BusterTheBlader Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 All you need to improve on is your capitalization, abbreviation, and punctuation. Once you correct these errors, your work will be about perfect! Overall, excellent effort! -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 OCG but thats it 9.99/10 all you need to do is correct what glasstin said and it will be perfect:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 Nice cards but your grammar needs improving. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlie016 Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 I'm going with a majortiy rule here. fix your mistakes and your good as new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow27 Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 Excelent! Not owerpowered , realistic , and it's exualy possible to destroy them , LOL! 9+/10 ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hanimir Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 question, is there a certain reason why there is a Quick-Spell smybolon that Trap card? EDIT:Other then that, great card, I'll just ignore OCG for now, you may ask someone forhelp concerning this matter ^^9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 YAY!! A new member is putting effort in making their cards which I rarely see these days... 10/10 keep up the good work!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phatt Mann Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 They're OK cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BusterTheBlader Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Thanks guys,Yah I know I have horrible grammar when it comes to typing I usually rush lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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