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Bloodrun Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 ok its face-upBlue-Eyes White Dragon, needs to be like this "Blue-Eyes White Dragon"and Special Summon is capitalized >_>and when you write a number in a card effect, it must be in numerical form, 1 not one. and from in your last card, is not capitalized >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 overpowered and OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kennethih Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Theese cards are WAY too powerful...But nice Idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Did you just actually make a Level 3 monster with 3000 DEF? I suggest you rethink your balance of what is and isn't overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma Zero Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Few quick points. 1. You do realize that on almost every card you've made up until this point...you've misspelled "field", right?2. There are too many BEWD tricks as is, IMHO, so you should devote this kind of attention to something that doesn't have as much support like, off the top of my head, Cosmo Queen or Gogiga Gagagigo. Just a thought. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarqRaven Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Being a BEWD fan myself, I understand your passion for monster. But your first card does not make sense. Personally I would say "If you do NOT have a Blue-Eyes White Dragon on the field, then Special Summon 1 Blue-Eyes White Dragon from your Hand or Deck." I would also add this line. "You can not attack the same turn you Special Summon, Blue-Eyes White Dragon." I do not see anything wrong with the Spell Card. Yes it gets the BEWD out faster, but only to your hand. Not onto the field. Now on the Trap Card, I think that is too powerful. Being both a fast effect card and bringing another Blue-Eyes out. Personally I would make it only if you had two BEWD's out. And keep the "You can not attack the same turn Blue-Eyes is Summoned." You see this way your playing into the TRUE Legend of the BEWD, Kaiba's Ultimate Blue-Eyes! Otherwise it is nothing but a repeat of the Spell Card. Also I like the art on the last 2 cards... I think the first one needs something more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 u repeatedly mispelled fieldthere r no quickplay trap cardssome of them r overpoweredur OCG needs work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Few quick points. 1. You do realize that on almost every card you've made up until this point...you've misspelled "field"' date=' right?2. There are too many BEWD tricks as is, IMHO, so you should devote this kind of attention to something that doesn't have as much support like, off the top of my head, Cosmo Queen or Gogiga Gagagigo. Just a thought. ;)[/quote']Enigma is right. You should not make more support cards for him since he has tons. You should make it for other monsters like Gogiga Gagagigo (Cosmo Queen does have support cards) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Still Grammar errors in the last card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
302930 Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 like the cards but theres no such thing as a quickplay trap card and your dragon egg is overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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