Wyhe Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Oh damn!The dreaded cliffhanger strikes again,guess I can only wait for the next chapter now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 lord whye? Did you just say I was stupid? And what's such a bad idea about that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 lord whye? Did you just say I was stupid? And what's such a bad idea about that?No,I was refering to the idea itself.If you wedge them all in 1 post,it will be very difficult to read the fanfic itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Chapter 3: Let the Tourney begin!!! Maelstrom: I'll summon Weather Machine(1200/100)! While Weather Machine is on the field I can Special Summon Weather Technician(2200/1500)from my hand, and because of my Technician's effect you cannot select my Weather monsters as the target for a trap card. Then I'll activate Suprise Attack! This card allows me to attack even though I went first! Weather Machine attack with Flame Blizzard, and Weather Technician attack with Mechanical Blast! I'll set 2 cards and end my turn. 4000/400 Kye: I know this stratagie, Maelstom will win next turn unless Eric can pull this around!Suddenly people start to gather around. Eric: Woah, good move, to bad I have to get rid of it! I activate the magic card HEAVY STORM!!!!!!! This card destroys all magic/trap cards on the field, then I'll summon my Creator Incarnate wich allows me to tribute him to summon The Creator from my hand. Now i'll activate his effect wich allows me to discard a card from my hand to special summon a monster in my graveyard. I'll discard my Peten The Dark Clown to summon my Creator Incarnate, then my Petens effect activates, by removing him from play I can special summmon another clown from my deck to my feild. Now I'll attack with all my monsters, go my pets ATTACK!!!!! 3000/400 Maelstrom: HeHeHeHeHeHe, Game Over! I activate my 2 Select and Recieve to add my Weather God and my Storm Substatution from my deck to my hand. Then I'll activate Storm Substatution to send 3 'Weather' monsters from my my deck to my graveyard. Now I remove from play my 5 'Weather' monsters in my graveyard to summon my WEATHER GOD!!!!!!! Now Weather God attack his Peten- Eric: Nope I discard my Kuriboh to negate the attack and I lose no battle damage! Maelstrom: Thats fine because when my god doesn't attack he gets mad and takes a chunk out of your life points! Specifically 1200 points but since you have 400 I guess I win! 3000/0000 **************************************************** Gren: Marissa, I need my new deck. If i'm going to duel a champion duelist then I must have the proper cards! Let's see what deck should I take? Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, Hmmmmmmmm- Marissa: OKAY WE GET IT!!! JUST PICK A DECK!!!!!!! Gren: Okay lets go with this one. Now my friend let us depart for Dimme-Sion Town. Sorry again but it's 11:30 and I need to sleep I have to go somewhere in the moring!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Chapter 4: Eric's Story Maelstrom: Dude, great duel! You had me going there with that Creator!!! Eric: Your Welcome. Maelstrom: Anyway why are you here? Did you do something wrong? Eric: No, but I do need to talk to you and your friend. Alone. Maelstrom: Okay, follow me. They enter a room with colors and objects that are to wonderous to even explain. Maelstrom: Okay, what is it? Eric: ... Kye: Dude, if somethings wrong then you need to tell us. I've known you since 5th grade, you couldn't have done something wrong. Eric: Okay, sit down and I'll tell you what happened. They all sit down on a silk couch. Eric: Well, it all started when my dad left to go into the navy, he went away for 3 years and we never heard from him until yesterday. Everyone told us he was gone forever, but me and my mom didn't believe them. So Yesterday when I came home from my company meeting I found a note from my mom on the door, it said that she was going out to get some food for dinner and blah, blah, blah. Anyway when I went into the living room I heard a knock on the door and a car start up, I went to the door and saw nothing down the entire street except a package on my front steps. When I took the package inside I started to hear a humming noise coming from the package, I opened it up and inside were a bunch of cards and a note from my, my, my dad. In the note he said that I was to never talk to anyone except the people on the list he had made, so I built two decks of cards out of the cards I got. The one a I made first is the on I dueled you with, the second one my dad said not to use until the right time came. My dad then said something that suprised me so much that I ran outside and came straight here. Maelstrom: Wait what did he say? Kye: And who was on the list? Eric: Well, the list had your names on it, my moms, and someone else that I've never heard of. His name is Drake Norino. Maelstrom: Oh I know Drake, I'll take you to him when you answer my question. Eric: Okay, There were 81 cards in the package and I only make 40 card decks, so that extra card was made to be my Dimmension Spirit. He said that you guys and Drake also had Dimmension Spirits and that you guys could help me. Maelstrom: Yeah I have one. And so does Drake. But Kye I don't know. Kye: Yeah...I....Have one...... Maelstrom: Okay, lets all summon up our Dimmension spirits to ask them whats happening! Eric: Good Idea! Kye: Yeah that is a good idea except my Spirit is kinda bossy. Maelstrom: Thats okay we'll be fine. Kye: Okay! They all put a card on the table and yell... All: I Summon... Eric: Nerg The Destructor! Maelstrom: Weather Hero! Kye: Warrior of Virmire! All of a sudden three beings each resembling there owners but in a monsterous way appear. Maelstrom: Whoah, didn't know it would work!! Eric: Cool, but what are they staring at? Kye: LOOK!!!!! They all look out the window to see a black, red sky. And to see a duel finish off. **************************************************** ????: Injection Fairy Lilly attack and wipe out his remaining lifepoints!!! Jack: No, NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! All of a sudden jack begins to disintegrate into yellow dust wich flies away in the wind. ????: Now, where is Eric Hansen? Tell me or I'll destroy you all!!!! Just then Eric jumps out the window on Nerg's back and lands on the ground unharmed. Eric: Who are you and what do you want with me?? ????: My name is Gren and my job is to destroy you you! Eric: Gren?? Wait, I know that name it's the card my dad gave me backwards!!! Eric stares wide-eyed at the scarfaced navy blue dressed man. Eric: DAD????_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Duhn-Duhn-Duhn!!!!!! SO HOW DID YOU LIKE IT??? THREW A TWIST ON THINGS HUH!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Good chapter, what I'm thinking is putting them all in the first post except in spoilers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 dude me and lord whye have already greed on NO!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 dude me and lord whye have already greed on NO!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Okay don't spaz out... And you never said NO to it in the first place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Okay don't spaz out... And you never said NO to it in the first place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 actually i agreed with lord whye when he said that was a stupid idea and rephrase your sentence "Dont spaz out." That means Don't- don't, Spaz-you calling me a spaz, and out- go into spaz mode. So you just said Samm328 don't go into spaz mode and be a spaz. AND IF YOU"RE GOING TO ARGUE WITH ME ON MY FAN-FIC THEN GGGGGGEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTT OOOOOOOOUUUUUUUTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 actually i agreed with lord whye when he said that was a stupid idea and rephrase your sentence "Dont spaz out." That means Don't- don't, Spaz-you calling me a spaz, and out- go into spaz mode. So you just said Samm328 don't go into spaz mode and be a spaz. AND IF YOU"RE GOING TO ARGUE WITH ME ON MY FAN-FIC THEN GGGGGGEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTT OOOOOOOOUUUUUUUTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Oh my God!Jack's being sent to the stars. Also love the "Darth Vader" moment too,so will they duel? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Oh my God!Jack's being sent to the stars. Also love the "Darth Vader" moment too,so will they duel? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 yes the duel will take place today but i am going to throw some more twists into the story. I just watched the GOLDEN COMPASS its awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 yes the duel will take place today but i am going to throw some more twists into the story. I just watched the GOLDEN COMPASS its awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Chapter 5: Demented Duel Eric: Dad, dad, is that you? Gren: I don't know what you're talking about boy. But we shall have a duel to see who is fit to go to the next round of this tournament. Maelstrom: What are you talking about? Gren smiles and pulls open his jacket in which two Dimension Medals are hanging. Gren: That is what I'm talking about. Now, back to the duel I am going to allow you to take a friend with us into the DARK VORTEX to duel along side you against me and my friend. Eric: Okay, but under one condition my friend Kye comes along but doesn't duel. Gren: Okay he can come. Now lets take a trip to my realm. I activate the field spell THE DARK VORTEX!!!!!!!!! All of a sudden the three friends, Gren, and a mysterious figure who approaches just dissapear into a swirl of night. Maelstrom: GREN! Where are we? Gren: We are in my realm. A realm in which I control what and where things happen. Eric: Okay, lets just duel. Gren: Okay, may I introduce my partner in this duel Marrisa Malice. A girl no older than Gren smiled and looks at the trio. Then she did something that surprised Eric so much that he gasped, out loud. Eric: *whispers* Maelstrom, I think she just winked at us. Maelstrom: Whatever Eric, lets just duel these creeps. All: LET"S DUEL!! 8000/8000 Eric: I'll go first. I summon my Angel Guardian (1500/1200). Because of her effect I can search my deck and special summon a LIGHT monster with 1000 or less attack from my deck. So I'll special summon The Fairy Theif (950/1300), and because of his effect I can discard a card from my hand to the graveyard to increase my lifepoints by 1000 points. Then I'll set 2 cards and end my turn. 9000/8000 Gren: Well, Well, look at this it seems your using The Tonaji Fairy Deck. It's a good thing I thought ahead of that so I built this one, The Ijanot Demon Deck. I'll summon my Demon Creeper (2000/100). This card allows me to decrease my lifeppoints by 2000 to destroy all cards on the field and- Eric: No way. I'll activate my counter trap Divine Wrath, this allows me to negate and destroy your effect monster only by discarding one card in my hand. So I'll discard my Angel Queen to detsroy your Demon Creeper. But now I can special summon my Van'Dalgyon The Dark Dragon Lord (2800/2500) because I activated a counter trap card. Now I'll activate his effect to special summon my Angel Queen (2500/2800) from my graveyard. You may now continue. Eric smiles wickedly. 9000/6000 Gren: Gaaaaaah. That was good but painful. I'll set two cards and end my turn. Maelstrom: This is hillarious. I'll just set a card and end my turn. Marrisa: I'll summon D.D Warrior Lady and activate the spell card Double Summon to summon my D.D Assailant, Then I'll actvate my second Double Summon to tribute both of my D.D's to summon DARK HORUS!!! Then I'll activate Megamorph on my Dark Horus and attack.... Gren! Gren: WHAT?????? Marrisa wait, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then they all appear in front of the crowd where the had taken off from, and Gren is knocked out. Marrisa: Eric, I'm sorry about this but I had to make my master think that you needed to be destroyed so that Gren would come here with me. Eric: Wait, first who are you? What are you talking about, and Is this really my dad? Marrisa: Yes this is your dad, but he was brainwashed during the navy war and was taken to our secret hideout in the Himalayas. I'm talking about your father and your mom, don't you wonder why you havent heard from her in over a month? And my name is not Marrisa Malice, it's Marissa Winters. Eric: Marrisa Winters? Wait, you mean your the girl who disapeared when she was 5 and was never found again? Marissa: Yes, thats me. But I never meant for you to get hurt. Your mom is now captive in our holding cells in your neighborhood, but we can't get there without Maelstrom and his friend Drake. Maelstrom: We can't get there unless we get to the finals. But for now lets go find Drake. Maelstrom smiles and laughs at the days events as the gang walks off into the horizon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Chapter 5: Demented Duel Eric: Dad, dad, is that you? Gren: I don't know what you're talking about boy. But we shall have a duel to see who is fit to go to the next round of this tournament. Maelstrom: What are you talking about? Gren smiles and pulls open his jacket in which two Dimension Medals are hanging. Gren: That is what I'm talking about. Now, back to the duel I am going to allow you to take a friend with us into the DARK VORTEX to duel along side you against me and my friend. Eric: Okay, but under one condition my friend Kye comes along but doesn't duel. Gren: Okay he can come. Now lets take a trip to my realm. I activate the field spell THE DARK VORTEX!!!!!!!!! All of a sudden the three friends, Gren, and a mysterious figure who approaches just dissapear into a swirl of night. Maelstrom: GREN! Where are we? Gren: We are in my realm. A realm in which I control what and where things happen. Eric: Okay, lets just duel. Gren: Okay, may I introduce my partner in this duel Marrisa Malice. A girl no older than Gren smiled and looks at the trio. Then she did something that surprised Eric so much that he gasped, out loud. Eric: *whispers* Maelstrom, I think she just winked at us. Maelstrom: Whatever Eric, lets just duel these creeps. All: LET"S DUEL!! 8000/8000 Eric: I'll go first. I summon my Angel Guardian (1500/1200). Because of her effect I can search my deck and special summon a LIGHT monster with 1000 or less attack from my deck. So I'll special summon The Fairy Theif (950/1300), and because of his effect I can discard a card from my hand to the graveyard to increase my lifepoints by 1000 points. Then I'll set 2 cards and end my turn. 9000/8000 Gren: Well, Well, look at this it seems your using The Tonaji Fairy Deck. It's a good thing I thought ahead of that so I built this one, The Ijanot Demon Deck. I'll summon my Demon Creeper (2000/100). This card allows me to decrease my lifeppoints by 2000 to destroy all cards on the field and- Eric: No way. I'll activate my counter trap Divine Wrath, this allows me to negate and destroy your effect monster only by discarding one card in my hand. So I'll discard my Angel Queen to detsroy your Demon Creeper. But now I can special summon my Van'Dalgyon The Dark Dragon Lord (2800/2500) because I activated a counter trap card. Now I'll activate his effect to special summon my Angel Queen (2500/2800) from my graveyard. You may now continue. Eric smiles wickedly. 9000/6000 Gren: Gaaaaaah. That was good but painful. I'll set two cards and end my turn. Maelstrom: This is hillarious. I'll just set a card and end my turn. Marrisa: I'll summon D.D Warrior Lady and activate the spell card Double Summon to summon my D.D Assailant, Then I'll actvate my second Double Summon to tribute both of my D.D's to summon DARK HORUS!!! Then I'll activate Megamorph on my Dark Horus and attack.... Gren! Gren: WHAT?????? Marrisa wait, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then they all appear in front of the crowd where the had taken off from, and Gren is knocked out. Marrisa: Eric, I'm sorry about this but I had to make my master think that you needed to be destroyed so that Gren would come here with me. Eric: Wait, first who are you? What are you talking about, and Is this really my dad? Marrisa: Yes this is your dad, but he was brainwashed during the navy war and was taken to our secret hideout in the Himalayas. I'm talking about your father and your mom, don't you wonder why you havent heard from her in over a month? And my name is not Marrisa Malice, it's Marissa Winters. Eric: Marrisa Winters? Wait, you mean your the girl who disapeared when she was 5 and was never found again? Marissa: Yes, thats me. But I never meant for you to get hurt. Your mom is now captive in our holding cells in your neighborhood, but we can't get there without Maelstrom and his friend Drake. Maelstrom: We can't get there unless we get to the finals. But for now lets go find Drake. Maelstrom smiles and laughs at the days events as the gang walks off into the horizon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 chapter five up and running Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 The duel's not really exciting,but the plot twists are epic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 thanks whye. i know there not as exciting as before but for some reason i can't think straight so whye look in your pm box. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2008 Chapter 6: Meet Drake Maelstrom: Okay guys, Drake lives just over that hill but be cautious just like mine his bodyguards are vicious. Kye: Okay I'll be careful. Eric: Me too. Marissa: As will I. ????: Don't forget me. Eric why don't you introduce me to your friends. Eric turns around scared stiffless. Eric: DAD???? Gren: Yes, tis I. So who are these young whipper snappers? Eric: Well this my new friend Marissa, and two of the four people you said only to talk to, Maelstrom Shwartz, and Kye Marliss we're going to see Drake right now and mom hasn't been home in over a month. Gren: Hmmm. I see, well lets go see Drake then shall we? 20 minutes later at Drake Norino's front door. Maelstrom: Okay, everyone go back 12 feet and hold your breath when I say go. He rings the door bell when a wall shines and begins to come down full of gas escaping from the sides of the house. Maelstrom: *choking* Okay, go. Everyone steped backward 12 feet just as a metal wall shot up out of the ground. They then held their breath as gas shot out of the metal wall. 15 seconds later everything went back to normal as if nothing even happened. Maelstrom: Okay, you guys can come up now, Drake is coming up to the door. Drake: Hello? Oh Maelstrom hey there how are you my good friend? Maelstrom: Good I guess. Oh Drake I need you to let me and my friends in it's an emergency.****************************************************Drake: So, all of that happened in one day? Wow, and I thought I was lucky! Maelstrom: So, you'll help us? Drake: Of course and wait... why is that guy looking at me wierdly? Gren: Oh, HaHa, Sorry. I was just thinking about the days events. Maelstrom: Hey Gren, why do you have a tatoo of a teardrop on your neck? Gren: Well, thats a "funny" story really. That isn't a tatoo it's the sign of Torentia The Water Being. Eric has one too. Eric looks at his hand. Eric: So, thats what that is! Hey Dad, how many "beings" are there? Gren: Hmmmm. There are 6 "Spiritual Beings" in this world. That is how some duelists can bring "Duel Spirits" to life. Okay, everyone hold out there hand and count to three. Everyone does so as Gren chants something. Gren: Freu Ghea Haqi Vaxz VeTotei!! Suddenly signs appear on everyones except Eric's hand. Gren: Let's see we have a Star on Maelstrom's hand which means he can use LIGHT monsters more powerfully than everyone else and summon up LIGHT demons, we have a Moon on Drake's hand which means he can use DARK monsters more powerfully than everyone else and summon up DARK demons, we have a Rock on Kye's hand which means he can use EARTH monsters more powerfully than everyone else and summon up EARTH demons and we have a Flame on Marissa's hand which means she can use FIRE monsters more powerfully than everyone else and summon up FIRE demons. Maelstrom: ... Drake: Well, since we have now discovered our "Talents" even though I wouldn't call them that, we should build new decks. But first I want to duel you Kye. Kye: Me???!!!!?!??! Drake: Yes I want to see your deck and your skills. So what do you say right here right now, but we have to move the furniture first. Kye : I say, LET"S DUEL!!! Tommorow the chapter of this duel will be up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 Well,this chapter is good so far.Another revelation is that our heroes have some unique powers there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 actually i agreed with lord whye when he said that was a stupid idea and rephrase your sentence "Dont spaz out." That means Don't- don't' date=' Spaz-you calling me a spaz, and out- go into spaz mode. So you just said Samm328 don't go into spaz mode and be a spaz.[/b'] sigged. AND IF YOU"RE GOING TO ARGUE WITH ME ON MY FAN-FIC THEN GGGGGGEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTT OOOOOOOOUUUUUUUTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don'y want to start a fight or anything, but that talking about me saying dont spaz out, makes absolutley no sence. And please show me the post that says that you don't like my idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 right here: I DONT LIKE YOUR IDEA!!!!!!Oh and I made that thing up because your a spaz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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