komui2 Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 This is story about a boy and his 3 friends on a quest to find the Bright Light & Black Shadow Deck before the evil Jair does. Enjoy the story!:D P.S. People, I would appreciate your opinion or ideas [size=x-large]Table of Contents[/size] [size=medium] Volume 1:Chapters 1-10.....................................Page 1, Post 1 Volume 2:Chapter 11.........................................Page 1, Post 13[/size] ------------------------------------------------------------- [size=xx-large]Volume 1[/size] [spoiler=Characters in story so far] [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/14cxnag.jpg[/IMG] Name:Tint Wielder Age: 13 Deck: Dragon Info:Recently, Tint Wielder was a nobody in dueling, and hadn't even won once in his life. Then he found out about the Bright Light Deck, the most powerful deck in the world. Now Tint has found out that the evil Jair is off to find both the bright light deck and the black shadow deck so he can rule the world, and possibly the universe. Now Tint, Tetsuo, Zack and Shana, have to get to the deck before Jair does, not only to stop his reign but also to balance out the shadow realm leakage in the world. [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/2nsu9sh.jpg[/IMG] Name: Tetsuo Mashima Age: 16 Deck: Perth Guardian Info/Future: Tetsuo has a very dark past, and you'll soon find out he is no ordinary duelist. In a later episode find out the secret of the Perth Guardians. [IMG]http://i31.tinypic.com/21ag2ty.jpg[/IMG] Name: Chris Lee Age: 21 Deck: Destiny Hero Info/Future: If you thought that chapter 3 was the last time you'd see Chris Think again. He'll come back and reveal his ultimate monster. [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/2yv7ygp.jpg[/IMG] Name: Goryu Sato Age: 19 Deck: Light Info/Future: If people think that Goryu was a one time character, think again. He'll be back, not to soon but I assure you he will be back. [IMG]http://i26.tinypic.com/2jbmmfl.png[/IMG] Name: Densaga Sudey Age: 12 Deck: Envoy Info/Future: Don't let his rosy red cheeks fool you, this kid's deck is strong. He didn't show his true power in his first appearance but it doesn't mean he's weak. [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/dyad52.gif[/IMG] Name: Shana Mukori Age: 13 Deck: Wind Info: Sister of Zack Mukori, this girls favorite cards are the Wynn cards. [IMG]http://i26.tinypic.com/2rnvuoh.png[/IMG] Name: Zack Mukori Age: 15 1/2 Deck: Fire. Info: After their duel, this boy reveals to Tint and Tetsuo the real purpose of the Bright Light deck, and why they must get it and the Black Shadow deck before Jair does. His favorite card is Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 10. (thats right Lv 10) _________________________________________________[/spoiler] [Spoiler=Chapter 1]Characters in this chapter: [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/14cxnag.jpg[/IMG] Name:Tint Wielder Age: 13 Deck: Random Info:Tint Wielder only wants to be the best, but every deck he uses turns out to be a complete failure. Then one day, he learns about the White Light deck and decides to travel to the temple of light and darkness to retrieve it. The question is, will he make it inside the temple? And if he does, will he come out alive? [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/2nsu9sh.jpg[/IMG] Name: Tetsuo Mashima Age: 16 Deck: Perth Guardian Info: Tetsuo is Tint's best friend and tells Tint about the White Light Deck. He decides that Tint will turn up dead if he goes on this journey alone and accompanies him in his quest. (Character Pictures by www.animecharactersdatabase.com ____________________________________________________________ [url=http://youtube.com/watch?v=Q3emkceOE-g] Theme Song[/url] Chapter 1 : Practice It was a regular day in West Valley. Birds were chirping, people were mowing their lawns, and just as always, Tint and Tetsuo were training for the Regional Duel Tournament. Tint: Alright Tetsuo, let's get this party started! Tetsuo: Just so you can lose again? Fine by me. You go first. Tint: Big mistake! (Tint and Tetsuo activate their duel disks) (Tint Draws 6 cards as Tetsuo draws 5) Tint: I Summon, X Head Cannon in attack mode! (ATK:1800) and activate the spell card, graceful Charity! Now I draw 3 cards and discard 2 of them. (He draws Z-Metal Tank, Y-Dragon Head and Scarr, Scout of Dark World) I'll discard Scarr, Scout of Dark World and Z-Metal Tank! And now that Scarr has been sent to the graveyard, I can take one Level 4 or lower Dark World monster from my deck and add it to my hand. Now I end my turn with a face down. Tetsuo: My move, (Tetsuo draws) and I activate the spell Pot of Greed, now I draw 2 cards. Now, seeing there is one card in my graveyard, I can Special Summon in Face-up defense position, Pylon! [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/2l93b5v.jpg[/IMG] Tint: You expect to beat me with that? Tetsuo: Not exactly... I put down a face down and end my turn. Tint: My turn, (Tint Draws) and I Summon Y-Dragon Head, in attack mode (ATK: 1500) and now I activate Monster Reborn, to bring back, Z-Metal Tank. Now I remove them from play to Special Summon, XYZ-Dragon Cannon! (ATK: 2800) Now I activate his Special Ability, by discarding one card from my hand I can destroy one card on the field, and it's gonna be your Pylon! But guess what? I discarded Grenn, Tactician of Dark World for XYZ's effect, which means I can destroy one spell or trap on the field, and I'll choose yours! With all of his defenses gone, Tetsuo became nervous. Tint: Now, XYZ-Dragon Cannon, attack him directly! (Tetsuo LP: 8000-2800=5200) Tint: Your next move better be a good one! (Tetsuo draws) Tetsuo: I Special Summon, once again, Pylon in defense mode! Now I activate, Switch Set, [IMG]http://i30.tinypic.com/r0a8nr.jpg[/IMG] now I can set one spell, trap or monster card on your side of the field. I'll think I'll set a spell. Now hears the catch, you can't activate the spell card, but I can activate it when ever I want. To bad, I think I'll end my turn. Tint: I think this duel is almost over! I activate Dragon Cannon's effect and destroy your Pylon. Now XYZ, attack him directly! Tetsuo: Not so fast! Remember when I used Switch Set? Well now I'm activating that spell card! And it is... [IMG]http://i32.tinypic.com/2ef6tjr.jpg[/IMG] Tint: Say what? Tetsuo: Basically you can't attack this turn. Tint: Fine, your turn (Tetsuo Draws) Tetsuo: Again, I Special Summon Pylon! Now I activate, Sheild and Sword, which switches the ATK and DEF of all monsters! Tint:Uh Oh that means (XYZ-Dragon Cannon ATK:2600) (Pylon ATK:2000) But that's still not enough to beat my dragon. Tetsuo: But I'm not done yet, I equip to Pylon, Axe of despair, which increases Pylon's ATK by 1000 (Pylon ATK:3000) now Pylon, destroy his Dragon Cannon! (Tint LP: 3000-2600=400, 8000-400=7600) Tetsuo: Now I put down a face down and end my turn. (Pylon ATK: 1000) Tint: My turn, (Tint Draws) and I Summon, Goblin Attack Force in attack mode (ATK: 2300) now destroy his Pylon, Tetsuo: I don't think so, I activate Mirror Force, which negates the attack and destroys your monster! Tint: Darn it, I guess I'll put down a Face down and end my turn. Tetsuo: My Turn (Tetsuo draws) and I Special Summon Pylon in defense mode, Tint: Big surprise, (rolls his eyes) Tetsuo: and now I activate, C.J.'s Cool Glasses, [IMG]http://i32.tinypic.com/2mnjj2r.jpg[/IMG] which allows me to sacrifice my 2 Pylons to Ritual Summon, C.J.-The Guardian of Night![IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/2mo2lh2.jpg[/IMG] And when he's face up on the field you can't activate any traps or quick play spells! Tint: Why do I have a feeling this is going to hurt? Tetsuo: Now C.J., Black Slash! (Tint LP: 7600-3500=3100) Tetsuo: Your move. Tint: (Tint draws) Ah man, I've got nothing! So I end my turn, Tetsuo: Alright then, (Tetsuo draws) C.J., Black Slash! Tint: AAAAAAAAAGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! (Tint LP: 3100-3500=0) ___________________________________________________[/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 2]Characters in this chapter: [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/14cxnag.jpg[/IMG] Name:Tint Wielder Age: 13 Deck: Random Info:Tint Wielder only wants to be the best, but every deck he uses turns out to be a complete failure. Then one day, he learns about the White Light deck and decides to travel to the temple of light and darkness to retrieve it. The question is, will he make it inside the temple? And if he does, will he come out alive? [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/2nsu9sh.jpg[/IMG] Name: Tetsuo Mashima Age: 16 Deck: Perth Guardian Info: Tetsuo is Tint's best friend and tells Tint about the White Light Deck. He decides that Tint will turn up dead if he goes on this journey alone and accompanies him in his quest. ___________________________________________________ [url=http://youtube.com/watch?v=Q3emkceOE-g] Theme Song[/url] Chapter 2 : The temple of light and darkness Tint and Tetsuo's duel disks deactivated. Tint fell to the ground in shame. He and Tetsuo then walked over to a bench and sat down. Tint: Ah Man! Every deck I use just keeps losing! Tetsuo: C'mon little guy, you can't give up now. Tint: You don't understand, I've never won a single battle with any of my last 6 decks, and I used them 10 times each! Tetsuo: All you need to do is buy a better deck. Tint: What do you think I've been doing all this time? What I need right now is the greatest deck in the world! Tetsuo: Well... Tint: Well what? Tetsuo: Never mind. Tint grabbed Tetsuo by the shirt. Tint: Darn it you know something! Tetsuo: Well this thing might not even exist! Tint: I'll take my chances! Tetsuo: Fine, just let go of me! Tint released his grasp. Tetsuo: Legend has it, in the middle of North, South, East, and West Valley, is something called the temple of light darkness, and inside lies the White Light deck. Tint started to get interested. Tetsuo: They say it's the most powerful deck in the world, but, 10 people once went to the so called "Temple of Light and Darkness", yet they were never to be seen again. No one has ever even attempted to go to the temple since. Tint: Wow. Well this changes everything, tomorrow, I'm heading to the temple of light and darkness! Tint sat there and there was a long pause. Tetsuo then punched tint in the head. Tint: What was that for? Tetsuo: Did you listen to what I just said or are you deaf? You would have to be crazy to go there! Tint: Well, I've literally got nothing to lose. Tetsuo: Yes you do, YOUR LIFE! Tint: Has that ever stopped me before? Tetsuo: YES! Tint: Well this is different. I love duel monsters and knowing I've never won is humiliating! Tetsuo: Your not serious. Tint: I AM! Tetsuo: Tint, I gotta say, you have guts, but I know you'll turn up dead if you do this alone, so... I'll come with you. Tint: Your the best! Alright here's what will do. You'll come over today for a 2 day sleep over. When Chris goes to sleep tonight, we'll pack are things for tomorrow. When Chris goes to sleep the second night, we sneak out. Got it? Tetsuo: Got it. Tetsuo and Tint then got up and headed to Tint's house. _________________________________________________________ [/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 3]Characters in this chapter: [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/14cxnag.jpg[/IMG] Name:Tint Wielder Age: 13 Deck: Random Info:Tint Wielder only wants to be the best, but every deck he uses turns out to be a complete failure. Then one day, he learns about the White Light deck and decides to travel to the temple of light and darkness to retrieve it. The question is, will he make it inside the temple? And if he does, will he come out alive? [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/2nsu9sh.jpg[/IMG] Name: Tetsuo Mashima Age: 16 Deck: Perth Guardian Info: Tetsuo is Tint's best friend and tells Tint about the White Light Deck. He decides that Tint will turn up dead if he goes on this journey alone and accompanies him in his quest. [IMG]http://i31.tinypic.com/21ag2ty.jpg[/IMG] Name: Chris Lee Age: 21 Deck: Destiny Hero Info:When Chris (Tint's Legal Guardian) finds out what Tint and Tetsuo are up to, he forbids them to leave. Of course they sneak out that night. ___________________________________________________ [url=http://youtube.com/watch?v=Q3emkceOE-g] Theme Song[/url] Chapter 3 : The Great Escape Tint and Tetsuo walked through the door. Tint: Chris! I'm Home! Chris came down the stairs. Chris: Hey Tint! You and Tetsuo finished your practise duel? Tint: Yeah, Tetsuo: Afternoon Mr. Lee. Chris Lee was a Dueling Teacher in the neighborhood's Acadamy. He was a very skilled duelist and taught Tetsuo in West Valley Duel Academy. Chris: I'm guessing that Tint lost again. Tint: Ya don't have to rub it in ya know. Chris: I know, but it's fun! Tetsuo: Excuse me Mr. Lee, but is it ok that I can sleep over here for a couple of days. Chris: Sure. Tint (thinking): Yes! My plan is falling right into place! Tetsuo: Great! I'll go back to my place to pack my stuff! Tint: Hey, I'll help too. Chris: Ok, be back in an hour. Tint: Make it 2. Tint and Tetsuo ran out of the house. ***************** Mean while, in South Valley, an old monk was looking at the stars. Suddenly, the new moon and the north star eclipsed one another. Monk: My God, the Omen of light and darkness is upon us! The monk searched through hundreds of scrolls until he found the right one. He read allowed: On the night that the new moon and the north star eclipse, 10 weeks from then, the God of White Light and The King of Darkness shall do their final battle, creating the fate of the world! Monk: I have to give warning to the 4 valleys! The Monk bolted out of his tower to get to the 4 valleys. ************************ Mean while, Tetsuo and Tint were finished packing every necessary essential there was: Fruit, Rice, a Pot, Matches, an Axe, a Fold up Tent, a Compass, a Flash Light, a Duel Disk, a Deck and enough bottled water and potato chips to last 10 weeks. Tint: That should do it! Tetsuo: Tomorrow, we head for the temple! ********************** One day later. It was late at night and Tetsuo and Tint were discussing what to do when they got to the temple. Chris came by and just over heard them. Chris kicked the door open. Chris: Did you say you were going to the temple of light and darkness?????!!!!! Tint and Tetsuo: Uuuuuuuhhhhhhhhh Chris: I never want you to go to that temple no matter what! Tint: Ok Chris... Tetsuo: Ok Mr. Lee.. Chris walked out of the room. Tetsuo: Were still sneaking out right? Tint: Oh ya. Tint and Tetsuo waited for Chris to fall asleep then threw their belongings out the window. After words they climbed out of the window. When they reached the ground, they put on their camping back packs and headed off, compass in hand. ___________________________________________[/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 4]Characters in this chapter: [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/14cxnag.jpg[/IMG] Name:Tint Wielder Age: 13 Deck: Dragon Info:Tint Wielder only wants to be the best, but every deck he uses turns out to be a complete failure. Then one day, he learns about the White Light deck and decides to travel to the temple of light and darkness to retrieve it. The question is, will he make it inside the temple? And if he does, will he come out alive? [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/2nsu9sh.jpg[/IMG] Name: Tetsuo Mashima Age: 16 Deck: Perth Guardian Info: Tetsuo is Tint's best friend and tells Tint about the White Light Deck. He decides that Tint will turn up dead if he goes on this journey alone and accompanies him in his quest. [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/2yv7ygp.jpg[/IMG] Name: Goryu Sato Age: 19 Deck: Light Info: Currently unknown _______________________________________ [url=http://youtube.com/watch?v=Q3emkceOE-g] Theme Song[/url] Chapter 4 : The Encounter Tetsuo and Tint were walking down a long earthy path way. They were both very tired. Tetsuo: How long have we been walking? Tint: About a day by now. Tetsuo: Damn, and not a single town? Tint: Nope Tetsuo: Who ever thought that traveling to the temple would take so much work? Tint: (Sigh) You did. Suddenly, a figure appeared in front of them. He wore a white robe and had Grey hare and eyes. Tint: Hello there. ???: Afternoon. What brings you here? Tint: We're looking for a near by town, do you know any? ???: Yes, just behind me, although you'll have to duel me if you want to go there. Tint: Ah man, fine I'll duel you. Tetsuo: Wait, Tint, you suck. Tint: First of all, SHUT UP! Second of all, I have a different deck this time, my father's... Tetsuo: Oh, well, good luck. Tint: Wont need it, now are ya ready? ???: As ready as I'll ever be, and by the way, it's Goryu. They activated their duel disks. Goryu and Tint: DUEL! (G LP:4000) (T LP:4000) Tint: I'll go first. (Draws) I summon Red-Eyes B. Chick in attack mode (Atk: 800), now by sacrificing him I can summon Red-Eyes B. Dragon in attack mode! (Atk: 2400) now I put down a face down and end my turn. Goryu: My turn (Draws) I'll summon Freed the Brave Wanderer in defense mode, Tint: Not so fast I activate, compulsory evacuation device which send your monster to your hand. Goryu: Then I'll end my turn with 2 face downs. Tint: My Turn, (Draws) I'll summon Luster Dragon to the field in attack mode (Atk: 1900) now I fuse him, Red eyes black dragon and 3 other monsters in my hand to summon, 5 Headed Dragon!(Atk: 5000) Now I activate Heavy Storm which wipes out every one of your face downs (Storm appears and face downs shatter) Now 5 Headed Dragon, Quintuple Blast! (G LP:4000-5000=0) Goryu fell to the ground in pain. Tetsuo rushed over to him. Tetsuo: He'll be fine, I think... Anyway good dueling back there! Tint: Told you I could take him, now lets go! Tint and Tetsuo ran down the earth path way. ____________________________________________[/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 5]Characters in this chapter: [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/14cxnag.jpg[/IMG] Name:Tint Wielder Age: 13 Deck: Dragon Info:Tint Wielder only wants to be the best, but every deck he uses turns out to be a complete failure. Then one day, he learns about the White Light deck and decides to travel to the temple of light and darkness to retrieve it. The question is, will he make it inside the temple? And if he does, will he come out alive? [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/2nsu9sh.jpg[/IMG] Name: Tetsuo Mashima Age: 16 Deck: Perth Guardian Info: Tetsuo is Tint's best friend and tells Tint about the White Light Deck. He decides that Tint will turn up dead if he goes on this journey alone and accompanies him in his quest. [IMG]http://i26.tinypic.com/2jbmmfl.png[/IMG] Name: Densaga Sudey Age: 12 Deck: Envoy Info: Brother of Jair Sudey ______________________________________________________ [url=http://youtube.com/watch?v=Q3emkceOE-g] Theme Song[/url] Chapter 5 : Town of Shadows Tetsuo and Tint walked down a hill and found the town. It had a thick layer of fog on it. Tetsuo and Tint kept walking. They came up to a steak house and decided to go in. When they came in Tint realized he forgot to bring cash. Tint: Damn, wait a sec! He walked over to a person sitting at a table. Tint: Do you know where the dueling central in this town are? Person: Dueling central, are you sure you want to go there? Tint: Uh, ya. Person: Well I suppose I can't help you now, it's right around the corner, but be careful. Tint: Uh, ok... Tint and Tetsuo walked out. Tint: That was strange, why did he act so weird? Tetsuo: Beats me. They turned the corner, walked up to the Duel Central and went inside. When they entered a duel was already underway. One man used a luster dragon #2 and finished the other off. The kid fell to the ground, eyes grey. Tint: Huh? Man: Huh? You never seen a shadow duel before? Tint: Shadow duel? Man: Guess I'll have to teach you, ???: Wait, I'll take him on. Tint: And you are? ???: I'm Densaga, and you are. Tint: Tint, and I'll take you on! Tetsuo: Don't, you'll just get hurt, I'll take him on. Tint: HURT!?! Tetsuo: Notice that that guy Goryu fell unconscious when he was beaten, then the guy who lost as soon as we got in fell unconscious too? The duels here are shadow duels, a duel where you lose, you also lose your soul. Tint: You mean I could of lost my soul in that duel?!?!?!? Tetsuo: Just let me handle him. Tint: What ever. Tetsuo: Alright pall, let's duel. Densaga: Alright, but just a regular duel, if I win I want you to stay alive for my brother, he'll enjoy taking your soul more then I will. Tetsuo: I'll right, let's go! Tetsuo and Densaga: DUEL! (T LP: 4000) (D LP: 4000) Tetsuo: Draw! I summon Phantoas-Guardian of shadows in attack mode[IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/53p95i.jpg[/IMG] now I activate pot of greed and I draw 2 cards, (draws) and now I special summon Pylon in defense mode since there is a card in my graveyard. Now I put down a face down and end my turn. Densaga: My turn (Draws) I activate the card lightning vortex, I discard a card from my hand and your monsters go bye-bye. Tetsuo: Fine by me, Densaga: Now I summon reflect bounder in attack mode,(Atk: 1700) now I end my turn. Tetsuo: My turn (Draws) I activate monster reborn to bring back Phantoas, now I special summon two Pylons on my side of the field, now I sacrifice my pylon to summon Peter, Guardian of the mist[IMG]http://i30.tinypic.com/2pzbes8.jpg[/IMG]now seeing you only have one monster, Peter, Sneak Attack! (A mist falls and and Peter kicks Densaga in the head) (D LP: 4000-1900=2100) (Densaga rubs his head) Dansaga: I summon breaker the magical warrior, (Atk: 1600) when he is summoned, he gets a spell counter, and every spell counter he gets 300 attack points (Atk: 1900) now destroy his phantoas, Tetsuo: I don't think so, I activate snow day! [IMG]http://i27.tinypic.com/xazxq0.jpg[/IMG] This ends your turn and gives me an extra turn! Now I special summon mini Pylon [IMG]http://i28.tinypic.com/1zce0wg.jpg[/IMG] now I special another mini pylon and sacrifice both of my mini pylons to David-Guardian of the rain forest [IMG]http://i31.tinypic.com/2m34i76.jpg[/IMG] now David, destroy his Breaker, (D LP: 1900-2100=200-2100=1900) now Peter, attack him directly, Sneak Attack! (D LP: 1900-1900=0) Densaga: You really are a powerful duelist, but maybe you wont be so lucky when you have a little tag team duel with two of my friends, but no shadow duel. If you two can beat them then I'll give you $100 and you'll truly be able to face my brother, Will Tint and Tetsuo defeat these "friends"? Find out next time on Duel Monsters-Omen of light and darkness![/spoiler][spoiler=Chapter 6]Characters in this Chapter: [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/14cxnag.jpg[/IMG] Name:Tint Wielder Age: 13 Deck: Dragon Info:Tint Wielder only wants to be the best, but every deck he uses turns out to be a complete failure. Then one day, he learns about the White Light deck and decides to travel to the temple of light and darkness to retrieve it. The question is, will he make it inside the temple? And if he does, will he come out alive? [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/2u75d78.jpg[/IMG] Name: Tetsuo Mashima Age: 16 Deck: Perth Guardian Info: Tetsuo is Tint's best friend and tells Tint about the White Light Deck. He decides that Tint will turn up dead if he goes on this journey alone and accompanies him in his quest. [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/6hjcph.png[/IMG] Name: Densaga Sudey Age: 12 Deck: Envoy Info: Brother of Jair Sudey [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/dyad52.gif[/IMG] Name: Shana Mukori Age: 13 Deck: Wind Info: Sister of Zack Mukori, this girls favorite cards are the Wynn cards. [IMG]http://i26.tinypic.com/2rnvuoh.png[/IMG] Name: Zack Mukori Age: 15 1/2 Deck: Fire. Info: After their duel, this boy reveals to Tint and Tetsuo the real purpose of the Bright Light deck, and why they must get it and the Black Shadow deck before Jair does. His favorite card is Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 10. (thats right Lv 10) _____________________________________________________________ [url=http://youtube.com/watch?v=Q3emkceOE-g] Theme Song[/url] Chapter 6 : TAG TEAM DUEL!!! Tint: So who are these “friends” of yours? Den(Densaga): Why dont you come out guys? A girl and a boy came out of a basement, their eyes completely grey and empty. Den: This is Zack and Shana, they are my brother’s puppets. If you win, their souls will be returned, if you lose, your soul will be lost as well. Tint: Sounds good to me, so is this a tag team duel? Den: Precisely. Tint: Is this ok with you Tetsuo? Tetsuo: Ya. Tint: Lets do this, Tetsuo, Tint, Zack & Shana : Duel! T & Te LP: 8000 Z & S LP: 8000 Tint: I’ll go first. Tint drew Blue Eyes white dragon, Red Eyes B. Dragon, Red Eyes B. Chick, Blue Eyes White Chick, Blues Eyes White Dragon and Polymerization. Tint: I activate Polymerization to fuse in my hand Blue eyes White Dragon and Red Eyes Black Dragon to summon, Red Eyes White Dragon! [IMG]http://i27.tinypic.com/2v3moth.jpg[/IMG] now I offer him as a Tribute to summon Red Eyes Shining Dragon!!!!!!!! [IMG]http://i28.tinypic.com/ncjhnl.jpg[/IMG] and he gains 300 ATK for every Dragon in my grave, thats 3 so he gains 900 ATK! Red Eyes Shining Dragon: Atk: 4000 Now I end my turn. Zack: My turn, (Draws) I summon Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 4 in attack mode Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 4 Atk: 1600 now I equip to him 2 axe of despairs and one malevolent nuzzler to my Horus, boosting his attack by 2700 (Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 4 Atk: 4300) Tint and Tetsuo’s jaw dropped. Tint: A F, F, Forty-three Hundred attack point monster, on his first turn? Zack: Now destroy his Red Eyes Shining Dragon! Black Flame Attack! The black fire hit red eyes and he started to burn up, then he shattered into a thousand pieces. T & Te LP: 7700 Z & S LP: 8000 Zack: Now when my Horus destroys a monster, I can special summon Horus The Black Flame Dragon Lv 6! Horus Lv 4 disappeared and out emerged a dragon three times its size. Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 6 Atk: 2300 Zack: Now I end my turn. Tetsuo(Thinking): This guy is a heavy hitter, I got to go all out. Tetsuo: I summon Phantoas, Guardian of Shadows in attack mode [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/27xno8z.jpg[/IMG] now I activate the card hard math homework [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/2w4wdx5.jpg[/IMG] now you skip 3 turns, now I activate the field spell, Portable 1! [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/smf13m.jpg[/IMG] now my Guardians get a 300 Attack boost, and since hard math homework is on the field you skip 5 turns instead of 3! Now I end my turn, and we go straight to Tint’s turn. Tint: Right. I activate monster reborn to bring back Blue Eyes White Dragon, now attack Shana! A White blast shot out of Blue Eyes’ mouth and hit Shana. T & Te LP: 7700 Z & S LP: 5000 Tetsuo: Now my turn (Draws) and I Special Summon Mini Pylon in defense mode seeing there is a monster on my field, [IMG]http://i30.tinypic.com/302cnsi.jpg[/IMG] now I special summon another [IMG]http://i30.tinypic.com/302cnsi.jpg[/IMG] and I sacrifice them both to summon David, Guardian of the rainforest [IMG]http://i28.tinypic.com/wi7a80.jpg[/IMG] and thanks to portable 1, he gains 300 Attack David, Guardian of the rainforest Atk: 2300 and since I have a warrior in my hand he gains 200 more attack points David, Guardian of the rainforest Atk: 2500 now attack, Phantoas and David! Attack Shana Black energy came from Phantoas and squeezed, at the same time David jumped in the air, came down and kicked 2500 life points out of Shana. T & Te LP: 7700 Z & S LP: 500 Tint: Now my turn, and I activate ultimate offering, now I can pay 500 life points to normal summon another monster. First I summon Red Eyes Black Chick Red Eyes B. Chick Atk: 800 now I pay 500 to summon blue eyes white chick [IMG]http://i27.tinypic.com/1539pjb.jpg[/IMG] T & Te LP: 7200 Z & S LP: 500 now I pay 1000 and sacrifice him to Special Summon Blue Eyes B. Dragon [IMG]http://i30.tinypic.com/2afa71f.jpg[/IMG] T & Te LP: 6200 Z & S LP: 500 and I offer him as a sacrifice to summon Blue Eyes Darkness Dragon! [IMG]http://i30.tinypic.com/sn1i7c.jpg[/IMG] and he gains 200 Attack for every Dragon in my grave! I count 7 so he gains 1400! Blue Eyes Darkness Dragon Atk: 4000 Now attack Shana and finish this, Dark Blue Blast! T & Te LP: 6200 Z & S LP: 0 Tint: And thats game! Shana and Zack’s eyes returned to normal. Zack: What happened, wait a sec! Your him! Tint: Who, me? Zack: Yes, please come with me, you too. C’mon sister. __________________________________________________[/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 7] [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/14cxnag.jpg[/IMG] Name:Tint Wielder Age: 13 Deck: Dragon Info:Recently, Tint Wielder was a nobody in dueling, and hadn't even won once in his life. Then he found out about the Bright Light Deck, the most powerful deck in the world. Now Tint has found out that the evil Jair is off to find both the bright light deck and the black shadow deck so he can rule the world, and possibly the universe. Now Tint, Tetsuo, Zack and Shana, have to get to the deck before Jair does, not only to stop his reign but also to balance out the shadow realm leakage in the world. [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/2u75d78.jpg[/IMG] Name: Tetsuo Mashima Age: 16 Deck: Perth Guardian Info: Tetsuo is Tint's best friend and tells Tint about the White Light Deck. He decides that Tint will turn up dead if he goes on this journey alone and accompanies him in his quest. [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/dyad52.gif[/IMG] Name: Shana Mukori Age: 13 Deck: Wind Info: Sister of Zack Mukori, this girls favorite cards are the Wynn cards. [IMG]http://i26.tinypic.com/2rnvuoh.png[/IMG] Name: Zack Mukori Age: 15 1/2 Deck: Fire. Info: After their duel, this boy reveals to Tint and Tetsuo the real purpose of the Bright Light deck, and why they must get it and the Black Shadow deck before Jair does. His favorite card is Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 10. (thats right Lv 10) ___________________________________________________________ [url=http://youtube.com/watch?v=Q3emkceOE-g] Theme Song[/url] Chapter 7 : The Mission All four of them walked over to Zack’s house. They sat on the couches. Zack: Have you come to do what I think you are. Tint: If you’re thinking to get the white light deck then yes. Zack: I always knew this day would come. Do you know a boy named Jair? Tint: Who? Zack: Jair is Densaga’s brother. Tint: That kid? Zack nodded. Zack: You see at the temple of light and darkness, there are 2 decks. The White Light Deck and the Black Shadow Deck. Underneath the temple lies The Creator lord, the balancer of light and darkness. Recently the Shadow part of the creator lord, also known as the Shadow realm, has leaked out and spreaded through out the 4 valleys. Now every duel is a shadow duel. Tint: How do you know this? Zack: The monk of the east warned us, anyway, now the chosen one has to balance out the shadow realm leakage with a light realm leakage, and that can only be made happen if The Creator lord’s power is unleashed with the power of the 2 decks. Although there’s a complication, Jair wants the power of the creator lord for himself. If that happens, the world, and possibly the universe, is doomed. Tint Froze Tint: Good Jesus, Tetsuo: No pressure. Zack: I know this is going to be the most grueling and anguishing adventure of your life and maybe history, so me and my sister will accompany you. Tint: Why me? Tint’s adventure is really going to begin now, but what lies ahead? Find out next time on yugioh- omen of light and darkness chapter 8: It Begins[/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 8]Characters in this chapter: [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/14cxnag.jpg[/IMG] Name:Tint Wielder Age: 13 Deck: Dragon Info:Recently, Tint Wielder was a nobody in dueling, and hadn't even won once in his life. Then he found out about the Bright Light Deck, the most powerful deck in the world. Now Tint has found out that the evil Jair is off to find both the bright light deck and the black shadow deck so he can rule the world, and possibly the universe. Now Tint, Tetsuo, Zack and Shana, have to get to the deck before Jair does, not only to stop his reign but also to balance out the shadow realm leakage in the world. [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/2nsu9sh.jpg[/IMG] Name: Tetsuo Mashima Age: 16 Deck: Perth Guardian Info: Tetsuo is Tint's best friend and tells Tint about the White Light Deck. He decides that Tint will turn up dead if he goes on this journey alone and accompanies him in his quest. [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/dyad52.gif[/IMG] Name: Shana Mukori Age: 13 Deck: Wind Info: Sister of Zack Mukori, this girls favorite cards are the Wynn cards. [IMG]http://i26.tinypic.com/2rnvuoh.png[/IMG] Name: Zack Mukori Age: 15 1/2 Deck: Fire. Info: After their duel, this boy reveals to Tint and Tetsuo the real purpose of the Bright Light deck, and why they must get it and the Black Shadow deck before Jair does. His favorite card is Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 10. (thats right Lv 10) [IMG]http://i31.tinypic.com/21ag2ty.jpg[/IMG] Name: Chris Lee Age: 21 Deck: Destiny Hero Info:When Chris (Tint's Legal Guardian) finds out what Tint and Tetsuo are up to, he forbids them to leave. Of course they sneak out that night. ___________________________________________________ [url=http://youtube.com/watch?v=Q3emkceOE-g] Theme Song[/url] Chapter 8 : It Begins Last time on Omen of Light of Darkness, Tint realized that he was a chosen one who had to save the world by retrieving both the White Light and Black Shadow Decks to even out the part of the world that was polluted by the Shadow Realm by Releasing the Light Realm. Of course this has put allot of pressure on Tint. “So let me get this straight,” said Tint. “I have to save the world?” “Precisely” replied Zack. “You are up for it, aren’t you?” asked Shana with a smirk on her face. “Uh, kind of” said Tint. “Good then. Let’s leave, we need all the daylight we can get.” said Zack. “O.K. then” said Tetsuo, knowing that Tint wouldn’t stand a chance on this adventure. They took their backpacks and went out the door, never to return again. ******************************************** Mean while outside of town, a familiar face was walking down the dirt pathway. It was Chris. [color=#008080]“Those two couldn’t of gotten far. If only they knew what real danger they were in.”[/color] Chris thought. “Hey! You there!” Someone called. Chris looked around to see no one else was around him and came to the conclusion that the man was talking to him. “Yes?” Chris replied. “You’re not allowed here unless you can beat me in a duel, and only two have ever gotten in here.” [color=#008080] “Tint and Tetsuo”[/color] thought Chris. “Alright, let’s make this quick” said Chris. They both activated their duel disks. “DUEL!” they both called out. [color=#0000FF]Chris: 4000 Man: 4000[/color] “Challenged goes first,” said Chris. “I activate the card Polymerization to fuse in my hand, Destiny Hero-Dogma and Destiny Hero-Plasma to summon, Destiny End Dragoon.” A giant monster with wings, a Dragon head on its chest, a Dragon Head for a left arm and a blade on its right arm emerged from the ground. [color=#000080]Destiny End Dragoon ATK: 3000[/color] “Now I equip to him, Axe of despair” said Chris. As soon as he did, an ancient wooden axe appeared in Dragoon’s right hand. “This increases his attack by 1000” [color=#32CD32] Destiny End Dragoon ATK: 4000[/color] “Now I activate the card quick attack, now one of the fusion monsters I summoned this turn can attack. Now Dragoon, attack his life points directly!” Dragoon threw the axe he was holding in his hand at the challenger. He cried in pain. Tetsuo: 4000 [color=#FF0000]Man :0[/color] The man’s eyes went white and he fell to the ground, without a soul. Their duel disks deactivated. “To easy” said Chris as he continued down the dirt path. ****************************************** Zack, Shana, Tint and Tetsuo walked out west of town, backpacks on backs. “When are we gonna brake?” asked Tint. “Next three towns” Zack responded. Tint groaned. “Don’t worry about it Tint, three towns will go by just like that” said Tetsuo. “I don’t think so” someone called. Tetsuo looked and then started to tremble. A man in a tight black jacket blocked their path. [color=#008080]”No, that’s impossible. How does he know I’m here"[/color] thought Tetsuo. “W-what do you want?” asked Tetsuo in a trembling voice. “To bring you back” said the man. Tetsuo felt numb all over. He thought that everyone who knew his secret was dead. He thought it was all over. Tetsuo builded up his confidence. “Then you’ll have to duel me” said Tetsuo. “But Tetsuo, if you lose you’ll lose your soul!” said Tint. “I wouldn’t worry about that if I were you kid” said the man. “Go guys, run as fast as you can” said Tetsuo. “But-” started Tint. “NOW!” yelled Tetsuo. The others ran off into the distance. “So if you do lose, you wont try and run away right?” asked the man. “You have my word, but it’s not like I’m gonna lose or anything” said Tetsuo with a confident smile. “Remember Tetsuo, I know everything about you and everything about your deck, so I designed a deck that would crush yours in a matter of turns!” said the man. “We’ll see about that” replied Tetsuo. “Duel!” they said at the same time. [color=#0000FF] Tetsuo: 4000 Man: 4000[/color] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 9]Characters in this chapter: [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/14cxnag.jpg[/IMG] Name:Tint Wielder Age: 13 Deck: Dragon Info:Recently, Tint Wielder was a nobody in dueling, and hadn't even won once in his life. Then he found out about the Bright Light Deck, the most powerful deck in the world. Now Tint has found out that the evil Jair is off to find both the bright light deck and the black shadow deck so he can rule the world, and possibly the universe. Now Tint, Tetsuo, Zack and Shana, have to get to the deck before Jair does, not only to stop his reign but also to balance out the shadow realm leakage in the world. [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/2nsu9sh.jpg[/IMG] Name: Tetsuo Mashima Age: 16 Deck: Perth Guardian Info: Tetsuo is Tint's best friend and tells Tint about the Bright Light Deck. He decides that Tint will turn up dead if he goes on this journey alone and accompanies him in his quest. [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/1113uxy.jpg[/IMG] Name: Jack Nickolson Age: ??? Deck: Ancient Gear Info: It seems that this man is related to Tetsuo’s unknown past. He uses machine type monsters and has a reputation of being able to fix things that cannot be fixed. Obsessed with machinery and robotics. _____________________________________________________ [url=http://youtube.com/watch?v=Q3emkceOE-g] Theme Song[/url] Chapter 9 : The Past Returns “Are you ready Tetsuo?” said the man. “Are you kidding me Jack? I was made for this.” answered Tetsuo. “I’ll let you go first” said Jack. “Fine by me,” Tetsuo responded. “I’ll start off by summoning Mini Pylon in defense mode.” A small Pylon with a smily face appeared with its card side ways underneath it. [IMG]http://i30.tinypic.com/245im95.jpg[/IMG] “Now thanks to the ability of the Mini Pylon, he can be special summoned when there is a monster on my side of the field” said Tetsuo. Another small Pylon with a smily face appeared with its card side ways underneath it. “Now I end my turn with a face down, your move.” “Finally, draw! I summon ancient gear knight in attack mode!” Jack called out. A Machine Knight with a giant Gear for a shield and a lance appeared. [color=#000080] Ancient Gear Knight ATK: 1800[/color] “Now I activate the card Ancient Gear Castle!” A giant armed castled emerged out of the ground. “Now for its Special Ability, all Ancient Gear monsters gain 300 attack!” said Jack. Ancient Gear Knight’s power started to increase. [color=#32CD32] Ancient Gear Knight ATK: 2100[/color] “Now ancient Gear Knight, destroy his Mini Pylon!” Jack commanded. His Ancient Gear Knight jumped in the air, came down, and smashed the small Pylon to a thousand pieces. “Now I’ll end my turn with a face down. Your move” declared Jack. “My turn” said Tetsuo as he drew from his deck. “I Special Summon Mini Pylon from my hand seeing that I have a monster on my field.” For the very last time, a small, smiley faced Pylon appeared with its card sideways underneath it. [IMG]http://i30.tinypic.com/245im95.jpg[/IMG] “Now I sacrifice them both to summon William, Guardian of Lightning!” “Not so fast, I activate the card Compulsory Evacuation Device! As you know this sends your monster back to your hand” said Jack. Tetsuo’s monster turned into a ball of light and returned to his hand as a card. [color=#008080] “Darn it. He sent a high level monster back to my hand making my other sacrifices in vein.”[/color] “I’ll lay down a face down and activate my other face down card, Hard Math Homework, skipping your next 3 turns.” called Tetsuo. Three sheets of Math Homework appeared in front of Jack for him to complete. “Now seeing it skips your next three turns, I go again!” Tetsuo drew. “I activate my face down, Pylo-Mania!!!” yelled Tetsuo. “It can only be activated if I have 4 or more cards in my graveyard. I can Special Summon 3 Pylons from my Deck!” Three medium sized Pylons appeared with smiley faces. “Now I sacrifice one of them to summon, Peter-The Guardian of Mist” said Tetsuo. A kid wearing a GAP© T-Shirt surrounded by mist popped out of the ground. [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/33lnx43.jpg[/IMG] “Now for the second turn!” he called. He drew as one of the sheets of home work disappeared. “I Sacrifice my last two Pylons to summon, David-The Guardian of the Rainforest” A kid wearing a grass like army shirt appeared ready to attack. [IMG]http://i37.tinypic.com/r1lpuq.jpg[/IMG] “Now, thanks to his ability, he gains 200 ATK for every Warrior in my hand. I have one!” [color=#32CD32]David-The Guardian of the Rainforest ATK: 2200[/color] “Now, thanks to the ability of my Guardian of Mist, he can attack you directly if you only have one monster!” declared Tetsuo. “Darn it” said Jack. “Peter, attack him directly! Silent kill” The Guardian disappeared in mist, then reappeared behind Jack. He was about to stab him in the back but when he did, he disappeared in a tube and reappeared behind Tetsuo and stabbed [i]him[/i]. [color=#0000FF]Tetsuo:[/color][color=#FF0000]2100[/color] [color=#0000FF]Jack:4000[/color] “AAAAAGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!” Tetsuo cried. It seemed that Peter [i]actually[/i] got stabbed in the back. He started to bleed. [color=#008080]“The Shadow Realm leakage. It’s getting worse” he thought.[/color] He shook off the wound as if it was nothing. “What happened?” he asked jack. Then he saw it. The Magic Cylinder Trap card. “Didn’t see that coming now did you? My Magic Cylinder redirects your attack to yourself.” “As if I didn’t know!” responded Tetsuo. “But that wont save you! David, attack his ancient gear knight!” called Tetsuo. David jumped in the air and came down by kicking the ancient gear knight in the head. It blew up in an explosion witch partially burned Jack. [color=#0000FF]Tetsuo:2100 Jack:[/color][color=#FF0000]3900[/color] “AAGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!” Jack cried. “Now for the last turn” said Tetsuo. He drew as another sheet of Homework dissapeared. “Goodbye, father... Peter, David, finish him off!” Tetsuo commanded. David and Peter ran after Jack. “I discard from my hand, Kuriboh! Now I’ll negate the damage of your David” declared Jack. A blinding white light appeared and sent David back to Tetsuo’s field, although Peter continued. He kicked Jack in the face leaving a scar. [color=#0000FF]Tetsuo:2100 Jack:[/color][color=#FF0000] 2000[/color] “You saved yourself this time, I’ll end my turn” said Tetsuo. “My turn, [i]DRAW[/i]!” The last sheet of home work disappeared. “Your fate is sealed son, every time any of us normal summon a counter is put on my ancient gear castle. So far there’s around three. Now when I'm about to tribute summon an Ancient Gear monster, I can substitute the tributes with this card if the amount of counters on it are equal or more to the amount of tributes needed for the monster.” Jack announced. “That means by destroying my castle, I can summon, my Ancient Gear Gadjiltron Dragon!” yelled Jack. A vortex appeared in the sky and sucked up the castle. Jack and Tetsuo had to get down on the ground and hold on to the dirt to prevent themselves from being sucked in. The sucking stopped and a lightning bolt hit and cracked the field, and out of the cracked field came a Machine like Dragon. [color=#000080]Ancient Gear Gadjiltron Dragon ATK: 3000[/color] “Now my dragon, attack his Guardian of Mist!” commanded Jack. A powerful blast shot out of the Dragon’s mouth and blew up Peter in a fire explosion. The explosion had made Tetsuo’s arm catch on fire. [color=#0000FF] Tetsuo:[/color] [color=#FF0000]1000[/color] [color=#0000FF]Jack: 2000[/color] Tetsuo’s arm exploded. “AAAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!” he cried in pain. Yet there was no blood at all, in fact, the stump of his arm started to spark. Tetsuo’s arm was mechanical! *************************************** The others were still running ahead, they had ran for almost a mile by now. Suddenly, Tint stopped running. “What’s wrong Tint?” asked Shana. The color of Tint’s eyes turned bright yellow. “Tetsuo, needs me” he replied. He ran into the direction of Tetsuo at amazing speeds, faster than a car. “Hey wait up!” called Zack. Zack and Shana ran after him. To Be Continued...[/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 10]Characters in this chapter: [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/14cxnag.jpg[/IMG] Name:Tint Wielder Age: 13 Deck: Dragon Info:Recently, Tint Wielder was a nobody in dueling, and hadn't even won once in his life. Then he found out about the Bright Light Deck, the most powerful deck in the world. Now Tint has found out that the evil Jair is off to find both the bright light deck and the black shadow deck so he can rule the world, and possibly the universe. Now Tint, Tetsuo, Zack and Shana, have to get to the deck before Jair does, not only to stop his reign but also to balance out the shadow realm leakage in the world. [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/2nsu9sh.jpg[/IMG] Name: Tetsuo Mashima Age: 16 Deck: Perth Guardian Info: Tetsuo is Tint's best friend and tells Tint about the Bright Light Deck. He decides that Tint will turn up dead if he goes on this journey alone and accompanies him in his quest. [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/1113uxy.jpg[/IMG] Name: Jack Nickolson Age: ??? Deck: Ancient Gear Info: It seems that this man is related to Tetsuo’s unknown past. He uses machine type monsters and has a reputation of being able to fix things that cannot be fixed. Obsessed with machinery and robotics. [IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/dyad52.gif[/IMG] Name: Shana Mukori Age: 13 Deck: Wind Info: Sister of Zack Mukori, this girls favorite cards are the Wynn cards. [IMG]http://i26.tinypic.com/2rnvuoh.png[/IMG] Name: Zack Mukori Age: 15 1/2 Deck: Fire. Info: After their duel, this boy reveals to Tint and Tetsuo the real purpose of the Bright Light deck, and why they must get it and the Black Shadow deck before Jair does. His favorite card is Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 10. (thats right Lv 10) [IMG]http://i31.tinypic.com/21ag2ty.jpg[/IMG] Name: Chris Lee Age: 21 Deck: Destiny Hero Info:When Chris (Tint's Legal Guardian) finds out what Tint and Tetsuo are up to, he forbids them to leave. Of course they sneak out that night. ___________________________________________________ [url=http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3emkceOE-g]Theme Song[/url] Chapter 10 : Secrets Revealed Tint kept running. He didn't know how he was going to fast, but he didn't care. He was determined to find Tetsuo. Over an over he could hear his voice in his head. [color=#008080]"Help me Help me"[/color] He started to run faster, with Zack and Shana not so close behind. *************************** [color=#0000FF] Tetsuo:[/color][color=#FF0000]1000[/color] [color=#0000FF]Jack: 2000[/color] "What are you waiting for?" asked Jack. "Give up! You can't even draw!" "Never" Yelled Tetsuo. "I'd rather die than be turned into a weapon!" "You're not going to die" Jack pointed out. "I'll Just take you apart and put you back together. This time without the A.I. chip (artificial intelligence chip) "But I want to be a real person not a killer" said Tetsuo. "It is your destiny" said Jack. "Destiny is overrated" responded Tetsuo. "[i]DRAW[/i]" Tetsuo used his mouth to draw, though he couldn't see what card it was. He dropped it. "He He He, seeing as you can't do anything I'll assume you end your turn, [i]DRAW[/i]!" said Jack. He looked at his card. Ancient Gear Fist. A good card, but it didn't matter. "This is not the end Tet" Jack stated. "But the beginning, the beginning of a Tetsuo 2.0! I activate the card Hammer Shot, destroying your Guardian of The Rain forest!" A giant wooden mallet came down and smashed David to bits. "It's gonna be real hard to repair you... Gadjiltron dragon, end this! [i]ATTACK[/i]!" Jack commanded. The dragon flew towards Tetsuo, preparing to take a bite out of him. Then, a miracle. A fast yet shadowy figure jumped out of the trees with intentions of stopping the dragon's wrath. He brought his heel down on the dragon's head with incredible force, smashing it into the ground and surprisingly, negating the attack. It was the new and improved, golden eyed Tint! "Tetsuo Mashima is unable to continue the duel!" he told Jack. Though his voice sounded as if it were merged with another's... "Therefore, I will take over for him." "Fine by me. Seeing as your new I'll let you draw 5 cards." said Jack. Tint did so. "And seeing as you negated the attack somehow, I end my turn, by the way Tetsuo, don't bother on running, my Gadjiltron Dragon is faster than you." Tetsuo wasn't amused by this statement. "[i]DRAW[/i]" Tint yelled. "This is over my friend. You underestimated me and therefore you will pay with your life. I activate the card, polymerization!" As soon as he said that, five dragons appeared on the field. They started to fuse together. "By fusing the five dragons in my hand, come forth my Five Headed Dragon!" The fusing monster then started to shine a bright light. Out of the bright light came a dragon with five heads. [color=#000080]Five Headed Dragon ATK: 5000[/color] Just as this happened, Chriss came running by. "Oh no" he said. "I'm too late." "Now end this my dragon!" Tint commanded. "Quintuple Blast!!!!!!!" Each head of the dragon shot rays of different elements towards the Mechanical Dragon. The dragon exploded. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!" Jack cried in pain. [color=#0000FF]Tint:1000[/color] [color=#0000FF]Jack:[/color][color=#FF0000] 0[/color] He blew up into a thousand shards of light. "Father..." said Tetsuo. "Good riddance." Tint's eyes turned back to their original color as he fell to the ground. Chriss ran to his help. "He He, Mr. Lee. What a surprise seeing you here." said Tetsuo in a nervous tone, for he and Tint disobeyed him the night they snuck off. "I'll deal with you two later, first we have to get you to a mechanic and him to a hospital." Chriss said. Suddenly, Zack and Shana came running in, gasping for air. "*Gasp* Tint *Gasp* run *Gasp* too *Gasp* fast" said zack as he and his sister fell to the ground. "We'll probably need a hospital for those two as well." said Chriss. *************************** It took a while to drag both Shana and Zack and carry Tint to the nearby hospital. Tetsuo was found a mechanic and fixed in no time, though I can't say so much for the rest of them. Tint, Zack and Shana were all wearing oxygen masks lying on beds. The doctor came into the room. "We'll the first two are just suffering from exhaustion, but the blond boy's mussels, pretty much all of them are on fire, he needs the most rest." the Doctor stated. "Ok Doc" said Chriss. The Doctor walked out of the room. "So will Tint be ok? It says here on his chart that he broke his heel" said Tetsuo. "Yeah, he'll be fine. Let's just watch some T.V. to get our minds off of it." said Chriss. There was a T.V. in the corner of the room. Chriss turned it on. There was an anchorman and surprisingly, a picture of a Duel Disk on the top right screen. "In other news," he started. "The Game that is sweeping the Nation called Yu-Gi-Oh! has been related to eight different deaths around the country. It seems after the victims lost, their hearts failed and they collapsed to the ground. Authorities advise all players to stop playing the game until the police decide it is safe." "Great, just great." said Chriss. He turned off the Television. "You know Chriss," Tetsuo started. "Me Tint and the others have to do this, now more than ever! If we don't get their fast, more people will die and Jair will rule the-" "I know, this wouldn't be the first time." "Huh?" Tetsuo responded. "Pull up a chair Tet." He did so. "A long time ago, 70 years to be precise, the Sudey family and the Weilder were visited by a man named Jonathon Mukori. Jair's great great great great grandfather and Tint's great great great great grandfather, were told by Mr. Mukori that they had to venture to the Temple of Light and Darkness were they had to put the two decks of White Light and Black Shadows together and awaken the Creator Lord, creator and destroyer of worlds, to balance out the Shadow Realm leakage in the world. Tint's great great great great grandfather, Benjamin, agreed to this matter, though Jair's great great great great grandfather, Laden, had different plans. He was going to betray Ben and take the decks for himself and use the Creator Lord's power to mold the Universe into his own image. When they got to the temple, Ben was betrayed alright, but he grabbed the White Light Deck just in time. He said if Laden wanted the deck, he'd have to duel for it. In the end, Laden lost and died. As for Ben, he put the two decks together and awakened the Creator Lord, but he had to give up his life to balance the world once again. The same thing happened 5 generations after. Same thing with the Mukoris" Tetsuo could only say one thing, "Woah". "Tint's mother was going to give birth to Tint, though shortly before her husband, Jake, died the same way the others did. She didn't want her own son to share the same fate as Jake, so she hired me to replace Tint in his legendary mission, so his life would be spared." "That must be tough, soon your going to have to sacrifice your own life to spare a random stranger's... Wait, what happened to Tint's mom?" Asked Tetsuo. "She moved to Miami and bought a house there so that after my mission was done he could go there were she could spend her time with him. She didn't want to be a bother on my mission." said Chriss. "I see. One more thing, Tint came and rescued me, but his voice was different and he even negated the attack of Gadjiltron Dragon by smashing his head into the ground with his heel, witch by the way is how he broke it" said Tetsuo. "Oh, [i]that[/i]." Chriss started. The spirit of Tint's father is within Tint, giving him extraordinary powers, witch is also how he was able to win in one single turn. Though it effects his boy afterwards, but his heel will heal in a couple of days because of his powers." "I see." Tetsuo responded. "By the way Tet, don't tell Tint." said Chriss. "Don't worry, I wont." By the time Chriss's story was over it was 8:00, so Chriss and Tetsuo got fold up beds from the hospital and slept for the rest of night. *************************** Mean while, the infamous Jair was making his way to a nearby town. A man with a Duel Disk seemed to be guarding it. "Let me guess" said Jair to the man. "I have to beat you in order to get in?" "You took the words right out of my mouth." said the man. "I'll let you go first." "Sure thing." Jair responded. "[i]DUEL[/i]" They both called out. [color=#0000FF]Man:4000[/color] [color=#0000FF]Jair:4000[/color] Jair drew six cards. "I put one card face down. Now I activate the card pot of greed, allowing me to draw two cards." He drew his two cards. "Now I activate the card Fires of Doomsday, witch allows me to Special Summon two dooms day tokens in defense mode on my side of the field." [color=#000080] Dooms Day Token DEF: 0 Dooms Day Token DEF: 0 [/color] "Now I Summon Marionette Mite in attack mode." [color=#000080] Marionette Mite ATK: 1000 [/color] "Now by sending all my monsters to the graveyard, I can Summon my Black God Dragon!" Jair's 3 monsters disappeared and a giant Black Dragon took there place. [img]http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/7916/73468bl5.jpg[/img] "Now I activate the card Attribute Surgery! This changes the attribute of all monsters on the field to any attribute I want, and I'll choose the Fire attribute!" His dragon turned a slight shade of red. "Now activate my face down, Spiritual Fire Art - Kurenai, so I get to send one face up Fire monster on my side of the field to the grave and inflict damage to you equal to the monster's ATK!" The red Dragon turned into a fireball that went strait for the Man. He wailed in great pain. [color=#0000FF]Man:[/color][color=#FF0000] 0[/color] [color=#0000FF]Jair:4000[/color] The man exploded into a thousand shards of light. Jair made his way into the Town.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Grammar: O.K needs improving in some placesCharcters: Very Good pics and decks, but should do more in dept bioImpact On Reader: Not very consuming.Plot: Very basic plot add a plot twistPersonal Opinion: Some of the cards that you have made aren't brilliant, Overall: 47% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 some card effects are off, (scarr's effect only activate when destroyed in battle,not via discard)but they are still good nonetheless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted July 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 BUMP, Chapter 9 coming soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commander mike Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 i like it.great plot and ideas u should make the evil villian that has a new god that u can make....overall good story 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 Ok, your rep is coming, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Predator_1 Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 nice story, you worked a lot on the story? I like it!But some of the pics were strange^^ I rate you 91.79 / 100.00 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Thx allot man! Chapter 10 is almost done by the way^_^! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Predator_1 Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Grammar: O.K needs improving in some placesCharcters: Very Good pics and decks' date=' but should do more in dept bioImpact On Reader: Not very consuming.Plot: Very basic plot add a plot twistPersonal Opinion: Some of the cards that you have made aren't brilliant, Overall: 47%[/quote'] 47% Hey man, why you rate so hard, he made many chapters and the dialougues are very long. You need to think what happens, what card will be used, how it will end, what will happen next etc. that requires a lot of time (i never would have time to make a long fan-fic like that ^^)Well i really want to see more^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Chapter 10 is out everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Spire Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Grammer errors here and there, but pretty good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CamChan22 Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 That is really awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 This is story about a boy and his 6 friends on a quest to find the Bright Light & Black Shadow Deck before the evil Jair does and uses their power to take over the universe. Enjoy the story!:D P.S. People, I would appreciate your opinion or ideas Volume 2[spoiler=Characters in story so far] Name:Tint WielderAge: 13Birth Date: July 10 1997Deck: DragonInfo:Recently, Tint Wielder was a nobody in dueling, and hadn't even won once in his life. Then he found out about the Bright Light Deck, the most powerful deck in the world. Now Tint has found out that the evil Jair is off to find both the bright light deck and the black shadow deck so he can rule the world, and possibly the universe. Now Tint, Tetsuo, Zack, Shana, Chris, Kane and Miya, have to get to the decks before Jair does, not only to stop his reign but also to balance out the shadow realm leakage in the world. Name: Tetsuo MashimaBirth Date: February 24 1995 Age: 16Deck: Perth GuardianInfo: Tetsuo is Tint's robot friend, helping him and the others out with his powerful Perth Guardians. Name: Chris LeeAge: 21Birth Date: December 3 1990Deck: Destiny HeroInfo: Chris, at first, didn't like the idea about Tint and Tetsuo, but it was only to protect him from his grave destiny, though now that he has others around with him, he'll have to wait till the time is right to execute his mission. Name: Kane MorutoBirth Date: October 8 1996Age: 13Deck: Different Dimension (D.D.)Info: This kid's deck is just about as powerful as Tint's. He always carries around a card book with all of his cards in, always coming up with combos to summon his most powerful monster, D.D.G. - Different Dimension God! He always seems to compete with Tint. Name: Miya NoraBirth Date: July 29 1997Age: 13Deck: StarInfo: This character is very enthusiastic and her Star monsters show that she's got game. She loves animals and is fascinated by space, she also has a secret crush on one of the guys in the team (3. Name: Goryu SatoAge: 19Birth Date: September 15 1992Deck: LightInfo: Goryu is one of the Sudey's puppets. Tint defeats him swiftly and kills him, though at the time he didn't know that the Shadow Realm leakage existed, so Goryu's death isn't entirely his fault. Name: Jair SudeyAge: 14Birth Date: January 12 1997Deck: DarkInfo: Not much is known on this character. He is heading towards the temple of Light and Darkness to retrieve the Deck of White Light and the Deck of Black Shadows in order to awake the power of the creator lord to use to take over the universe. His family has been using a powerful god card for generations called the Black God Dragon which is now in his possession. Name: Densaga SudeyAge: 12Birth Date: April 7 1999Deck: EnvoyInfo: Don't let his rosy red cheeks fool you, this kid's deck is strong. He didn't show his true power in his first appearance but it doesn't mean he's weak. He'll be back to reveal his most powerful monsters. Envoy of the Beginning and Envoy of the End. Name: Shana MukoriAge: 13Birth Date: November 11 1997Deck: WindInfo: Sister of Zack Mukori, this girls favorite cards are the Wynn cards. She has a mean sense of humorand doesn't like to be pushed around. Name: Zack MukoriAge: 15 1/2Birth Date: July 2 15 1995Deck: Fire.Info: After their duel, this boy reveals to Tint and Tetsuo the real purpose of the Bright Light deck, and why they must get it and the Black Shadow deck before Jair does. His favorite card is Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 10. (thats right Lv 10) _________________________________________________ [spoiler=Chapter 11]Characters in this chapter: Name:Tint WielderAge: 13Birth Date: July 10 1997Deck: DragonInfo:Recently, Tint Wielder was a nobody in dueling, and hadn't even won once in his life. Then he found out about the Bright Light Deck, the most powerful deck in the world. Now Tint has found out that the evil Jair is off to find both the bright light deck and the black shadow deck so he can rule the world, and possibly the universe. Now Tint, Tetsuo, Zack, Shana, Chris, Kane and Miya, have to get to the decks before Jair does, not only to stop his reign but also to balance out the shadow realm leakage in the world. Name: Tetsuo MashimaBirth Date: February 24 1995 Age: 16Deck: Perth GuardianInfo: Tetsuo is Tint's robot friend, helping him and the others out with his powerful Perth Guardians. Name: Kane MorutoBirth Date: October 8 1996Age: 13Deck: Different Dimension (D.D.)Info: This kid's deck is just about as powerful as Tint's. He always carries around a card book with all of his cards in, always coming up with combos to summon his most powerful monster, D.D.G. - Different Dimension God! He always seems to compete with Tint. Name: Miya NoraBirth Date: July 29 1997Age: 13Deck: StarInfo: This character is very enthusiastic and her Star monsters show that she's got game. She loves animals and is fascinated by space, she also has a secret crush on one of the guys in the team (3. Name: Shana MukoriAge: 13Birth Date: November 11 1997Deck: WindInfo: Sister of Zack Mukori, this girls favorite cards are the Wynn cards. She has a mean sense of humorand doesn't like to be pushed around. Name: Zack MukoriAge: 15 1/2Birth Date: July 2 15 1995Deck: Fire.Info: After their duel, this boy reveals to Tint and Tetsuo the real purpose of the Bright Light deck, and why they must get it and the Black Shadow deck before Jair does. His favorite card is Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv 10. (thats right Lv 10) Name: Chris LeeAge: 21Birth Date: December 3 1990Deck: Destiny HeroInfo: Chris, at first, didn't like the idea about Tint and Tetsuo, but it was only to protect him from his grave destiny, though now that he has others around with him, he'll have to wait till the time is right to execute his mission.___________________________________________________Chapter 11 : A New Chapter Chris woke up out of his fold up bed. He checked th clock on the wall. The small hand was between the seven and the eight as the big hand pointed to the six. It was 7:30. "Great," Chris said to himself. "Might as well check on Tint." Chris got out of the bed. Tetsuo was still in his bed, robots need sleep too eh? Zack and Shana was also still in bed, though Tint was nowhere to be seen. Chris was frantic. He ran all the way down the stairs to the lobby, and there was Tint, stretching his sore body. Tint spotted Chris. "Your up early." Tint told Chris. "Your up earlier." Chris responded, still half asleep. He yawned. The Lobby was mostly empty except for one secretary. She was looking through some sort of paperwork. "The others up yet?" Tint asked. "Nope." Chris responded. "Good, I want to go into town, got any money?" said Tint. "Sure, here ya go." Chris handed Tint a 10 dollar bill and a Toonie. "Thanks Chris!" said Tetsuo as he walked through the automatic doors and into town. Chris decided to go back up stairs. "Kid's a fast healer." Chris thought. When he got up stairs he turned on the T.V. though it didn't seem to wake anyone. It was the morning news. A woman sat in a chair, accompanied by a man beside her. "Hello everyone," the woman started. "It is June 30th, 2011 and we would just like to inform all duelist out there that the spontaneous deaths related to Yu-Gi-Oh! have stopped and that you are free to duel once again." She said with a smile. She then started going on about Gas prices going up and how it would effect the first launch to Mars. "Greatest news I've herd all week, the Shadow Realm leakage has eased, for now..." Chris said to no one in particular. ********************************** Tint strutted around the town with a smile on his face. The tiny shops were just starting to open. Tint saw a small pancake shop and decided it was time for breakfast. Tint got up on one of the stools. "One order of Pancakes please." Tint asked a tall man. "Sure thing kid." said the man as he started to turn on the stove and got the frying pan ready. He put the frying pan on the stove and put some freshly made pancake batter on it. It started to fry. "Is that for here or to go?" asked the man. "To go please, and hold the syrup." Tint answered. "Ok kid," responded the man. Suddenly, out of the blue, a girl jumped up on the seat next to Tint. Tint froze, not only because she surprised him, but because his body was starting to turn to mush at the sight of her. The girl just about the hight of himself, almost the same age as well, had big, dark blue eyes with strait black hair that reached her back. "I'll have what he's having." she said. "Ok then! Two orders of pancakes without syrup." the man responded. He flipped Tint's pancake and pored more pancake batter for the girl. "Sorry, that was rude of me. I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Miya, and you are?" she said with a warm smile on her face. "Uhhhhhhhhhhhh, Oh! I'm Tint, Tint Wielder." Tint responded still a daze. "Really, thats an interesting name. Nice to meet you Tint. What are you doing here in North Valley?" Miya asked. "Oh, uhhhhhhh," Tint didn't know what to say, if he told her 'Oh, I'm just fulfilling my destiny and saving the universe is all' she'd think he was a nut, and he couldn't have that happen, he was just getting to know her. He decided to say, "I'm just on vacation with my friends." "Cool," Miya responded. Tint noticed something he didn't see before he was staring at Miya's face. Miya has wearing a Duel Disk. "You play Yu-Gi-Oh?" he asked. "Yep, I was actually going to the Card Shop right now." Said Miya. "Is it Ok if I go with you? My deck can use some new dragons." Tint said. "Sure thing Tint." Miya responded. The tall man was finally finished with both of their pancakes in Styrofoam containers. "That'll be 3 dollars for both of you." the man said. Tint handed him a 10 dollar bill. "This should cover both of us." Tint told the man. He was given 4 dollars in change. Miya smiled at him. ******************************** By the time Miya and Tint got to the Card Shop, they were both done their pancakes and threw their Styrofoam in a trash can outside the shop. They walked in the store. There was a Clerk looking threw a binder of cards. He looked up at Miya and Tint. "Can I help you two with something?" he asked. "Yeah, I'm gonna need the Constellation of the Stars booster please." said Miya. "Sure thing," said the clerk as he took one of the boosters from inside his desk and handed it to Miya. "That will be 5 dollars and 50 cents please." "Ok," Miya responded as she gave the clerk a 5 dollar bill and two quarters. "Yeah, I'll also take a Dragons of Legend pack please." Tint told the clerk. Once again he reached into his desk and pulled out a Dragons of Legend booster pack. "Also 5 dollars and 50 cents." the clerk replied. Tint gave him 3 toonies and was given 50 cents in change. "Have a nice day." said the clerk half hearted as Tint and Miya walked out the door. When Tint and Miya got out they headed in the direction of the park and immediately opened their packs. Tint just got a bunch of cards he already had, though Miya got two new cards. 'Super Nova' and 'Star Swordsman Lv 10'. "Alright! I needed these two!" Miya exclaimed. "I wish I had your luck," Tint said with a sigh. Miya noticed someone in the park. It was a boy looking at small card binder. He had red and black hair and a black long sleeved shirt. He wore a necklace along with long black pants, knee protectors and red and whit shoes. She ran over to him. Tint followed. He looked up at Miya. "Oh, hey Miya!" he said. "Kane! I thought you left for vacation!" Miya responded. "Yeah, I had to cancel. Seems that California is being hit by a Hurricane Taho." "Too bad. Oh! I almost forgot! Tint come over here!" Miya called. Tint did so. "This is Tint Weilder! He's come here for a vacation." Kane glared at Tint. Tint glared back. Tension was in the air. It was then that Kane and Tint knew they would become the most competitive pair there would ever be. They continued to glare. "So, Tint Weilder, is it? What kind of deck do you have?" asked Kane. "Dragon. I also have the legendary Five Headed Dragon." Tint said with a smirk on his face. "Wow! Theres only a couple of those in the world!" Miya exclaimed with an impressed smile. "Show off..." Kane muttered under his breath. "Not only that, I have allot of legendary dragons, like Blue Eyes and Red eyes white dragon." Tint gloated. Once again Miya was impressed. "How about you put your cards ware your mouth is!" Kane yelled at Tint. "If your so good then let's see if you can beat me," "No problem." said Tint as he activated his Duel Disk. Him and Kane drew five cards. "DUEL!" they both shouted. Kane: 4000Tint: 4000 "The challenged goes first." said Tint as he drew his card. "I summon Blue Eyes White Chick in attack mode!" His card flipped up and a small White Dragon popped out of it. [spoiler=Blue-Eyes White Chick] "Awwwwwwwweeeeeeee, he's so cute." Miya exclaimed. "Yeah, but as the old saying goes they grow up so fast! By sacrificing him I can Special Summon the legendary, Blue-Eyes White Dragon!" Tint called. His little dragon started to grow and grow until it was the size of two houses stacked on each other. Blue-Eyes White Dragon ATK: 3000 "Now I'll end my turn with a face down. Beat that!" yelled Tint. "I intend to. I activate the card D. D. Border Line." said Kane. His card flipped up and a giant force field separated Kane and Tint "As long as there are no Spell Cards in my grave, neither of us can conduct our battle phase. Now I activate the card, Macro Cosmos." His card flipped up and a Portal appeared in the sky. "Now all cards sent to the grave are removed from play instead. Now I activate D. D. Designator." His card flipped up. "I call one card. If that card is in your hand, it is removed from play. I call Polymerization!" said Kane. "Darn it," Tint muttered as he put his Polymerization card in his pocket, Aka, his remove from play zone. "And seeing D. D. Designator was removed from play, D. D. Borderline is still in effect. Now I summon D.D. Assailant in attack mode." said Kane. His card flipped up D.D. Assailant ATK: 1700 "Now I'll end my turn with a face down, your move." "I thought you'd never say that," Tint said. "DRAW! I activate the card, future fusion, by sending five Dragons from my deck to the grave, I can special summon Five Headed Dragon in two turns." His card flipped up and a giant tower appeared with a white vortex on top. His Five Dragons appeared and were sucked into the vortex in the sky. "Now I summon, Red-Eyes Black Chick, in attack mode." His card flipped up and a small black dragon in an egg appeared. Red-Eyes B. Chick ATK: 800 "Now, by sacrificing him, I can summon my Red-Eyes Black Dragon!" The baby dragon started to grow and grow until it was three quarters the size as Blue-Eyes. Red-Eyes B. Dragon ATK: 2400 "Now I'll end my turn." "Ok then, DRAW! I activate the card foolish burial, sending my D.D.M. - Different Dimension Master, to the graveyard, but cause of Macro Cosmos, it's removed from play." said Kane. He took the card from his deck and put it in his pocket. Ironically, it was at the top of his deck. "Now I activate the card, pot of greed, allowing me to draw 2 cards." Kane did so. "Now I activate the card, D.D.R. - Different Dimension Reincarnation. By discarding a card from my hand, I can Special Summon one of my removed from play monsters. I'll summon my D.D.M. - Different Dimension Master!" Kane's spell card flipped up and a man with glowing hands popped out of it. D.D.M. - Different Dimension Master ATK: 1700 "And unfortunately for you, the card I sent for D.D.R. - Different Dimension Reincarnation, was D.D. Survivor, and when he's removed from play, I can special summon him." His card flipped up and a man in ragged cloths popped out of it. D.D. Survivor ATK: 1800 "Now I end my turn." said Kane. "My turn" said Tint. "DRAW! I also activate the card the card Pot of Greed, you know what it does. And now I Summon Lord of D. in attack mode." said Tint. A man waring bone armor, a crown, and a a blue cape appeared. Lord of D. ATK: 1200 "Now, I equip to him Malevolent Nuzzler, increasing my Lord of D.'s attack by 700 points!" Tint called. His monster started to feel more powerful. Lord of D. ATK: 1900 "Now I end my turn." said Tint. "My turn." Kane called. "DRAW! I summon D.D. Warrior Lady in attack mode." A card flipped up and a Lady in armor carrying a long, lazer like dagger appeared out of it. D.D. Warrior Lady ATK: 1500 "Now I activate the card Polymerization, so I can fuse, D.D. Assailant, D.D. Survivor, D.D.M. - Different Dimension Master, and D.D. Survivor, I can Fusion Summon my Ultimate monster, D.D.G. - Different Dimension God!" Kane's four monsters were sucked up into the vortex in the sky and out from the vortex came a giant Knight with a very big sword. [spoiler=D.D.G. - Different Dimension God] "And this big guys attack is equal to the combine attack of the monsters used to Fusion Summon it. Meaning its attack is 6700!" D.D.G. - Different Dimension God ATK: 6700 "Now I end my turn-" "Not so fast I activate the card, Dust Tornado, destroying your D. D. Border Line!" His card flipped up and the force field separating Tint and Kane's monsters was destroyed by a tornado. "Now my turn, DRAW! Now, as I recall, it has been two turns since I activated my future fusion card come forth, Five Headed Dragon!" A giant dragon with five heads came flying out of the vortex above the tower. Five Headed Dragon ATK: 5000 "Now I equip to my F.H.D., United we stand!" All of Tint's monsters started to glow. "Now Five headed dragon gains 800 attack for every monster I control, thats 2400!" Five Headed Dragon ATK: 7400 "Now, Five Headed Dragon! Attack his D.D.G.!" Tint commanded. His monster shot out a ray of light, a ray of darkness, a ray of fire, a ray of lightning and a ray of water out of its five heads. "I don't think so! I activate my D.D.G.'s effect! By paying 2500 life points, I can special summon all of my removed from play monsters!" D.D.G.'s sword started to charge with blue energy and four blue orbs appeared on the field. The orbs dissapeared D.D. Warrior Lady ATK: 1500 D.D. Assailant ATK: 1700 D.D.M. - Different Dimension Master ATK: 1700 D.D. Survivor ATK: 1800 "And when this effect is activated, all D.D. monsters gain 1000 attack!" D.D.G. - Different Dimension God ATK: 7700 D.D. Warrior Lady ATK: 2500 D.D. Assailant ATK: 2700 D.D.M. - Different Dimension Master ATK: 2700 D.D. Survivor ATK: 2800 Tint:4000Kane:1500 "What? No!" Tint said frantically. Five Headed Dragon didn't seize his attack. The rays continued toward D.D.G.. The Different Dimension God dodged the attack and sliced the dragon into four pieces. Tint:3700Kane:4000 "Fine, I'll switch Blue Eyes and Red Eyes to defense mode," Blue-Eyes White Dragon DEF: 2500 Red-Eyes B. Dragon DEF: 2000 "And end my turn." D.D.G. - Different Dimension God ATK: 6700 D.D. Warrior Lady ATK: 1500 D.D. Assailant ATK: 1700 D.D.M. - Different Dimension Master ATK: 1700 D.D. Survivor ATK: 1800 "My turn. DRAW! I activate the card, Pot of Greed! Now I draw two cards." said Kane as he drew two cards. "Now I activate the card, lightning vortex. By discarding a card from my hand to the grave, I can destroy your blue eyes and your red eyes!" A card flipped up and three bolts of lightning struck Blue-Eyes White Dragon and Red-Eyes Black Dragon, shattering them into a thousand shards. "Now, Different Dimension God, attack his life points directly!" Kane commanded his D.D.G.. It shot a ray of blue energy at Tint. Tint fell down. Tint: 0Kane:1500 Tint and Kane's Duel Disks deactivated. "Who's the show off now?" Kane asked. "Lucky draw..." Tint muttered. "Pretty good win," said Miya. "Pretty good?! I kicked his but, I mean, I completely turned around that duel! He brought up a 5000 attack point monster and I hit him with a 6700 attack point monster!" Kane enthusiastically yelled. He looked at Tint who just got up from the ground. "HA!" he yelled in his face. "Ya, ya. Laugh it up..." Tint responded. Tint looked at a clock on the nearby Library. It read 8:52. The sun had only risen a little while ago. "Well, nice to see you guys, I gotta get back to the hospital to check on my friends." he said. "Hey, can we come with?" Miya asked. "Sure, I'm pretty sure Chris won't mind." ******************************** Kane, Tint and Miya walked over to the North Valley Hospital. They checked into the Hospital and went up to the fourth floor where the others were. By the it was 9:15 and the others were awake. "Hey Tint," everyone called simultaneously. "Who's the spiky haired guy and weird eyes?" asked Shana. "SHUT UP LITTLE GIRL!" Miya and Kane both shouted at Shana. "And for your information, I just beat your little friend Tint's Five Headed Dragon!" Kane gloated. "Tint? You lost to this sucker? That's just sad..." Shana told Tint. "HEY!" Tint and Kane yelled at Shana at the same time. "Woah," Zack started. "You, Tint, last hope for the universe and destined to defeat the world's greatest evil was beaten by a guy he just met?" Miya and Kane stared at Zack with confused expressions. "He He He, your a big joker aren't ya Zack." Tint responded to Zack with a smile clearly saying 'I haven't told them because I didn't want to scare them away thinking I was crazy'. Of course, Zack was a person possessed by Jair Sudey's brother Densaga Sudey for many a year, and wasn't really down with the 411 if you know what I mean. "Uh, no I'm not. This is the whole reason were here, remember? We were on are way to the Temple of Light and Darkness when Tetsuo encountered his father, or I guess creator, yes we know that he's a robot he told us this morning. Anyway, you saved him with your so called "power" and beat his father and probably killed him, and yes, I said kill! Not sent to the stars! Anyway, I digress. You didn't tell them?" That was probably the most weird thing anyone in that room had every herd come out of a human beings mouth. "Woah, woah, woah. You are a person destined to save the universe?" Miya asked. "Listen, I can explain-" Tint started. "What is there to explain? Except that your the coolest guy on earth! No, the universe!" Miya exclaimed. "Y-You really think it's cool?" Tint stuttered. "Of course," said Miya as she grabbed onto his right arm. "I mean you are risking your life for all living things." "Well actually I'm not preventing the end of the universe, just the end of the universe's freedom." Tint replied. "That's so cool!" Miya exclaimed and grabbed tighter to Tint's arm. Tint and Kane were steaming. Tint because he was being liked by the same girl he liked. Actually, Kane was steaming for that exact reason, except he wasn't very happy for Tint. As a matter a fact, Kane was going to tell Miya how he felt about her that day. He had actually canceled his trip to California, he had only lied about the hurricane. Now, out of the blue, a guy she didn't even know was sweeping her off her feet, even though he beat that guy right in front of her. "Well Tint, sorry to interrupt your love session with your new girlfriend, but the doctor said that because of your fast recovery, he is escorting you out of the Hospital today." Chris told an embarrassed Tint. "But, I wont see you guys again?" Miya told Chris and Tint with sad eyes. "Please, can we bring them with us? They amuse me," Shana asked. "Well, that's not really one of the reasons I was looking for, but I'll go with it." Miya replied. "Well, seeing as we got two vote against one I guess you can come with us," said Chris. "YAY!!!!" Miya yelled. "Hey, where ever Miya goes I go." Kane stated. "Don't worry, he amuses me as well." Shana told Chris. "Ok then, but the road will be rough, dangerous , and you can possibly lose your lives." Chris stated. "Hey, if I can beat this ol' goon I can beat anyone." said Kane, talking about Tint. "Ok then! Two new Team Members!" Tetsuo exclaimed. Kane and Miya were informed about what was going on and what their mission was. The seven of them left the Hospital that day happy people, not knowing what would lie ahead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 This is not a double post for this was posted the day after. In every Volume in my story there will be ten chapters, and in every season 2 Volumes, and so far, I haven't got allot of characters. I held a contest before and the winners cards will be published probably in episode 13 or 15, but I have decided to hold another contest for people to make bios and I will rate them, and depending if they're good or not you will be rated 1st, 2nd etc. 1st gets 3 rep and gets to be in the show, 2nd gets 2 rep and gets to be in the show. 3rd gets 1 rep and gets to have there cards in the show, i.e. one of the characters uses a different deck for a change sometime in the show. I will be sure to edit this post when I make the contest. Anyway, keep reading and enjoy Vol. 2 ^_^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chidori Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 hey k2 whens the Golden Guardian deck coming out? cant wait to see my cards in it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 episode 13 or 15 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 He everyone! Sorry to say this but, I won't be working on the next chapters for this story until August 20. You see my dad is a guitar player in the famous band, Toots and the Maytayals and I will be going with him on tour. For proof this is my dad's website www.carlharvey.net . I will be sure to keep this thread bumped while using hotel computers and my dad's labtop. Have a good summer everyone:)! See you on the 20th! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted August 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 bump, keeping this baby alive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oscuro Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Wow, great fan-fic! I like your fan fic, because you used pictures, im sure there was very much effort on it, and its nicely done 9.7 / 10 (nothing is perfect^^)I wouldnt have time to do same great thing :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aashar Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 I give it a 9. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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