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Granz Family - Dance Of Spears


RickiMinaj

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You can only activate this card when a "Granz" monster you control is destroyed by battle. Special Summon 1 "Diablo Es Matador Granz" or 1 "Diablo Es Fiero Rey Granz" from your hand or Deck. As long as this card remains in your Graveyard, all battle damage of 1000 or higher you receive involving a "Granz" monster becomes 1000. If a "Granz" monster is removed from play, remove this card from your Graveyard from play. As long as this card is removed from play, during your Standby Phase, discard 1 card from your hand (This is not optional).[/align]

 

My newest Aid for the Granz cards

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I believe that it is wise to place the period in the last sentence before the parenthesis. Example :

... from your hand. (This is not optional)

Overall' date=' you did an excellent job! You have a few punctuation errors, but you made a great effort! Keep up the good work!

 

-Glasstin[img']http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee204/glasstin10/emo-fish.gif[/img]

 

glasstin is right

 

also

 

in your alst sentence

it shouldnt

as long as this card is removed from play

 

it should, while this card is removed from play

 

"as long as" would be used if you have an effect that follows it, such as:

"discard 1 card from your hand to add 1 card from your Deck to your hand.

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