HelioSpark Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 Hi! Please rate/fix:D2nd EDITED VERSION:Art credit: Ironshod on deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted May 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 Hi! Please rate/fix:D2nd EDITED VERSION:Art credit: Ironshod on deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhazel Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 nice monster you have there . i like the simple way it can be summoned :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fhazel Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 nice monster you have there . i like the simple way it can be summoned :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted May 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 Thank You :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 Reminds me of the envoys. I like it. Nice job.  An OCG patch-up:  As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you may pay 1000 Life Points to destroy one Magic or Trap card on the field. This effect can onl be used once per turn. Change to: Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted May 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 Thanks Edo Pheonix!I really appreciate it when people actually help fix my cards.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcdooge Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 Great but I think you should pay less lifepoints to destroy the magic/trap cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted May 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 ^^^ maybe...., I was just trying to keep it balanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Thanks Edo Pheonix!I really appreciate it when people actually help fix my cards.:DÂ No problem, s'what I do. ^_^ I think 1000 LP is good for the cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Use 'can' instead of 'may'.Overused Image.Life Points, not life points.  Overpowered. Slightly, but still overpowered. 6.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Hmm, you used Life Points the 2nd time, but yeah, you'll need to fix the first time you used Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dangweasle Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 i like it's effect but make it, "when this card would be destroyed by battle pay 1000 life points to make it not be destroyed" i know th ocg was off on what i said but you get the point Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 I love the pic, not too bad on the rest. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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