' date='I knew a natural when I see one.Though,I saw 1 error-the spell card Dark Magic Attack does not do burn damage,only destroy 1 spell/trap. (for more info on cards,please check yugioh.wikia)

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I like the show and this fan fic but there were more then just that one mistake. Command Knight only powers up monsters by 400 points. Also if another warrior monster is on the field it cannot be attacked.

 

Another mistake is that monster reincarnation requires you to discard a card from your hand. Also you activate a hero emerges when the monster attacks, not after. Also you got buster bladers ability wrong. He gains 500 attack points for each dragon on your opponents side of the field and in the graveyard of your opponent. But I geuss you covered that

 

And also one small thing from c.6 gilford the legend can only be flip/normal summoned. his ability doesnt allow him to be special summoned.

 

I am only at chapter 6. so I just want to tell you I am only pointing out minor errors. But just because I am pointing out your errors doesnt mean I think its bad. From what I've read Ill know Ill love the whole thing. Also when is it placed cronilogically to the original gx, I'd like to know.

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Chapter 19 the confrontation (part II)

 

Kai and LOD (Lord of Dragons)- Duel!

 

K-4000.

LOD-4000.

 

Itsuki and MS (Magical Scientist)- Duel

 

I-4000.

MS-4000.

 

Travis and DG (dark Grepher)- Duel!

 

T-4000.

DG-4000.

 

Travis- Duel to me please. I play E-Dragon Sagi in attack mode!

 

E-dragon Sagi 1300.

 

Travis- my monster has a pretty rare effect if you ask me. When he is normal summoned I can add a field spell from my deck to my hand. I choose my E-Dragon seal! Now I'll play E-dragon Seal! This gives all E-Dragon monsters a 700 ATK point boost!

 

E-dragon Sagi 1900 ATK.

 

DG- That a nice little combo you played just now.

 

Travis- that complement meant nothing to me. Now I'll place 2 face-downs. You can take the duel.

 

DG- Draw I summon Light Astra in attack mode!

 

Light Astra 1700 ATK.

 

DG- Now it's effect is pretty rare if ya ask me too. every dragon on the field give my Light Astra a 300 attack point boost.

 

Light Astra 2000 ATK.

 

Travis- man you already have a 2000 attack point monster on the field! This duel is not gonna be easy.

 

DG- Now I'll play heavy storm to destroy all the spell and trap on the field.

 

Travis- Damn! Not my Seal!

 

( E-Dragon seal was destroyed along with negate attack and draining shield)

 

E-dragon Sagi 1300.

 

Travis- those were some good traps.

 

DG- And this attack, will be a good attack for me that is. Light Astra attack his Sagi!!!

 

(Monster destroyed).

 

T-3300.

 

Light Astra 1700 ATK.

 

Travis- Uhh that kinda hurt.

 

DG- Now I'll end my turn.

 

Travis-(Thinking) I better get my game on for real or I will never get my game on again.

 

( To Kai's Duel)

 

LOD- I'll begin. I play Armed fighter in attack mode!

 

Armed Fighter 1400 ATK.

 

LOD- now I play 2 face-downs!

 

Kai- is that all.

 

LOD- for now that is.

 

Kai- well time for me to get to work I play Six Samurai - Irou in attack mode!

 

Six Samurai - Irou 1700 ATK.

 

Kai- Now I can special summon my Grandmaster of the six samurai since I have another Six samurai on the field!

 

Grandmaster of the six samurai 2100 ATK.

 

Kai- now I'll attack your Armed Fighter!! GO Irou!

 

(Monster destroyed).

 

LOD-3700.

 

Kai- Now I'll attack you with my Grandmaster!

 

LOD- Activating trap card Armed Spirit. You lose damage equal to my monster attack points that you just destroyed.

 

Kai- Thats a crap load of life-points.

 

(A armor knife went through Kai).

 

Kai-AHHHHH!

 

K-2600

 

Kai- I still attack you with Grandmaster of the... Six Samurai!!

 

LOD- I think not! I activate Armor life! this brings back a armor monster that was just destroyed! lets go Armor Fighter!

 

Armed Fighter 1400 ATK.

 

Kai- well I'll still destroy your monster!

 

(Monster destroyed).

 

LOD-3300.

 

Kai- I end my turn.

 

(To Itsuki's duel)

 

Itsuki's field.

Queen knight 1500 ATK.

1 face-down.

 

Magical scientist's field.

Magician blocker 2300 DEF.

 

MS-4000.

I-2900.

 

Itsuki- you are no challenge to me.

 

MS- You must have not glanced at the score board.

 

MS-4000.

I-2900.

 

MS- According to it I'm wining.

 

Itsuki- it's not always about life points! I play royal summon I send kings knight, jacks knight and queens knight to the graveyard create Dark knight of the black castle.

 

Dark knight of the black castle 4000 ATK

 

Itsuki- Now I deplete my life points to 100 first of all.

 

I-100

 

Itsuki- then my monster can attack you directly!!!

 

MS- You really think that cheap way to win would work on me! I activate magic cylinder! this reverses your attack back at ya!

 

Itsuki- I think not I activate dust tornado this destroys your trap.

 

MS- I can now send magical blocker to the grave to block your attack.

 

Itsuki- Alright this is really getting annoying.

 

our heroes seem to be having some trouble with the duel spirits. See how it all come out on the next episode of Yugioh GX- Battles at duel Academy.

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Chapter 20 the confrontation (part III)

( To Travis's duel)

T:2000

E-Dragon Narion 1700 ATK.

1 face-down.

DG:4000

Nothing.

 

Travis-(Thinking) well it's his turn and he still has the upper hand in the duel so I got to change my luck before I lose.

 

DG- Alright I play cost down! So now all monsters in my hand are downgraded 2 levels! I just have to discard 1 card!

 

(Dark Grepher discarded Buster Blader to the grave).

 

DG-now I summon my Dark Astra to the field!

 

Dark Astra 2200 ATK.

 

DG- Next Dark Astra Lets me summon a warrior type monster from my grave to the field! I choose my Buster Blader I just sent to the graveyard!

 

Travis- oh man Buster Blader thats gonna be a hell of a monster to fight!

 

Buster Blader 2600 ATK.

 

DG- Now I'll activate his effect every Dragon type monster in the graveyard and the field give him 500 extra Attack points! I count 2 so thats 1000 attack points!!!

 

Buster Blader 3600 ATK.

 

DG- NOW Buster Blader attack his Narion!!!

 

(Monster Destroyed)

 

T:100

 

Travis- AHHHH!!!... man that kinda sucks.

 

DG- You shall not make it out of this duel alive Travis.

 

Travis- Oh I beg to differ. I activate my face-down legendary shield!

 

DG- What is that?

 

Travis- Allow me to explain... When I lose over 1500 life-points in one turn I can summon 2 monsters from my grave to my field.

 

DG- thats all?

 

Travis- I wasn't finished! those chosen monsters are also granted 1000 more attack points. I bet you can guess my cards? E-Dragon Narion and E-Dragon Sagi!

 

E-Dragon Narion 1700 ATK.

E-Dragon Sagi 1300 ATK.

 

Travis- you also know that Sagi's effect lets me add a field spell from my grave. I add my E-Dragon Seal!

 

E-Dragon Narion 2700 ATK.

E-Dragon Sagi 2300 ATK.

 

DG- Well I end my turn with one face-down.

 

Travis-Okay then I play E- Dragon Anteria in attack mode!

 

E-Dragon Anteria 1650 ATK.

 

Travis-Now I'll play my Seal to give all E-dragons a 700 ATK point boost!

 

E-Dragon Sagi 3100 ATK.

E-Dragon Narion 3400 ATK.

E-Dragon Anteria 2350 ATK.

Buster Blader 4100 ATK.

 

DG- oh no this is bad not!!!

 

Travis- I now attack your Dark Astra with Narion GO!!!

 

(Monster destroyed).

 

DG:2800

 

Travis- alright now I activate Narion's effect. I send Anteria to the grave then i can draw 2 cards.

 

(Monster destroyed).

 

DG- you better hope you get some good cards.

 

Travis- oh boy did i I. I 'm gonna end this duel too. I play double summon so now I sacrifice my 2 dragons to summon my ace dragon. Lets go E-Dragon levacora!!!

 

E-dragon levacora 3700 ATK.

Buster Blader 4600 ATK.

 

DG- Your only powering up my Buster Blader I hope you understand that.

 

Travis-yeah I'm gonna change all of that soon. I play 1 face-down. Your up now.

 

DG- Alright time to release the pain. I now send my Buster Blader to the graveyard to summon my trump monster... Appear Beowulf The Dragon Slayer!!!

 

Beowulf The Dragon Slayer 3000 ATK.

 

DG- Hows that for a monster!

 

Travis-It's okay...

 

DG- OKAY,OKAY,OKAY!!!I'll show you how OKAY It can be!!! It's effect give him 800 Extra attack points for every Dragon type on the field and in the Graveyard!

 

Beowulf The Dragon Slayer 5400 ATK.

 

DG- Now I'll destroy levacora With my Dragon Slayer!!!

 

Travis- I activate my face-down called Enchanted Javelin!!! now your monsters attack points are added to my life points then the damage is subtracted!

 

DG-Beowulf continue your attack!

 

(Monster Destroyed)

 

T:5500

T:3800

 

Travis- Man it feels good to be leading the duel right now in Life points.

 

DG- Don't get comfy cause you coming right out of that spot.

 

Travis-yeah and who's gonna stop me?

 

DG- Just wait and see. I end my turn.

 

Travis- alright time for me to go. Draw! I play E-Dragon Huntoro in Defense mode!

 

E-Dragon Huntoro 2100 DEF.

Beowulf The Dragon Slayer 6200 ATK.

 

Travis- I play pot of greed next So I get 2 cards. Next I play 2 face-downs. Your move.

 

DG- Alright I'll attack Huntoro with Beowulf Go!!!

 

Travis- I activate my face-down called Shadow Spell! Now Your monster loses 700 attack points also it can't attack as long as this card is on it. also it's position cannot be changed. How's that for a trap.

 

Beowulf The Dragon Slayer 5500 ATK.

 

DG- I still have one strong monster.

 

Travis- That alright. You done with your turn yet?

 

DG- I play 1 face-down.

 

Travis- Cool I draw I play E- Dragon Elenagic in attack mode!

 

E- Dragon Elenagic 2250 ATK.

Beowulf The Dragon Slayer 6300 ATK.

 

Travis- Now my monster can destroy 1 monster on your side of the field when he is summoned.

 

DG-oh no my Dragon Slayer!!!

 

Travis- get rid of this pain Elenagic!

 

(Monster Destroyed)

 

DG- My Dragon Slayer!!!!

 

Travis- now it's time to end this! I switch my Huntoro to attack mode.

 

E-Dragon Huntoro 2600 ATK.

 

Travis-Then Elenagic attack him directly!

 

DG- I activate nutrients Z! This trap activates when I'm about to lose over 2000 life points I gain 4000 then The damage is subtracted!

 

DG-6800

DG-5000

 

Travis- Man how would you ever guess you would need that card?

 

DG- Just plain Luck I guess.

 

Travis- Well time for my 2nd attack go Huntoro!

 

DG-2400

 

Travis- I now End my turn.

 

DG-I Lost...

 

Travis- What? You still have 2400 Life points left. Are you giving up?

 

DG- Yes. I can't beat you without my Dragon Slayer.

 

Faust- Uhh!!! I will now vanquish you to the Shadow realm now you traitor.

 

(Then Faust waved his hand and Dark Grephor turned into shadow's).

 

T-3800

DG-0000

 

(Meanwhile at kai's duel)

 

K-1800.

LOD-3600.

 

Kai - I summon Six Samurai Yariza in attack mode...

 

Faust- That last battle just ruined it for me so I'll ruin it for you 2!

 

( Lord of Dragon and Magical Scientist turned into Shadows at the same time).

 

Itsuki- Hey whats the Big Idea?

 

Kai- Dude this is the 2nd time you

 

Faust- I'm ready to duel one of you.

 

Kai- So how will you choose?

 

Faust- Simple the one with the most power. I choose your friend Thomas!

 

Travis- Thomas, but how he's not here.

 

Faust- I beg to differ.

 

(Then Thomas came from a trap door tied in ropes also Ray, Yukiko, and Genny came up in the same way).

 

Travis- guys!!!

 

Faust- So here's how this is gonna work; I gonna duel Thomas. If he loses I get his Soul Necklace. Deal If you win you get your freedom.

 

Thomas- I guess you give me no choice. I accept.

 

(Thomas was released from his ropes)

 

Genny- cool Magical ropes.

 

(They both activated there duel disk)

 

Faust & Thomas- Duel!

 

(Meanwhile)...

 

Sigurdor- Tobias get me Oke.

 

Tobias-Sir yes Sir.

 

Sigurdor- tell him that he's next.

 

Exactly what does Sigurdor mean when he says Oke "is next"? And who will win between Thomas & Faust? Find out on the next episode of Yugioh GX-battles at duel academy!

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after so long of a wait' date='I could finally see how things go by now.

I don't really like how Grepher just gave up & Faust had to dispose of the others.

But, he'll be duelling & I'm excited by it.

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I'm sorry that you didn't like that but in chapter 21 is Awesome i'm almost done with it.

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Chapter 21 The Codex Master (part I)

 

T-4000

F-4000

 

Thomas- I'll start. By summoning Electric Rose in attack mode!

 

Electric Rose 1500 ATK.

 

Thomas- Next I'll add 2 Face-downs. Lets see what you got.

 

Faust- Alright. I'll start with Sinful Rune- Envy!

 

Yukiko- Oh no. this is bad. He play with dark monsters and Codex cards. once he uses all 7 there will be no stopping him from summoning Megiddon the Dragon of Armageddon.

 

Travis- So this is bad for Thomas?

 

Yukiko- Could be. depending on how he plays.

 

Faust- what this spell does is let me summon a monster with either the same attribute , ATK, DEF, or level. I choose to summon Pitch black Warwolf! He has the same level.

 

Pitch-Black Warwolf 1600 ATK.

 

Faust- Next I'll add a little card to it called Serial Spell. Now this activates when I play a normal spell. I send my hand to the grave then this card becomes that normal spell.

 

Thomas- oh man a 2nd Envy!

 

Faust- Yes now I choose from my deck a monster with the same level again. I choose Shadowpriestess of Ohm in attack mode!

 

Shadowpriestess of Ohm 1700 ATK.

 

Faust- Now pitch black Warwolf attack his Electric Rose!

 

Thomas- I think not I activate a trap cal...

 

Faust- Traps cannot be activated on your side of the field during the battle phase as long as this card is on the field.

 

Thomas- oh no!

 

(Monster Destroyed)

 

T-3900

 

Faust- now Shadowpriestess of Ohm attack him directly!!!

 

Thomas- ugh!

 

T-2200

 

Genny- uh a bad start don't ya think?

 

Thomas- not helping Genny!

 

Faust- now I activate Shadowpriestess of Ohm special ability. I send 1 dark monster on my side of the field to the grave and you lose 800 extra attack points!

 

Thomas- Excuse me?!

 

Faust- I send my pitch black Warwolf to the Grave to activate Shadowpriestess of Ohm effect.

 

(Monster Destroyed).

 

Thomas-AHHHHH!!!

 

T-1400

 

Genny- Really bad start!

 

Thomas- Shut up Genny!!!

 

Genny- Sorry.

 

Faust- I end my turn at that.

 

Thomas- finally. My Draw! I play pot of Greed to draw 2 cards. Next I play 2 face-downs then I add Emergency Provisions. I send all but 1 face-down to the Grave. and for each one I gain 1000 life points for each one. so thats 3000 life-points!

 

T-4400

 

Thomas- next I summon poison Fly Trap in attack mode!

 

Poison Fly Trap 1600 ATK.

 

Thomas- Next I add a pesticide Spray! This give a plant type monster on my field a 1000 attack point boost for 1 turn. But heres the bad part I lose my monster the next turn.

 

Poison Fly Trap 2600 ATK.

 

Faust- thats pretty good.

 

Thomas- Thanks now Poison Fly Trap attack his Shadowpriestess of Ohm!

 

(Monster Destroyed).

 

F-3100

 

Thomas- Now Poison Fly Trap's ability activate when he destroys a monster in battle you lose an extra 500 Life-points

 

F-2600

 

Thomas- Now I end my turn.

 

Poison fly Trap 1600 ATK.

 

Faust- Alright I draw I play Sinful Rune- Greed. I can now Draw 3 card but if they are spell or traps I lose 300 points for each.

 

(Faust drew his cards)

 

Faust- I got 2 spells. So I lose 600 life points.

 

F-2000

 

Faust- Next I play Emissary of the Afterlife in attack mode!

 

Emissary of the Afterlife 1600 ATK.

 

Faust- next I play 1 face-down. your move.

 

Thomas- Okay I draw. Now my poison Fly Trap is destroyed.

 

(monster destroyed).

 

Thomas- now I play Monster Reborn to being back my Fly Trap!

 

Poison Fly Trap 1600 ATK.

 

Travis- I wonder why he brought that plant back?

 

Thomas- Now I sacrifice my monster to summon Cyber tulip!

 

Cyber Tulip 2300 ATK.

 

Thomas- now I'll attack your Emissary of the Afterlife!

 

(Monster destroyed)

 

F-1300.

 

Faust- I activate my face-down. called Sinful Rune- Wrath. Now when a monster that I control is destroyed in battle the monster that destroyed it is destroyed then I can summon a monster that is a higher level then the monster that destroyed my Monster.

 

Thomas- Well there goes Cyber Tulip.

 

(Monster Destroyed).

 

Faust- Now I summon a monster that is not very common I choose from my deck Belial - Marquis of Darkness!!!

 

Belial - Marquis of Darkness 2800 ATK.

 

Thomas- oh thats a strong monster.

 

Thomas- I end my turn. (Thinking) My face-down Life force should protect me.

 

Faust- my move! I play Sinful rune- Pride. I'll equip it to Belial - Marquis of Darkness. He is no longer effected by spell, traps or monster effects. Also when this card is Destroyed the equipped monster is destroyed as well.

 

Thomas- Man your monster is kinda unbeatable along with his effect that I can't target anything but him.

 

Faust- yes he is.

 

Thomas- well it's just more of a challenge for me.

 

Faust- Okay now Belial - Marquis of Darkness attack him directly!!!

 

Thomas- I activate Life Force!

 

Genny- alright cool card!

 

Thomas- Now I can negate your attack as long as I give up 400 life points. So now I give up 400 life points to Negate your attack.

 

T-4000

 

Faust- Hmm... I end my turn.

 

Thomas- Alright I Draw! I summon Iron Magnolia in attack mode.

 

Iron Magnolia 1300 ATK.

 

Thomas- I end my move now.

 

Faust- Alright I play Fiend plan. This turns 1 monster into a fiend. I choose Belial - Marquis of Darkness. Next I play 1 face-down then attack Iron Magnolia!

 

Thomas- Life Force activate!

 

T-3600

 

Faust- I end my turn.

 

Thomas- cool I summon leaf samurai in attack mode!

 

Leaf Samurai 1400 ATK.

 

Faust- I activate my Quick-play spell called Sinful Rune- Sloth. When a monster is summoned this card switches that monster to Defense mode for 6 turns. and you can't Switch his position.

 

Leaf Samurai 700 DEF.

 

Thomas- Now I end.

 

Faust - I draw and play sinful rune- Gluttony!

 

Travis- Whats that do?

 

Faust- I now get to put 1 gluttony counter on Belial - Marquis of Darkness he gain 200 attack points for each. When He has 5 counters on him he gets Destroyed.

 

Belial - Marquis of Darkness 3000 ATK.

 

Faust- Now Belial - Marquis of Darkness attack his Magnolia!

 

Thomas- Life Force! activate.

 

T:3200.

 

Faust- I End with a face-down. I'll Leave it at that.

 

Thomas- Alright time for my Trump card to come out and Shine. I sacrifice my 2 monsters to summon Master Plant in attack mode.

 

Master Plant 2800 ATK.

 

Genny- Not Strong enough!

 

Thomas- Will you shut up!!! Master Plant can destroy all Spells and Traps on My opponents side of the field. So your 3 cards are gone. And for every one Destroyed he gains 100 ATK points.

 

Master Plant 3100 ATK

Belial - Marquis of Darkness 2800 ATK.

 

Thomas- Now Master Plant Attack his Belial - Marquis of Darkness

 

(Monster Destroyed).

 

F:1000

 

Faust- Thank you Thomas. Now I can release my Dragon onto the field!

 

Yukiko- Oh no thats the Dragon I told you guys about earlier. He gonna release it!

 

Thomas- I end my turn.

 

Faust- I have drawn the card I need for my Codex Combo! I now Play Sinful Codex! When there are 7 different Sinful Rune in my Graveyard I can send this card to the Graveyard to summon Megiddon the Dragon of Armageddon!!!

 

Megiddon the Dragon of Armageddon 5000 ATK.

 

Kai- now thats a terrifying creature!

 

( The Dragon was 10 feet tall and was Black Body and a White tail. The Tail had spikes on it and the Dragon was huffing smoke in and out).

 

Faust- Now Megiddon the Dragon of Armageddon attack his Master Plant!!!

 

Thomas- activating Life Force!

 

T:2800.

 

Faust- I now end my turn.

 

Thomas-I'm gonna have to try hard to get rid of that Dragon or else it will get rid of me!

 

It seems that Thomas is in a very bad situation can he make it out alive? find out on the next Episode of Yugioh- Battle at Duel Academy!

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