a lv 12 balenced card (my first lv 12 )

[Wi Fi Master Jordan]

i kinda like it but i want to see what you think of it so here it is i got pic from devinarts This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set,This card cannot be Special Summoned exept by sacrificing 3 DARKmonsters.When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field.This card cannot attack on the turn its Special Summoned.This card gains 200 ATK points for every DARK monster in your graveyard other than the ones used for this card's Special Summon.

[Hasimird]

Well, the pic is cool, but who is the creator?

Personnaly, i do think that your card is overpowered...Three Sac. for a 4500 atk, who destroyed every card on your opponents side of the field, +200 atk for each Dark monster in your grave? You should have written - 200 atk for each dark monster.

Plus it got too many OCG errors and grammar errors. And the name is kind of dull, in my opinion.

[Wi Fi Master Jordan]

i got pic from devanart

[Hasimird]

My bad i tought i reed deviantart.

 

Anyway, you still need to correct all your errors.

[Wi Fi Master Jordan]

can someone else rate please

[Chevalier]

Major OCG errors. Overpowered. Sorry not balanced at all. I suggest you rethink what you find to be overpowered.

[Wyhe]

OCG needs serious improvements here & there.The name's rather...lame.

[Wi Fi Master Jordan]

if there ocg error can you tell me what it is and the correct ocg

[Frlf]

This card can only be Normal Summoned by removing from play 3 DARK monsters. When this card is Normal Summoned destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field. This card cannot attack the turn its Normal Summoned. This card gains 200 ATK for every DARK monster in your graveyard.

 

Removed a lot of exrta words.. (if you want that effect they need to be RFP)

[Wyhe]

If you wanna know,then let it be so

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set,This card cannot be Special Summonedby sacrificing 3 DARKmonsters.When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field.This card cannot attack on the turn its Special Summoned.This card gains 200 ATK points for every DARK monster in your graveyard other than the ones used for this card's Special Summon.

 

Hope you know where you have gone wrong now.

[Frlf]

If you wanna know' date='then let it be so

 

[b']This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set,[/b]This card cannot be Special Summonedby sacrificing 3 DARKmonsters.When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field.This card cannot attack onthe turn its Special Summoned.This card gains 200 ATK points for every DARK monster in your graveyard other than the ones used for this card's Special Summon.

 

Hope you know where you have gone wrong now.

 

 

Well, urz better ^_^

[Wyhe]

If you wanna know' date='then let it be so

 

[b']This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set,[/b]This card cannot be Special Summonedby sacrificing 3 DARKmonsters.When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field.This card cannot attack onthe turn its Special Summoned.This card gains 200 ATK points for every DARK monster in your graveyard other than the ones used for this card's Special Summon.

 

Hope you know where you have gone wrong now.

 

 

 

Well, urz better ^_^

Thanks! XD!