The Dark Master Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 [align=center]I entered this card in a contest... And I wanted a third parties input on how it is... And yes, I am competing against Remix Duelist and Bloodrun...and I'm not sure if I have a chance 0_o So please right and comment... Thanks and here it is... Disclaimer...: I do not own this pic, it is by unknown. I only use it to increase the quality of my work and make the artist more popular... The effect 'cause I know you can't read it...: This card cannot be Normal Sumnoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 face-up monsters that have "Lightsworn" in their name. Once per turn, you may discard the top 3 cards on the top of your deck. If at least 2 of those cards were monsters that have "Lightsworn" in their name, increase this card's ATK by 1000. If at least 2 of those cards were trap cards, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. If at least 2 of those cards were spell cards, increase your Life-Points by 1000. If all the cards that were discarded were different Types of cards, or they were monsters that don't have "Lightsworn" in their name, inflict 3000 damage to your Life Points. Border was required...Yes, I know the effect is incredibly long...[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 that card is overpowered lah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted May 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Explain...I don't understand. It doesn't seem over powered to me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 that card is overpowered lah. Lulz. Not a bad effect. Slight OCG errors. Great effort. Nice effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 The only problems I have with it are that you wrote Life Points as Life-Points in one of the sentences, and the picture doesn't go with the Lightsworn theme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Nice picture, but as Remix said, Life-Points = Life Points ^_^ -Mod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 This is a pretty good card! Once you fix your grammar errors, and once you improve on the uniqueness of your picture, and the quality of it, your card will be about perfect! Keep up the great work! -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Hero of the light ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valhalla God Odin Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 didnt even bother to readpicture is too bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted May 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Thanks all of you other guys and valhalla, your just lazy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valhalla God Odin Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 ok ill read....the last part is cheap"inflict"?just counter this effect with "barrel behind the door" and your opponent takes 3000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted May 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Ok...and lets see...THAT MAKES NO SENSE TO WHAT YOU JUST SAID...calm down...calm down...Ok...well thanks anyways... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 interesting, but whats already brought up is that the pic doesnt fit, the effect is overpowered, and you had grammatical errors. i agree with that. ^_^ 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted May 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 One question...How's it overpowered? XD and thanks... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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