MJmelo Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 Some thing yall dont know about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blockman95 Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 its okay, the picture is good but the ocg and grammer is bad 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rina Kasakura Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 (EDITED) I like it.I agree, however, with the comment on your card grammar: it needs work.With the card grammar displayed, my understanding of the effect, the Type used, and stats in general, I give it a 5/10. With proper grammar, I'd give it an 7/10, considering its potential. For grammar purposes, try one of these: FLIP: Destroy 2 cards on the field. When this card is Flip Summoned, it loses 1000 DEF. OR FLIP: Destroy 2 cards on the field. This card loses 1000 DEF when it is Flip Summoned. OR (in case you didn't mean to say "Flip Summon") FLIP: Destroy 2 cards on the field. When this card is flipped face-up, it loses 1000 DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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