Dan33258 Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 [i do not own the artwork used for my cards. I only use them as a means of increasing the overall quality and effect of my work. I do not claim ownership of them.] (this image came from http://www.tyranx.com/concepts.htm)i used the image to go with my card i have made a diffrent thread that was locked because i did not put the artist down i think.(i am sry for making this mistake) i hope this is not breaking any rules i have read the rules on this Forum Plz tell me if i have to make any changes to this card and plz rate my card as well and if i have made OCG errors can u tell me wat needs to be changed to make this card more realistic. thank youfirst 14 May 2008thank you (POST 2-7) for your help i hope this is a bit better than my first improved (i think) 15 May 2008 i think i have to change the effect of this card to make it more uniqueso i did this (15 May 2008 11:50am) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 OCG Errors=3/10. Fix not only your Card Grammar, but your own grammar too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 This a a great card! All you need to improve on is the uniqueness of the effect, and try lowering the level of this moster down to about eight or seven. Otherwise, with an excellent picture, and a well thought out idea, this is an excellent card. Keep up the great work. -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hasimird Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 goos card, bad OCG and grammar. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 It is pretty realistic, except for the OCG. 8.5/10! -Mod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 OCG errors. Good effort. Keep trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xbon Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 OK card, bad grammar, and bad ocg, so 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valhalla God Odin Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 unoriginal effectits realistic cause its cheap and weak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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