RestLess-BoTics Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 [align=center]Hello.I'm glasstin10. The whole purpose of this thread, is to help members increase their cardmaking skills and experience. To determine their full, and entire capabilities of card-making, this thread is entrusted, and designed to help fulfill the needs of the ordinary cardmaker. All you have to do, is to post your finished card, and I will reply to your post on this thread, stating the errors I have found in your card. If your card is not dealt with by me, or my assistant within 48 hours of the date you posted your card on this thread, I will give you 100 points. If you have no errors in your card, my we will simply state so, and we will give you other tips on how you can continue to improve your card. If anyone has any questions, feel free to private message me. -Glasstin[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death's Seduction Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 i will get some cards up soon u rock-SAMBAU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 lol glasstini had this same idea .....^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joethetoe007 Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 here my card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 Here glasstin, can you please check this card for me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 here my card Not a bad card! Here's the new and improved effect :Choose a specific monster type. For each monster of the specified type' date=' may pay 1000 Life Points to reduce all damage you take from your opponent to 0, during the turn in which this card's effect has been activated. When this card is detroyed and sent to the Graveyard, destroy all monsters on your side of the field with the specified type. -Glasstin[img']http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee204/glasstin10/emo-fish.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 These are not my best cards but here is my set based on Green Day.[spoiler=green day cards] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 nice. Do this one when you get the chance. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 face-up LIGHT monsters with 1500 or more ATK from your side of the field to the Graveyard. This card's ATK and DEF become to the number of LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard x200. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, if you have atleast 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard, you may pay 500 Life Points and select 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard ad Special Summon the selected monster onto your side of the field in Face-Up attack position. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard aas a resulf of battle, you may Summon 2 "LIGHT" tokens to your side of the field. (LIGHT/Fairy-Type/ATL 500/DEF 250.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joethetoe007 Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 Here glasstin' date=' can you please check this card for me?[img']http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn74/ita-lee/createcard-86php-1.jpg[/img] Great card!Here's the new and iproved effect :This card can only be Normal Summoned or Special Summoned by sending the top card on your Deck to the Graveyard. When a card is discarded by either you or your opponent to the Graveyard, activate 1 of the following effects :-Return 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field to his/her hand.-Increase this monster's ATK by 300 points.Again, great work! -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joethetoe007 Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 could you check this card too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 These are not my best cards but here is my set based on Green Day.[spoiler=green day cards] Please post your cards one at a time. :)1st card effect: When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle' date=' place 1 Chord Counter on this card to Special Summon 1 "Tre Cool" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.Overall excellent effort! -Glasstin[img']http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee204/glasstin10/emo-fish.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 how bout this 1 glass? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 nice. Do this one when you get the chance. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set' date=' this card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 face-up LIGHT monsters with 1500 or more ATK from your side of the field to the Graveyard. This card's ATK and DEF become to the number of LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard x200. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, if you have atleast 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard, you may pay 500 Life Points and select 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon the selected monster onto your side of the field in Face-Up attack position. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard aas a resulf of battle, you may Summon 2 "LIGHT" tokens to your side of the field. (LIGHT/Fairy-Type/ATL 500/DEF 250.)[/quote'] Great work!I found a few minor errors, and I corrected them :This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 face-up LIGHT monsters with 1500 or more ATK from your side of the field to the Graveyard. This card's ATK and DEF become to the number of LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard x200. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, if you have at least 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard, you may pay 500 Life Points and select 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon the selected monster onto your side of the field in Face-Up attack position. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you may Summon 2 "LIGHT" tokens to your side of the field. (LIGHT/Fairy-Type/ATL 500/DEF 250.) -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Thanks, but I don't see what the changes were, can you bold them please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 nice. Do this one when you get the chance. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set' date=' this card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 face-up LIGHT monsters with 1500 or more ATK from your side of the field to the Graveyard. This card's ATK and DEF become to the number of LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard x200. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, if you have atleast 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard, you may pay 500 Life Points and select 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon the selected monster onto your side of the field in Face-Up attack position. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard aas a resulf of battle, you may Summon 2 "LIGHT" tokens to your side of the field. (LIGHT/Fairy-Type/ATL 500/DEF 250.)[/quote'] Great work!I found a few minor errors, and I corrected them :This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 face-up LIGHT monsters with 1500 or more ATK from your side of the field to the Graveyard. This card's original ATK and DEF becomes to the number of LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard x200. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, if you have at least 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard, you may pay 500 Life Points and select 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position in your side of the field. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you may Special Summon 2 "LIGHT" tokens to your side of the field. (LIGHT/Fairy-Type/Level ??/ATK 500/DEF 250.) -Glasstin Sorry if this maybe spam, but Glastin forgot some errors :/ I bolded them (i think those are all) ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 yeah...im a poor card creator at card effects and overpowering them..a little help? its supposed to be the strongest of its kind so try to give it a good effect, but balancing it too. The Card: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 nice. Do this one when you get the chance. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set' date=' this card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 face-up LIGHT monsters with 1500 or more ATK from your side of the field to the Graveyard. This card's ATK and DEF become to the number of LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard x200. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, if you have atleast 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard, you may pay 500 Life Points and select 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon the selected monster onto your side of the field in Face-Up attack position. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard aas a resulf of battle, you may Summon 2 "LIGHT" tokens to your side of the field. (LIGHT/Fairy-Type/ATL 500/DEF 250.)[/quote'] Great work!I found a few minor errors, and I corrected them :This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 Face-Up LIGHT monsters with 1500 or more ATK from your side of the field to the Graveyard. This card's original ATK and DEF becomes to the number of LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard x200. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, if you have at least 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard, you may pay 500 Life Points and select 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon it in Face-Up Attack Position in your side of the field. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you may Special Summon 2 "LIGHT" tokens to your side of the field. (LIGHT/Fairy-Type/Level ??/ATK 500/DEF 250.) -Glasstin Sorry if this maybe spam, but Glastin forgot some errors :/ I bolded them (i think those are all) ^_^ face-up isn't capital >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 could you check this card too Cool idea!Here's the renewed effect :Flip 1 coin. If the result is heads' date=' send all cards on your opponent's side of the field to the Graveyard. If the result is tails, send all card on your side of the field to the Graveyard. -Glasstin[img']http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee204/glasstin10/emo-fish.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 how bout this 1 glass? Great card!Here's the renewed effect :You can only activate this card when a "Revenger" monster declares an attack. Select a monster with the word "Revenger" in its name' date=' and double the selected monster's attack. Then add this following effect to it's original card effect : ...The rest of the effect is okay, but the word "effect" must be "affect".Otherwise, great job! -Glasstin[img']http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee204/glasstin10/emo-fish.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew 101 Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 I know there are most likely no errors, I just want to be safe. I saw that you might give other tips. I can tell that you might say "Holo it etc". I was already going to :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 can you check this card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 this should be interestingcan you check this card out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 yeah...im a poor card creator at card effects and overpowering them..a little help? its supposed to be the strongest of its kind so try to give it a good effect' date=' but balancing it too. [b']The Card:[/b] Great card! Here's the renewed effect :When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, it may attack again. -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 I know there are most likely no errors' date=' I just want to be safe. [img']http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/9364/50999lz3.jpg[/img] I saw that you might give other tips. I can tell that you might say "Holo it etc". I was already going to :mrgreen: This card's effect is perfect! My only advice to you, is to work on the uniqueness of the picture. Overall, great effort! -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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