Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 [spoiler=Main Character List][spoiler=Jet Williams]Personality and MannerismJet Williams is the 19 year-old protagonist of Yu-Gi-Oh! 3G. He is known for his kind nature and ability to percieve. Much like Jaden Yuki in personality but has a deeper and more mature side to him. His skill overexceeds that of many people around his area. He tends to be angered when somebody makes an offensive comment about his cards or his friends. Even though he loves every single duel monster card he does believe some cards work better than others. He also has a passion to learn about the past of Duel Monsters which is why he needs to take his education to a higher level and join the exclusive, Duel University ! AppearanceJet has deep blue eyes and dark brown hair. The upper layer of his hair points upwards, the middle layer is the exact opposite of the above giving him a distinctive look. The bottom layer is pointing downwards. He also has red highlights around the outer edges of his hair. Jet wears a white jacket with crystal blue gems around his shoulder and elbow over a yellow long-sleeved shirt which has a white symbol on it somewhat resembling the millenium eye. His torso (and downwards) consists of a white jeans (also accesorised with crystal blue gems), a silver belt and blue and white trainers. Jet's DeckJet uses a Deck resolving around the new concept of Charge Spell Cards and Charger Monsters. He also has a great love for the card Hunter Dragon. His best card is Razor Wing DragoonA darker and more powerful version of Hunter Dragon ! [spoiler=Jona Kries]Personality and MannerismThe snobby, rich student of Duel University and a regular anti-hero. Starts of as a bully but thanks to Jet becomes more friendly, resembles Chazz.>>More to Be Added Soon<<Appearance>>NOT AVAILABE<< Jona's DeckMonsters - 22-Exodia Pieces - 1 (5 alltogether)Destiny Hero Malicious - 2Destiny Hero Disk Commander -1Elemental Hero Stratos - 1Zombie Master - 3Deep Diver - 2Mystic Tomato - 3Mezuki - 3Destiny Hero - Fear Monger - 2 Spell - 17Allure of Darkness - 2Card of Safe Return - 3Undead World - 3Card Destruction - 1Monster Reborn - 1Foolish Burial - 2Magical Mallet - 2D-Draw - 2 Trap - 2Limit Reverse - 2 Chapter 1 - Jet SpeedChapter 1 - Jet Speed 'Year 5980, Location Domino District Hospital'. A woman was lying on a bed, her husband standing next to her and doctors and nurses surrounded her. With every passing moment the bump in her stomach began to recline. Her husband tightened his grip on her hand and closed his eyes. The woman began expressing cries of pain, it was over, and her child was born. "Congratulations, you have a new baby boy!" exclaimed one of the nurses. The child's ear-shattering wail was quickly put to an end by his mother's comforting embrace. The man shed a tear and spoke, "Myra you know I cannot stay here anymore. I must leave and carry on with my work but I will return to see you and our son, and when I come back I shall be famous and rich!" "I don't need you to be either of those things! I just need you here, with me." cried the woman. "Sorry." the man said quietly. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------'Spirit High Council'. A human shaped alien was floating in a large crimson sphere. Surrounded by other aliens, his name was Taarkra. All of the aliens were neck deep in a compelling argument. "Curse that lying Maximillion. Those blasted cards of his were never destroyed!" shouted a one eyed creature. "Do you have proof of that?" asked Taarkra. "Yes master." and the one eyed creature pointed at a closed case. Taarkra grabbed hold of the case and opened it, located inside it were stacks of cards. "Good find Verr'o, we must place these cards under maximum security. With spirit energy like that, god knows what happens if they get in the wrong hands" --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Somewhere in Space. A large ship flew across the galaxy awaiting its arrival at the 'Fort'. The cards were to be kept under tight security at the fort. But crime never stops, even in space.Two small black space ships were tailing the larger ship. The sound of gunshot aroused in the area as the green laser beams began hitting into the rear end of the ship. "Captain what are we going to do?" asked the young, plucky flight assistant. "Fasten your seat belts, I am going Overdrive!" The ship speedily swerved away from the blasts but in the confusion of recent events, the ships engine had become jammed in the overdrive position. What irony, the whole reason of the assignment was to keep the cards safe but instead it had endangered them.The rogue ship crashed into a near-by asteroid belt. The accumulative spirit power of the cards was overwhelming. The crash had triggered their true power. A large colourful explosion began to happen. Half of the planets were blasted to tiny fragments of their former glory and the cards hurtled at unmatchable speeds through the vacuum of space.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Spirit High Council. "I feel a disruption in the balance of the Universal Spirit Energy, whoever finds those cards will make a fortune and become the worlds most powerful duellist!" shouted Taarkra. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Oeaki Forest. The child’s father was alone standing in a forest. He saw a large meteorite flying towards the Earth. He quickly ran to see what was going on. He saw the large flash of light jet across the sky. He picked up his mobile phone from his pocket and began dialling a number. "Honey I've got a new name for our child, Jet!" "Oh, it is wonderful, thank you." his wife replied and they both closed their phones. "Wait a minute! That's not a meteorite. It's a card!" the man said to himself. He ran across the forest and followed its path but the time came. The card crashed into the ground. The aftershock was immense sending the man of his feet and into the sky for a few seconds. The man picked up the card and imprinted onto it was, 'Razor Wing Dragoon'. ----------------------------------------------------------------------'19 Years Later'. It was a special occasion, Jet's 19th Birthday! He was to old to invite a clown and play games but he invited his friends for a small party. "Son, this is a card I found 19 years ago and I want you to have it," said Jet's dad and he gave Jet a duel monsters card. "Wow! Razor Wing Dragoon!" exclaimed Jet. "I knew you'll like it son!" said his father. Jet was not going to be home for long. He was going to the exclusive Duel University. There he would learn to be a Duel Historian and unearth the many historical facts about Duel Monsters.Jet was equipped with a powerful deck and was able to venture to Duel University. But is he prepared for the things that await him at Duel University?Jet pulled out a glistening silver key from his pocket and began unlocking the door so he could leave. At that moment one of his friends did a strange thing. Instead of sitting in her seat and just waving goodbye to Jet. She ran to Jet and began kissing him. Their lips touched and the utter harmony at that moment was beautiful. Maybe Jet had feelings for his friend or maybe it was just a new and exotic thing for him, we'll never know but one things for sure, he was enjoying it. "What was that for?" Jet asked and he blushed. "Well I just wanted to say goodbye." she replied. "Well it would have been better if you just sat down and said goodbye like everybody else but your way was good" he said and he walked out of the door.Outside of his house door was a cab. Jet embarked into the cab, still shocked about the previous event. He deposited £2 into the driver’s hand. The cab hovered along the road, trying to reach its destination.--------------------------------------------------------------'Duel University'.Jet walked out of the cab and walked to the main entrance of the University. "Jet Williams" shouted a uniformed man. "That's me!" replied Jet. "Welcome to our University, please come through!" said the man. Jet walked through the large doors looked around. The place was like nothing he had seen before. "Welcome freshman, I'm Jona Kries, the current Golden Duelist and if you don't know what that means, then I'll tell you! I'm this years current champion!" "Don't be sure about that, because when I'm through with you, Silver Duelist will be your rank!" said Jet. "Are you ready to put your money where you mouth is? Kid?" asked Jona. "If you're asking for a duel, then you're getting one!" shouted Jet. "Duel!" the two shouted in unison. Jet placed his hand on his deck and prepared himself for the draw that would begin the duel. ----------------------END OF CHAPTER 1----------------------This chapter was just a pilot to show everyone who Jet is and what the main plot is (not exacltly but some of it). I also added a bit of humor (the kiss).NOTE :I spelt colour right and anyone saying I spelt it wrong will get a neg rep because colour IS spelt with a U, just come to England and see xD. I tried my best with the spelling and grammar, please rate.Sorry if everyone found the ep short but around 1000 is somewhat large for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 lol we spell colour the same way in Canada. I like it, can't wait for the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Thanks dude, have I got any grammar errors ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Well not really but, "I don't need you to be either of those things! I think you need to add that to the sentance. Jet was equipped with a powerful deck and was able to venture to Duel University. And I think it's spelt duelist with 1 L Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Thankyou for the help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 no problem, when will the next chapter be out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Next Chapter is out next weekend.As from Mon-Thur I wont be here as I will be on a trip.I will also add Jona's deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 I really liked it, although you missed a comma here and there. One of the better fan-fictions on the site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Is it better then my other fics ?Yeh making the character older opens up more possibilties.BTW How much percent do you give it ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 ummm... percentage? I'd say about 85-95% so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 So it's pretty much 90% ?Well thanks.(41% better than last time)I will be adding Jet and Jona's profiles in a mo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Okay sounds cool, I didn't see your last fanfic, but it was only rated a 49%? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Oh sorry I mean 59%.I am currently adding Jet's profile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Oh lol, which one was that I looked and you had 2 different fan fics.And I read that you're only 10? Oh and what kind of deck will Jet be using? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Jet uses a Charger Deck.Look at my threads and see the thread about Main Characters deck.But only 2 cards have been added.Yes Chargers are a new concept.+ He also has Hunter Dragon Support Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Oh I see. So what does a charger card do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 They charge charger spells and when a charger spell is charged they get a super cool effect.Think POG + DAD + JD + MRThats right. Absolute Pwnage.Jona uses Zombie Exodia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Okay I'm probably annoying you with all these questions so I'll stop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 No I don't mind the more posts the longer this stays on the front page and the more people will notice. I might get annoyed about other things but it actually makes me really happy when I hear people ask questions about MY stories. About MY work instead of asking me how to post cards and other stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Sorry for double post but bios added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Nice fanfic! I like it! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 You're welcome dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Chapter 2 - Duel! Passion, Victory, Defeat, Exodia Obliterate! Jet stood still and silent, facing Jona - a miasma of fear and excitement arouse inside of Jet, this would be the duel to start of his career! This would be the duel that would lead to a greater future! But was Jet's destiny set in stone? Jona aged 21 towered over Jet by around 20 centimetres but Jet wasn't daunted by the obvious fact.Jet was in the position in which he was completely shut off from his surroundings. The same went for Jona, despite the loud roar of the spectators about they both felt the duel was a moment of silence. The duel went underway, Jet began browsing the cards in his hand - Bass Synchron looked like a good card to summon but what if she gets destroyed? He had to take the risk or maybe lie low for the next few turns. "I summon one monster in face down defence position and then I set one card! I end my turn.” exclaimed Jet. A smirk formed on Jona's face, he slid the top card of his deck into his hand and began his turn. "I activate Card Destruction to send Mezuki, Destiny Hero - Disk Commander, D-Draw, Foolish Burial and Limit reverse to the Graveyard and now I can draw 6 cards!" Jet also did the same but Jona had a large advantage. "How could this be? My chances of winning are already declining! How powerful are you Jona?" "Well I'm very powerful! I activate Undead World that makes all monsters on the field and in the Graveyard become Zombies! Now I activate Card of Safe Return! By removing Mezuki from play I can Special Summon my Disk Commander! Because of the added effect of Card of Safe Return and my Commander, I can draw 3 cards! Jet drew another card, it was Hunter Dragon. "I summon my Hunter Dragon" - a small, vicious looking dragon appeared onto the field. "Now I activate my face down card! Hunter Dragon's Retribution, which doubles its attack but I shall lose it during my End Phase - good enough deal to me! Now my dragon, annihilate his commander!" Jona stood still through the blast not flinching one bit! 3100 Life Points was a large loss but he was able to comprehend. It was Jona's turn and he seemed even more sure of victory than before. "I summon my Zombie Master! Then by discarding my Limit Reverse I special summon Disk Commander - which allows me to draw another 3 cards! Now both of my minions attack the enemy! Jet fall to his knees as the two monsters began hammering his Life Points down. "I shall end my turn!" Jet did not know but Jona had nearly obtained all the pieces to his ultimate plan. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Spirit High Council "Verr'o we still need to find him" said Taarkra. "I know master, we have been searching for 19 years but I feel he is inhabiting Earth" "Earth? Nobody has been chosen since the time of Yusei, are you sure you are right?" "I am sure, master"--------------------------------------------------------------------------------Duel University The duel was still going on it was Jet's turn, he controlled one face down monster and Jona only had 200 Life Points. "I set one card and I end my turn!" "I discard Monster Reborn for Zombie Masters effect! Now I shall draw 3 cards as I special summon Disk Commander! It is over! In my hand I now obtain all five pieces of Exodia! Now my creature, obliterate! I have gained victory!" The large, ancient creature shot a powerful beam from its hands causing the ground to shatter and the end of the duel. "Wow! You are good." "You shouldn't take risks! Next time, brush up on your skills before you duel me" "You don't have to be so harsh!" "You aren't a kid anymore, you need to take in criticism seriously so you will know how to improve yourself!" ------------------------------------------------------------------------------17 hours later. "Jet, wake up!" asked Taarkra. "How are you?" "I am Taarkra, master of the Spirit High Council!" "What do you need me for?" "You must leave the University, you have a much greater destiny!" "But do you even know how much money I spent to come here? And how do I know you're not lying?" "Does this lie?" Taarkra pointed at a mark on his head and at that moment it began to glow. Gold and vibrant, it was a beautiful sight. "But what does that prove?" Jet asked. "Look at your deck" Jet's could see a bright light coming from his deck, he began to search for the source of the light, and he had found it! Razor Wing Dragoon. "What is so special about this card?" "It is one of the 13 Spirit Cards! Each card with an unsustainable amount of Spirit Energy inside them. 19 years ago they were supposed to be locked away but they are now scattered across the universe. You have one, I need your help to find 12 more and restore balance to the universe!" "How will some cards save the universe?" "You sure are inquisitive. The 13 legendary cards are avatars. Bridges between different elements of this world and the world of Duel Monsters, if all the cards fall in the wrong hands, both universes will collide, ending them. Just like the other 10 dimensions ended 2000 years ago." Jet woke up from a strange dream. Was he really needed for all those things or was it just a dream?Jet's questions were about to be answered as he saw a large yellow light flickering before him. --------------------------------------Unknown Jet woke up to find himself in a room surrounded by strange creatures. "Jet; find the cards! I repeat, find the cards before the time is up!" The same words began booming continuously from the computer screen, which was littered with the words 'DESTINY'A small device was conjured onto Jet's wrist. The machine seemed to be able to tell the distance between the cards and Jet. "Abort function,” the computer screamed and the words DESTINY faded from it and windows began accumulating on the screen. "This is X. I shall find you Jet and put an end to you. I shall find the cards and rule over the universe!" and after that the computer screen reverted back to its former status.For a small amount of time, the only light source in the room was the computer but that soon changed. A door opened and somebody walked into the room and then the lights flickered on. "Jet?" said Jona. "Jona, what are you doing here?" asked Jet. "My job is to aid the Searcher!" "The Searcher!?" "Yes, the Searcher. The one who searches for the cards. But I can't believe it's you!" "I can't believe it either!" "Well I guess you want to leave now?" "Well I do but shouldn't I stay here and find out more about my job?" "No. X is on to us; you must go back to the University and lay low despite what the High Council say. They may be wise but they are totally useless in this situation. The only one who truly has a use is you!" -------------------END OF CHAPTER 2-------------------Sorry for Chapter coming late but I was away.Their is much more to the plot. Well the entire fan-fiction has a lot of references and here are the ones put in purpously :-Yugioh (Mostly 5D)- Galactik Football- Death Note--------------------The ideas were merely used to increase the plot and wasn't put in directly, other than Yugioh.--------------------LONGEST CHAPTER BY ME, EVER!FOR ANY FAN-FIC! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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