Redyear20 Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Sentence Is Death...this for zombie...please enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyber dragon fusion Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 terrible OCG just terible 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 your OCG=not good3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redyear20 Posted May 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Can someone tell me why...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinX Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 It should probably read: 'As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all non-Zombie type monsters are destroyed. You must pay 500 Life Points during each Standby Phase. If you do not, destroy this card.' I like the idea, but I think that it should have a more original effect. I think that there are too many cards that simply destroy monsters, and not enough that return them to the player's hand or deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 terrible OCG just terible 2/10 nice! well' date=' like he said, the OCG [original card grammar'] is not up to standard... here's a better version... "Whenever a monster is Summoned, destroy it unless it is a Zombie-type monster. You must pay 500 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases. If you don't, destroy this card." it's not perfect OCG on my part, but it's better... the picture is bad. next time, try something more anime-ish like the real life cards. at least try something with a background... the effect is overpowered. 500 Life Points isn't exactly a big cost to pay to destroy all of your opponent's monsters [used with LIGHT OF INTERVENTION and maybe DNA SURGERY]... remember, the stronger the effect of the card, the bigger drawback you have to add... good try though... EDITED PART: one more thing... people around here appreciate originality and long, complex effects... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redyear20 Posted May 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 welll, atleast thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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