Luna Diviner Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Well I've thought of a new fan-fic and I want this to be the BEST ! (For me). Much like my old fan-fic, the main character uses a Hunter Dragon Deck but with a twist, Charge Spells. A new game mechanic that is going to make Jet (Main Characters Name) a unique, fun and lovable character for my fan-fic. The point of the set is to charge the Spells. When a C. Spell is Charged it can activate it's effect. When you charge a C.Spell you place it on the Charger monster. Every set needs a cool dragon to start it, so ...This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 "Hunter Dragon" and 1 DARK monster. Pay 800 Life Points, send 1 Charge Spell Card from your hand to the Graveyard. Once per turn, select 1 Charge Spell Card in your Graveyard and charge it (Max.5). During your next Main Phase, remove 1 Charge Spell Card from this card to activate its effect.Card LoreCard LoreOnce a young hunter dragon but it turned away from it's past when it was able to become one of the Dragon Lords. With it's last ounce of will power it fought the three dragons. Now with the rise of the Dragon Lords, this dragon has gained more power..DARKER POWER !Yes, it infers to the set Rise of the Dragon lords quite a few times. Once per turn, remove 1 Charger Spell Card from your hand or Graveyard from play to Special Summon 1 Level 2 non-Tuner monster from your hand or Deck. "Bass Synchron" + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, draw a card x the amount of cards used to Synchro Summon it. Whenever a Charge Spell Card is activated, increase the ATK of this card by 400. Activate only when this card has been Charged. Declare 1 Attribute. Draw 3 cards of your Deck. Activate the appropriate effect based on the amount of cards of the declared attribute you drew :- 0 : Decrease the ATK of 1 monster on your side of the field by 1000.- 1 : You take 2000 points of damage.- 2 : Return 1 card on the field to the top of its owner's Deck.- 3 : Pay 3000 Life Points. Special Summon 1 DARK Dragon-Type monster from your hand or Deck, ignoring all Summoning conditions.Card LoreCard LoreAs the young dragon began to grow restless, it wanted to see into it's future. It was able to find an oracle and it predicted great things to happen. Now Razor Wing Dragon is trying to change the course of time and make great things happenNew card. Card would be obviously limited. But the drawbacks + Charge effect makes it less overpowered and it is an obvious way to tribute summon Razor Wing Dragon.[/i] More cards to be added later. Please rate idea. Rating of Set and OCG later when I've added all the custom cards. Disclaimer :None of these pics belong to me. They are only used to make my cards look uber smexy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 It's basically a reversed Hunter Dragon with added colour. The card itself however, is absolutely genius! 9.91/10 Hope your Fan-Fic is good! I'll read and comment of you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 I know and now Hunter Dragon is facing Darkness.Thankyou I will try my best for the fic and try to get my grammar as good as possible.But Mr.Anchor I seem to remember you but have no recent memories of you.Did you leave for some time ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan33258 Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Nice card i like the effect 9/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Thankyou Dan and I hope you read my fan-fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 I know and now Hunter Dragon is facing Darkness.Thankyou I will try my best for the fic and try to get my grammar as good as possible.But Mr.Anchor I seem to remember you but have no recent memories of you.Did you leave for some time ? Yes. Unfortunately, but I returned and I'll be more than happy to review your Fan-Fic if you want me to. It'll be my pleasure. And OCG, I don't think YOU'LL be having a problem with that seeing as none of your cards have much grammar errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 No I mean in my fan-fic.My card grammar is somewhat perfect (No modesty needed as it the truth :D)I am not exactly the best with spellings but I try my best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 No I mean in my fan-fic.My card grammar is somewhat perfect (No modesty needed as it the truth :D)I am not exactly the best with spellings but I try my best. What do you mean by "No I mean in my Fan-Fic"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 I mean my grammar for my fic.I do not have the best grammar.Being 10 hinders me from having a good grasp of the English language, well not good enough to match the likes of you and Umbra. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 It's okay Death Reborn. You do your best, which is what counts here. Grammar matters, but not if you're 10. Besides, Umbra doesn't abuse his Mod powers to judge people so he'll be nice to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 A new card has been added to the mix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Goody. But I don't really get the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Ok here it is :Choose an attribute. Draw 3 cards. Activate an effect based on the number of cards of the chosen attribute you drew.---------------------------I am currently writing Chapter 1 of my fan-fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 It seems okay...but the monster's effect is too confusing it makes no sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 How does it not make sense ?Please read the rest of the thread before posting.Everything is explained. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 It does not actually, kindly explain what this means. Once per turn, select 1 Charge Spell Card in your Graveyard and charge it (Max.5). During your next Main Phase, remove 1 Charge Spell Card from this card to activate its effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Well I will (Even though I did explain it already)When you charge you place the card on the Charger.Remove it to activate it's effect.Max 5 means 5 Charge Spell cards at a time.Which pretty much means it was already written at the top of the thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 That clears up some confusion. Make more! They're nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Use what effect is what I was refering to, you need to be more clearer on the card text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 I do not understand what you mean by use what effect I was reffering to.And sorry if I seem rude but I get cranky in the middle of the night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Just saying "To activate the card effect" doesn't tell me what card effect...you could be referring to activating a card effect from your deck, plz state things clearly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 It means to activate the Charge Spells effect.Anchor was able to understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 I know I kinda figured that after, but a complete and utter n00b would not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 I know I kinda figured that after' date=' but a complete and utter n00b would not.[/quote'] I really hope you're not calling me a n00b. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 No I believe as you understood the card he is not.New ep will be up in about 15 minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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