Careless Whisper Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 It's been a while sense I made a card for everyone, so I decided to share my newest card, "Divus Pennea Ex Tragodea." Which is Latin for "Divine Wings of Tragedy." [align=center]EffectThis card can be treated as a FIRE monster while face-up on your side of the field. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 DARk monsters and 2 FIRE monster from your side of the field or your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, select 1 FIRE or 1 DARK monster from your hand and equip it to this card. Increase this card's ATK and DEF equal to the level of the selected monster x200.[/align] I know, there's probably some OCG, but I haven't made a card in a long time so I'm a bit rusty with that. Please rate, comment, discuss, and enjoy. ~San-Meti 13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 simplistic, (i dont really look at summoning conditions). and i want that rendered XD... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 eh..I knew I'd get that kind of grade. I need to patch up my style some more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Not a bad card! My only comment, would be try and avoid the pictures that contain signatures on them, and try and add a holo effect to your image, to show a little more proffesionalism. Otherwise, amazing job! Keep up the great work! -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Thanks glasstin. I didn't even notice the sig in the picture. Oh well, I guess that's my disclaimer lol. Oh well. And I can't do holoes to save my life, and I don't want to bother anyone else to do it for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
animetor07 Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 hey did you draw that cards pic? if not dont forget to ref and credit it. i like the card btw! very balanced 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Animator07: Look at the area of the card between the pic and description box. There's your disclaimer. That area is called the circulation section. And I had the impression that my card is overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Animator07: Look at the area of the card between the pic and description box. There's your disclaimer. That area is called the circulation section. And I had the impression that my card is overpowered. underpowered if anything... i hardly see dark and fire monsters in the same deck.... with the possible exception of the six samurai.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
animetor07 Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 haha lol. i used some of his art for cards before too. overpowered? no way. you have to remove 2 fire and 2 dark monsters from play, and his effect is not 'all that..' its cool but i dont see how it's overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 I thought overpowered with the initial effect of gaining ATK even though it already has a high ATK power. But I guess the tricky summoning conditions makes it balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
animetor07 Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 also, 4 monsters from the field or your hand that must be dark or fire monsters.. you'd probably be left with a crummy hand lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 probably. But it sayd remove from play 2 dark and 2 fire from your field or GRAVEYARD, not hand. You chose a card from your hand and equip the chosen card to the monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 I'm gonna bump this topic. I would like some more ratings please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 actually i didnt find any OCG errorsand if anyone finds any after to me, im gonna cry =( lol nice card though ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 lol.. Thanks Bloodrun. I did work pretty hard on this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 no OCG as my eye sees. i like it simple really but very flashy witch in this case is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma Zero Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 Nice card. It's to the point. Nice art selection. Bonus points for a cool Latin name. I, also, do not see any OCG errors(not claiming to be a maestro at this though). If you want to spice up the effect a little then how about adding this... "If this card would be destroyed as a result of your opponent's card effect, the equipped monster is destroyed instead." It's just a thought. Nice work though. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 Not bad, the art is not yet overused and the effect is decent. By my perspective, it does not really match your style. But hey, it is your style. I give it an 8.76/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 IMO, this is underpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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