DarkForce™ Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 In this Fan-Fic the most top ranked male and female players in the whole world is the Dimmension King and Queen. Credit to Jadewiz for the idea in his Fan-Fic Crimson Duelist Chronicles.****************************************************Good Guys:Main Characters: Name: Maelstrom ShwartzAge: 18/19Appearance: Black Hair, Blue-Red eyes, always wears green, always has duel disk.Deck: Weather ControlAttitude: Shy but strong in and out of duels.Bio: The son of Felgrand Shwartz he runs the program known as "The Dimension King Challenge". He is also the 4th time 'Dimension King'. Name: Kye MarlissGender: MaleAge: 18Deck Style: Dark Guardians Additude: Always up for a duel.Appearence: Post #3Reason: To be recognized as a great duelist. Name: Eric HansenAge: 14Appearance: Post #4Deck: Rise of the Dragon LordsAttitude: Very shy except when he's dueling, when he's dueling he gets very cocky and EVIL.Reason to be Dimmension King/Queen: Because his brother was a great duelist and he wants to be like him. Side Characters (Friends of the Dimension King): Name: Drake NorinoAge: 17Appearance: Post #2Deck: Cyber DragonsAttitude: Clam, Kind but gets angry easily which is the fact no one messes with himReason to be Dimmension King/Queen: The son of the U.S Champ, The best duelist at his High School. Name:Mike WalkerAge:17Appearance: Post #5Deck:Chaos AngelAttitude:He isn't a talkative person,but he is very devoted to dueling,he loves it more than anything.Reason to be Dimmension King/Queen:To prove to his father that he is a great duelist****************************************************The Darkness: Name: Gren HendersonAge: 33Appearance: Blonde haired, fair skinned, blue eyes (When calm wile dueling) red eyes (When frustrated or mad while dueling)Deck: Warriors of GrenAttitude: Cocky when dueling, and always trying to win every competition he is in.Reason why he is a shadow rider: After a recent accident pertaining to duel monsters he found out that he could bring his duel monster cards to life. He now hunts for duelists with rare cards to turn into his evil servants. Name: Marrisa MaliceAge: 32Appearance: Blonde haired, fair skinned, green/blue eyes, always wears a red cloak with gold trimDeck: Demons UprisingAttitude: Only talks to her opponent while dueling, and Gren outside of duels.Reason why he/she is a shadow rider: She was born into a rich family who loved to duel. After her parents died she was raised by her closest friends parents who loved and cared for her like she was there own. When she turned 13 a boy about her same age asked her to join a group he was in known as 'The Darkness', she accepted and ever since she has developed a crush on Gren Henderson who was always there for her. Name: Dark RaiAge: 15Appearance: Post #7Deck: Fallen AngelAttitude: Agressive, evil and only cares about winningReason why he/she is a shadow rider: Dark Rai was once a good guy; a nice and peaceful person. Until the incident three years ago when he was sucked into the darkness. He was never the same again. He joined the Shadow Riders after the evil in him was complete. Name: JakeAge: 13Appearance: Post #9Deck: E heroAttitude: gets annoyed easily mad most of the time.Reason why he/she is a shadow rider: he was sent to duel academy at an early age and was a survivor of the abaondoned dorm the shadow riders sought him out due to his skill and he joined them. he lost his parents right after the dorm incident also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Name: Drake NorinoAge: 17Appearance: Deck: Cyber DragonsAttitude: Clam, Kind but gets angry easily which is the fact no one messes with himReason to be Dimmension King/Queen: The son of the U.S Champ, The best duelist at his High School Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadewiz Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Name: Kye MarlissGender: MaleAge: 18Deck Style: Dark Guardians http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=38053Additude: Always up for a duel.Appearence:Reason: To be recognized as a great duelist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Name: Eric HansenAge: 14Appearance:Here(Except with blonde hair and blue eyes)Deck: Rise of the Dragon LordsAttitude: Very shy except when he's dueling, when he's dueling he gets very cocky and EVIL.Reason to be Dimmension King/Queen: Because his brother was a great duelist and he wants to be like him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Name:Mike WalkerAge:17Appearance:,and he wears a with shirt,and black trousersDeck:Chaos Angel(http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=39811)Attitude:he isn't a talkative person,but he is very devoted to dueling,he loves it more than anything.Reason to be Dimmension King/Queen:to prove to his father that he is a great duelist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted May 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Good People guys. Because you all were the first to reply I'll make you guys the main characters!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Name: Dark RaiAge: 15Appearance: Deck: Fallen AngelAttitude: Agressive, evil and only cares about winningReason why he/she is a shadow rider: Dark Rai was once a good guy; a nice and peaceful person. Until the incident three years ago when he was sucked into the darkness. He was never the same again. He joined the Shadow Riders after the evil in him was complete. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Awesome main character! When will you start making the fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Name: JakeAge: 13Appearance: Deck: E heroAttitude: gets annoyed easily mad most of the time.Reason why he/she is a shadow rider: he was sent to duel academy at an early age and was a survivor of the abaondoned dorm the shadow riders sought him out due to his skill and he joined them. he lost his parents right after the dorm incident also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted May 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Chapter One: Standing Alone ???: Maelstrom Dent Shwartz! Get down here! Maelstrom walked down the stairs. Maelstrom: Okay, Okay I'm here. What do you need mom? Mistress Shwartz: Your needed at the opening ceremony for the Dimension Tourney today. Maelstrom: It's Today??!! Miss Shwartz: Yes, so go get your deck and report down to City Hall. Maelstrom: Okay call up the city council and tell them I'll be down in 20 minutes. God I better get ready. Miss Shwartz telephones the council. While Maelstrom is getting ready. A good 15 minutes later. Maelstrom: Bye mom, be sure to watch the news! Over at City Hall, the council is going over the rules for the tournament. Council 1: Rule #1 be prepared.Council 2: Rule #2 have your decks at all times from now until the tourney is over.Council 3: Rule #3 don't give up.Council 4: Rule #4 winner gets the other players medal.Council 5: Rule #5 loser is disqualified from the tourney unless the have another medal with them from winning another duel.All Council Members: Rule #6 HAVE FUN!!!!!! Maelstrom is running as fast as he can to reach city hall when he bumps into a kid no less than 13. Maelstrom: Sorry dude almost ran you over! Kye: Me too, you could've been killed! Maelstrom: Hi, I'm Maelstrom Shwartz owner of the Dimmension Tournament. Kye: Hey, I'm Kye Marliss. I'm participating in that tournament today. Maelstrom: Cool. Well, since i'm running late you wanna come with me and be my Guest of Honor? Kye: Sure, that'd be awesome. Maelstrom: Well lets get going then. Oh and by the way here are some tips, while participating in the tourney by pressing the red button on your duel disk it automatically shuffles your deck so you never have to worry about using cards that will have to shuffle your deck for you, and, wait do you have a *Duel Computer*[1] with you? Kye: Yeah here. Maelstrom: Okay if I press here and here and add this to this and reconnect this to that, then, Voohlah, here you go. Your Duel Computer has now registered your deck and has programed the ultimate strategies for you to use! Now if you get stuck you can type in the card name(s) and get a strategie! By the way just tell the guards your name and they'll lead you to the Honor Suite wich is where you'll be staying for the next couple of weeks! Kye: Whoah thanks Maelstrom you rock.Kye looked around but Maelstrom had already left. City Council; Dimension Tourney Opening Anouncer: AND NOW, INTRODUCING THE KING OF DIMENSIONS MAELSTROM SHWARTZ!!!!! Crowd: Whooooooo, Yeah, Lets Go Maestrom!! Maelstrom: Thank you, thank you all. In a couple of minutes I will begin this tourney, but before then I would like you all to adress my Guest of Honor like he was myself, KYE MARLISS!!!!!! ........... Maelstrom: Ummm, Jack where's Kye? Jack Cable: Sorry sir we haven't recieved verification that he has arrived yet. Maelstrom: Hmmmm, thats strange. Anyway while I go find him distract the crowd with something you like to do. Back on the road. Kye: Come on you can do it you can make it only a few more feet and- THUMPP! Guard: Name Please. Kye: Kye, Kye Marliss. Guard Sorry noone by that name on this list. Maelstrom: WWWAAAIIITTT!!!!!!!Maelstrom comes around the corner panting. Guard: Mr. Maelsrom what are you doing here? Maelstrom: Im...here....for.....Kye! Kye: Oh yeah, hehe thats me!Kye blushes. Maelstrom: Sorry about the mistake Georgeo. Georgeo: Sure thing boss, but why isn't his name on the list? Maelstrom: Because your not on the right page. Turn the page and look at the Guest of Honor. Georgeo: Ohhhh, sorry Mr. Marliss. Kye: It's okay, man it was a mistake, don't beat your self up over it. Maelstrom: Come on Kye I think Jack might be doing is impressions again! Back at the Tourney Opening: Jack: I'll Be Back, With Weapons!! Crowd: Booooo, Come on, Wheres Maelstrom? Maelstrom: Right here folks, and this time I brought my Guest of Honor with me! Crowd: Whooooooo, Go Kye, Go Maelstrom, Rock On!!! Maelstrom: Jack would you hand me the switch. No wait let Kye do the honors! All you have to do is count down from 5 and then pull the switch and say 'Let the Games Begin' Okay? Kye: Okay got it. 5...4....3....2....1.... Let the Games Begin!!!!!Kye pulls the switch and a man jumps down from the rafters. ??????: Maelstrom.......Shwartz......Duel......Me. Maelstrom: Or what? ??????: All....shall.....fall. I Summon Gren - Titan of Hatred!!A monster with 3 heads and 6 arms and bulging muscles appeared before them. ??????: Gren, Super Pound!!!!!The beast smashed down on the floor and all of a sudden Kye, Maelstrom, and the man were transported into a realm of darkness. Maelstrom: Who are you?? Gren: I am Gren. King of The Darkness!!! And you shall fall into the darkness!!!!****************************************************I know the last line is kind of cheesey but how do you like the fan-fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Nice chapter,can't wait for the next oneoh and the fan-fic rules Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted May 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Chapter 2: In The Darkness Gren: Duel Me! Maelstrom: Fine I accept. Life Point Set: 4000/4000 Maelstrom: I'll go first. I summon Weather Machine(1200/100)! While Weather Machine is on the field I can Special Summon Weather Technician(2400/1500)! Because of my Technician's effect you cannot select my Weather monsters as the target for a trap card. Then I'll activate Suprise Attack! This card allows me to attack even though I went first! Weather Machine attack with Flame Blizzard, and Weather Technician attack with Mechanical Blast! I'll set 2 cards and end my turn. 4000/400 Gren: Finally, I'll Summon Gren Dimensional Guard. Because of his effect I can Summon one Dimensional Prisoner from my hand or deck. Then I'll tribute both for- Maelstrom: Wait you can't summon you already did! Gren: Correct but this is not a Normal Summon It's a special summon! Come forth Gren Dimensional Ruler(3400/900)!!! Now attack his Weather machine with Super Pound!!! I'll end my turn. 1900/400 Maelstrom: My turn, I'll activate my first facedown Select and Recieve! This card lets me add any one card from my deck to my hand. I select Machine Hero. Now I'll activate my second facedown 2x the Trouble! This card allows me to summon 2 times this turn! But I won't need it because I'll summon my Weather Hero(1800/1550) and activate his effect to Special Summon Weather Creator(3000/2850)!!!!!! This game is over, I activate Weather Suicide this card allows me to destroy a monster on my side on the field and a monster on your side of the field with equal attack. Gren: But you have no such monster! Ha-Ha-Ha! Maelstrom: Look again! My Creator's effect activates, all of your monsters lose 100 attack points for every Weather monster on my field. and since I have 3 your monster will go down to 3000 and now my Creator and your King are now destroyed!!! Now my monsters, attack him directly Turbine Mega Slam!!!!! Gren: Good we have unleashed his full potential, Marissa you can take me out now.Gren vanishes just before Maelstrom's attack hits. Maelstrom and Kye appear in front of the dueling platform. Maelstrom: Woah, what happened? Kye: I don't know. But I think time stopped for that duel you just had, look.Kye points to Jack anoucing the tournament start. Maelstrom: I have a strange feeling that we'll be seeing alot more of that guy in the future. Somewhere in the Sky: ??????: Gren, Welcome back. You have done well up until now. But I still have one more task for you before you can rejoin your ranks: Find the one called Eric Hansen and destroy him. Gren: Yes Master Kieshi. Master Kieshi: Good and this time take Marrisa with you. Will Eric survive? Who is Eric? Why would they want to destroy him? All these questions will be answered in the next chapter in Dimension Chronicles!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted May 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 bumpeth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 why do they want to destroy mah? And you know what's scary? My sisters name is MARISSA! Anyways cant wait for the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted May 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Lol sorry Tyranno. Anyways they want to *Destroy* him because I threw a twist on things he has the same power Gren does! He can bring the monsters in his deck to life only he doesn't know that yet, and because i told you that can you plz tell other people to read this??!!!! BUMP-BUMP-BUMP-BUMP!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted May 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 SNEEK PEEK OF CHAPTERS 3-5!!!!! The Team of Light shall prevailBut only at the cost of anotherOn a journey for wich they sailA new teammate finds a brotherThis person becomes a friendWho helps out all in the end. +1 rep to whoever can find out what this means with out reading the chapters to follow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 But I am serious in real life my sister's name is Marissa. I'll find some people to read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 SNEEK PEEK OF CHAPTERS 3-5!!!!! The Team of Light shall prevailBut only at the cost of anotherOn a journey for wich they sailA new teammate finds a brotherThis person becomes a friendWho helps out all in the end. +1 rep to whoever can find out what this means with out reading the chapters to follow.It would mean that during the struggle,1 of the good guys would be gone.They would be going on a journey,apparently by sea.They would find a new ally,who finds his brother.The brother would be of great importance in the long run. BTW,this is a good fanfic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted May 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 exactly lord whye. +1 rep! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 [shakes samm328's hand so hard that it broke off]Thank you!I've never won anything before in my life!(although there were those times that I actually won) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted May 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 your welcome lord whye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 I'd suggest merging all the chapters into the first post. And when will chapter 3 be out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 I'd suggest merging all the chapters into the first post. And when will chapter 3 be out?Don't stupid & listen to him!That is a seriously BAD IDEA! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 okay ill consider both of you. and ch.3 will be out probally be out today or tomarrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Chapter 3: Let The Tournament Begin! Maelstrom: Now that we're back we can start this tournament. Kye: Sure thing, lets go!! (Up at the Podium) Maelstrom: TODAY FELLOW DUELISTS WE WILL BEGIN OUR ANNUAL DIMENSION TOURNEY!!!!! WE ARE NOT ONLY HERE TO WIN THIS TOURNAMENT BUT WE ARE HERE TO MAKE FRIENDS AND HELP EACH OTHER WITH OTHER DUELING STRATEGIES!!! NOW LET THE TOURNAMENT BEGIN!!!!!!!! Kye: Sweet Maelstrom, who do you think I should duel first? Maelstrom, Maelstrom? (Maelstrom walks over to another duelist who is wearing the clothing choice of the century; Red shirt with gold trim, Blue/grey Pants, Brown Leather Shoes and a Leopard skin Belt.) Maelstrom: Who are you... Wait!!! You're the international duelist Eric Hansen!!!! Eric: Why, yes I am. Maelstrom: Will you duel with me? Eric: Of course I don't see why not. 4000/4000 Maelstrom: I'll go first, I'll draw and summon... Sorry to cut the chapter short I have to go somewhere so i'll write the rest tomarrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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