Fruit!

[Jnakers]

hello im kinda new here, so please let me knowe if i put these in the wrong fourom, also im gonna be goeing away soon on a trip to new york soo.

 

first of theres Fruit for all

and then theres

the M. of the fruit

 

 

more to come =)

[LightAndDarknessDragon]

ocg is all i see and get rid of the text from the 1st image if you can

 

6/10

[Redyear20]

Ho you gor alot of errors....here!

 

First Card

Aslong as this card remain face up on the field, increase both players life point 200 points for each players standby phase. By paying 1000 life point and sending this card to the graveyard, you may Special Summon one fruit type monster from your deck.

 

Second Card

When you declare an attack with this monster, discard 3 cards. If you donot, change the Atk to 500 points and the DEf by 3000 points. If you donot attack with this card during your battle phase, then destroy this card and remove it from play.

 

I think this is better. But, for been new...i will give you 7/10.

[Jnakers]

ocg is all i see and get rid of the text from the 1st image if you can

 

6/10

ocg

im sorry? what does that mean?

 

oh sorry

ill make sure to spell check

[littlelizard]

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[RestLess-BoTics]

I believe all you need to work on, is your correct use of punctuation, abbreviation, spelling, and capitalization. Otherwise, great effort! If you need any help with your cardmaking skills, feel free to private message me!

 

-Glasstin

[mcdooge]

Ummm ok. I'm glad you posted in any other cards.

 

6.8/10