The Dark Master Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 [align=center]I was looking at my monarch cards... And was thinking... These could be used in a somewhat similar zone to Rainbow Dragon... So I decided to improve on the monarchs, which seem to have been abandoned by Konami [not including new structure deck]... So this is the King of the Monarchs... He is Dark and Light because in dedication of the 2 most powerful monarchs [in my opinion]... Thanks for looking... NOTE: THE NEWER ONE IS BELOW IT [image Discloser - I do not own this image, I only use it to increase the quality of my work. I have had this image for a long time and I do not know who it is by. Thanks] The effect incase you can't read...: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play from your Graveyard 6 different cards that have "Monarch" in their name. While this card is face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot attack any other monsters then this card. This card's attribute is also treated as LIGHT. The New One: effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play from your Graveyard 6 different cards that have "Monarch" in their name. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy or remove from play 1 monster on the field. While this card is face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot attack any other monsters then this card. This card's attribute is also treated as LIGHT. This card also cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 a little overpowered. but its ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma Zero Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Honestly, if it's supposed to be the Monarch's Rainbow Dragon...it's actually a tad underpowered. Take a look at Rainbow Dragon and what it can do for all the trouble involved with getting it on the field...then realize this thing needs 6 different level 6 monsters to summon. Might want to think about adding a little more zing to the effect. The other thing that bothers me about this card is mostly opinion. Clever mispellings of the word bright are getting kind of old. Also, the word 'king' is getting that way too. How about trying to spice up the name to something a little more unique? Something like... -Monarch Titan - Derk-Derk the Monarch Overlord-Reyahl the Monarch Emperor-Sevias - The mad Monarch General I just made these up off the top of my head but I think more effect and a better name would help this card out alot. Hope this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoryMassacre Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Derk Bryte? Is that supposed to be Dark Bryte? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 a little overpowered. but its ok Lulz? Underpowered. Image could be better. Nice effort I suppose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Monarchs are supposed to generate advantage. This card doesn't generate any advantage. Underpowered. Better luck next time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Monarchs are supposed to generate advantage. This card doesn't generate any advantage. Underpowered. Better luck next time! Q4E this card had no monarch ability to it, it was just a harder to summon belial marquis of darkness with two attributes..... better luck next time man. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted May 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Ok...Thanks [i love the image and won't change it lolz.] Thanks for the help. I'll change it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hasimird Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Normally the monarch are 1-sacrifice monster who generates potentialy devestating abilities, but your card...Well, to put it simply and in a non-offending way, has no link to the monarch "familly". At least the protoss image it's cool, but... It is to flashy for Yugioh card. At the same time is too much and not enough. Keep going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted May 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Ok thanks...It doesn't have a link to them because it's similar to a Rainbow Dragon of Monarchs. Rainbow Dragon has absolutely nothing to do with the Crystal Beasts other then you must Tribute them. So yeah...Thanks anyways... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Both of Rainbow Dragon's effects involve Crystal Beasts. The point is, your card doesn't go with the Monarch "theme" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted May 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 . . . Ok...and who says it has to >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Evil! Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 XD nice rebound, my say is 7/10, why u used same image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma Zero Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Both of Rainbow Dragon's effects involve Crystal Beasts. The point is' date=' your card doesn't go with the Monarch "theme"[/quote']. . . Ok...and who says it has to >.> Uhm...you did...in your 1st post. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted May 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 I said it is similar to the Rainbow Dragon and that it revolves around Monarchs. Simple translation for people who are to sincere: It isn't like Rainbow Dragon but it sorta is. Not much similarity. It revolves around Monarchs as in you need to Tribute Monarchs for it. =/. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 very hard to get out. Sure, rainbow dragon need more but they are easyer to summon. And a little overpowered but the good idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 The Picture is a High Templar from Starcraft. I beileive it is fanart or some sort of artwork for Starcraft 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Come up with better names that isn't of some big importance. A way to avoid this is by leaving out the following words (Armageddon's, destroyer, great. lord, emperor, Supreme, Deity,God and Master). If you can avoid using these words for your card name we can have some interesting names being popped up here at YCM and people might be drawn to your post more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted May 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 k thanks... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dangweasle Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Nice card. a bit hard to summon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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