My 6 first cards (updated, decent quality)

[Tsukiten]

When I first saw the forum name "Realistic Cards", I knew I could put up some pretty decent cards there. I started doing this YCM thing only a few hours ago and here are my first 5 attempts at "Realistic Cards" :P

 

(The name of the card set is "1st Tsukiten Series" btw)

 

There you go!

A some feedback/ratings would be very nice! :D Thank you.

 

Edit:I now have changed the grammar and effects on all the cards slightly and included a sixth card. Also I have included all the sources I have found on the card's picture.

Thank you for your feedbacks! :D I appreciate it

[Guest KAJN]

I would suggest that you work on your OCG(Official Card Grammar). Anyway I can help just give me some time to think about your effects.

[Tsukiten]

I would suggest that you work on your OCG(Official Card Grammar). Anyway I can help just give me some time to think about your effects.

 

Yeah I have dozens of cards lying around here right now to figure out how the card grammar is supposed to be and this is the most accurate I could get... :|

Anyway thank you for your feedback!

[Chevalier]

OCG errors. Some pictures needed to be better. Not bad for your first cards. Good effort.

[Parting Shot]

According to Realistic section rules, you need to post a disclaimer or artist credit/link for the images used on your cards.

[Guest KAJN]

Card #1: Activate this card when a monster on your field attacks. Increase the ATK of the of the selected monster by 500 until your end phase of this turn.

 

Card #2: You can activate this card when a monster on your field is being attacked. Increase the selected monsters DEF by 500 points until the end phase of this turn. You must also skip your next Draw Phase.

 

Card #3: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, activate 1 of the following effects:

• Flip this card into face-down Defense Position, return 1 card on your opponents field to his/her hand.

• Select 1 random card in your opponents hand, return the selected card to the top of his/her Deck.

Card #4: Select 1 Tributed monster in your Graveyard, remove it from play. Special Summon the selected card after the 2nd turn this card was activated.

 

Hope I Helped.

[Skuldur]

you need to work on your OCG and some of the pics are too simple

 

but they're good for your first cards

[Tsukiten]

Card #1: Activate this card when a monster on your field attacks. Increase the ATK of the of the selected monster by 500 until your end phase of this turn.

 

Card #2: You can activate this card when a monster on your field is being attacked. Increase the selected monsters DEF by 500 points until the end phase of this turn. You must also skip your next Draw Phase.

 

Card #3: Once per turn' date=' during your Main Phase, activate 1 of the following effects:

• Flip this card into face-down Defense Position, return 1 card on your opponents field to his/her hand.

• Select 1 random card in your opponents hand, return the selected card to the top of his/her Deck.

Card #4: Select 1 Tributed monster in your Graveyard, remove it from play. Special Summon the selected card after the 2nd turn this card was activated.

 

Hope I Helped.

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Hmmm...Why did you redo my effects? :| I don't think that is really needed but thank you for your effort anyways =)

I'll try to find more card examples to improve my OCG on these cards and I'll put the source up for the pictures of my cards.