I was bored...

[Spire]

Hello everyone. As the title says, I was very bored so I made this dragon card. Tell me if there are errors that I could fix or whats good about it.

 

[Seta]

nice 7/10

[v8561v]

...good....yes, I liked it.The picture is good.

[Redyear20]

you got alot of erros...nice 9/10

Here change the error...cpy paste my correction.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summon or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 dragon types monsters you control. This monster may attack your opponent life points directly. If this card attack your opponent life points directly by using this effect, the battle damage your opponent recive is halved. When this card is destroyed and sent from the field to the graveyard, you may draw one card.

 

I think this is better.

[Kale]

nice, but where is your disclaimer?

 

8/10

[Judαs]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Specail Summoned by tributing 3 Dragon-type monsters' date=' you control. This card can attack your opponent directly. When it does so using this effect, any Battle Damage it inflicts to your opponent is halved. When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard, draw one card.

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Correction Correction! :|

 

Correct text

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by offering 3 Dragon-type monsters you control as a tribute. This card may attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If it does so, the damage inflicted to your opponent is halved. When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard, draw a card from your deck.

 

"Specail Summoned". :D

Still, nice card. (8/10)

 

...Sorry, used too many smilies :(

[TUT]

I like it. Like the other guys said, could use some corrections. Great picture, though.

 

8.5/10 (B)