Gogeta™ Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 [/img] [/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 you should put quotes around "Supernova", write "players" not player add a space between "can'tbe" and change can't to "cannot" capitalize "Life Points"_______ you wrote "filed", but it should have been "field"and im pretty sure that it needs to be "Card Name"_______ im pretty sure thats all the fixes that need to be made, maybe switch around the ocg a bit..... pretty good cards! and better yet, you could add a rainbow life to this card combo to gain 2500 where as your opponent loses 2500! 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Red Giant needs to be "quotation marks""Red Giant" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 nice card not much more to say except improve your OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 Overpowered. Not only that but highly situational and OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Overpowered. Not only that but highly situational and OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GordieKat Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 No level 1 monster can have 2500 DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 serious grammatical errors detected Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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