Careless Whisper Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 Alright, I had an E-Mail from Poetry.com, and here's the text on my E-Mail, just the text. I had to censor my address out because that's for my information only. [spoiler=Submitted Poem(My Raven Parody)]Everday upon my after school hoursI sit in my room within the highest towerAnd in my room, I sit on my throneThe throne in which I sit in front of my hard-ware droneWith the vision of a corpse within my memory core Only this and nothing more. And on this hard-ware drone I sit in frontGathering my forces and resources as I prepare to confrontConquering land and mineral points with relative easeWith loyalty at my side I do as I pleaseAs my men charge forward they hear me from the shore "Spill the gore," and nothing more One-by-one my enemies fallUntil only one stands above it allAs my loyal men prepare to begin to chargeI click the button to make the screen enlargeThey shout a battle cry as they rush to war "Quote thy Lord, 'Spill the gore.'" With me as the victor and dominator of the worldI get out of my throne with a single little twirlI head down the steps to find something to drinkand finished with the drink I rinse it in the sinkand head back up to my chamber door because this is what I do, and none else more **************************************************** A personal note from the desk of:Steven J. Michaels, International Society of Poets -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- INTENDED FOR ADDRESSEE ONLY: Zachary Morgan[{Mailing Adress Censored for Personal Reasons}] Imagine yourself at an international gathering of over a thousand poets . . . publishers . . . editors . . . your friends and family . . . all waiting expectantly for the announcement. A hush suddenly falls over the audience. Finally it comes: "Ladies and gentlemen and fellow poets . . . our 2008 Poet of the Year and Grand Prize winner of $20,000.00 and a $10,000.00 book publishing contract is . . . Zachary Morgan!" You make your way to the stage amidst the sound of thunderous applause and a standing ovation from your new friends. We're familiar with your work, Zachary, and you know . . . it could happen just that way! Dear Zachary, I would like to inform you of your nomination as Poet of the Year for 2008 and to personally invite you to read your poetry at the single largest gathering of poets in history, where you will be formally inducted as an International Poet of Merit and Honored Member of our Society for 2008-2009. Your induction will take place in the entertainment capital of the world, Las Vegas, Nevada, during the 2008 International Society of Poets Summer Convention and Symposium, July 24-27, 2008. You will also be honored with two separate and very special awards for your poetic achievement. First, to honor and commemorate your poetic accomplishments, after you read your poetry in front of fellow poets from over 50 nations around the world, you will be presented with your very own International Outstanding Achievement in Poetry Crystal Award Trophy. This magnificent work of art (a $300.00 value) is made from imported lead crystal. It is hand-engraved and mounted on a beautiful wood base. This will be the first time that we have bestowed these crystal awards. They have been created by artisans that we have commissioned specially for this year in honor of our 22nd annual convention. This impressive 10-inch tall crystal award is so valuable that we have designed a special carrying case just for you to take it home. And Zachary, there's much more! In recognition of your poetry, we will also present to you a beautifully crafted, antique bronze Commemorative Award Medallion to honor your poetic dedication and achievements. TONY DANZA, STAR OF TELEVISION, FILM, AND BROADWAY, ANDROCK & ROLL HALL OF FAME'S THE COASTERS WILL JOIN US IN LAS VEGAS! Tony Danza has been the star of several long-running hit TV shows like "Taxi" and "Who's the Boss?" This talented actor, singer, dancer, and producer will be entertaining you LIVE in Las Vegas. Danza's versatility has taken him from television to the big screen to the big stage on Broadway. Also appearing is Cornell Gunter's Coasters to kick off the ISP Dance Party Extravaganza. You and your guests will all enjoy passes to this star-studded VIP event, so be prepared to have the time of your life! You'll also find yourself reading your contest poem in front of new friends, publishers, and editors who are supportive and eager to hear and critique your work. Amidst an intense weekend of over 20 seminars, readings, rap sessions, and workshops led by the most talented poetry faculty ever assembled, you will have the opportunity to hone your craft. We have even added several young poet lectures to meet the needs of our up-and-coming poets under 18 years of age. And you'll be able to get up-close and personal with some of the world's most renowned professional poets. This year, we are particularly pleased to welcome Pulitzer Prize-winning poet W.D. Snodgrass, Academy of American Poets Past Chancellor David Wagoner, Dr. Herbert Woodward Martin, Professor Grace Cavalieri, and over a dozen other poetry celebrities who will treat us to very special and inspiring readings of their world-renowned poetry. SHARE OVER $100,000.00 IN CASH AND PRIZES! And don't forget the most lucrative amateur poetry contest ever! Your contest entry poem can be written in any style, on any subject . . . and up to 40 lines long. Just think . . . for this poem alone, you will have the opportunity to win one of over 50 cash or gift prizes . . . including a Grand Prize of $20,000.00 cash and a $10,000.00 publishing contract, Second Prize of $7,500.00, Third Prize of $5,000.00, Fourth Prize of $2,500.00, Fifth Prize of $1,000.00, and 18 Runners-Up Prizes of $500.00 each. Plus, we will award an additional five $1,000.00 scholarships to some of today's most talented young poets. We will also present Apple iPods to the runners-up in the young poet category, not to mention door prizes, including tickets to see the best shows in Las Vegas. DON'T BE LEFT OUT! Don't miss this opportunity, Zachary. Space is limited, and our conventions routinely sell out. For our 2008 ISP Convention and Symposium, we have larger cash prizes, more chances to win, and more spectacular entertainment than ever before. Register online or call us at 410-356-2000 ext. 101. Come join your fellow poets and bring your friends and family to Las Vegas, Nevada, July 24-27, 2008, for an incredible weekend and the poetic event of the year! Sincerely, Steven J. MichaelsInternational Society of Poets --------------------------------------------------------------------------------P.S. Our host hotel, the world famous Riviera Hotel and Casino, has offered our members an unbelievable discount off their published rates while rooms last, and we advise you make your room reservations early before space runs out. Make sure you mention the International Society of Poets Convention when you call. P.P.S. Your 2008 Outstanding Achievement in Poetry Crystal Award Trophy . . . your Commemorative Award Medallion . . . $100,000.00 in cash and prizes . . . television star and Broadway sensation Tony Danza . . . Cornell Gunter's Coasters . . . educational seminars and workshops led by the most talented poetry faculty ever assembled . . . lasting friendships . . . the list goes on and on. Don't miss out! A small deposit will ensure your place in the proceedings. We'll acknowledge your reservation promptly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 well Ima say congratz (but I too lazy to read the wole thing) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 wow! I actually read it all, good job! I hope you win! I love the poems I have seen from you they are amazing, no wonder you have been nominated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 lol, thanks. But I'm sure if Icyblue entered, I'd have no chance. lol. I just got the e-mail today. I'm so happy, I'm definately bringing my mother and my friends, Paul and Steph and Scott. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 lol great poem ;) less emotion than im sure was intended but nevertheless great ^_^. and im flattered that you think i could beat you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 Congrats Meti! I'm sure you will have a great time there. It's amazing that you got accepted! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 lol. Thanks, I am alittle nervous, I'm 17 years old, and I've been nominated for the Poet of the Year, I really want to say "I guess I just owned you all" right infront of everyone, but I feel if I say that, I'll look like a prick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 lol. Thanks' date=' I am alittle nervous, I'm 17 years old, and I've been nominated for the Poet of the Year, I really want to say "I guess I just owned you all" right infront of everyone, but I feel if I say that, I'll look like a prick.[/quote'] lol no, because that poem does hit alot of gamers hard. a harsh realization for a majority of the population..... trust me, youll do fine ^_^ and given the subject, yes you did pwn XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 lol. Yeah, a poem about me playing Company of Heroes, lol. Kind of funny how I got the nomination from it, I didn't think it would be that big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 Who is Zachary? EDIT: Okay.. it read it again.. good luck ^_^ you won $20,000.00 and a $10,000.00 book publishing contract?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 ...I am, Zachary is my real name....I would have thought that Obvious, sense it's talking about me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 Congratz San-Meti ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 ...I am' date=' Zachary is my real name....I would have thought that Obvious, sense it's talking about me.[/quote'] I would love to talk (not really face-to-face of your writing skills and poetic skills as well. I just want to know how modern people right nowadays. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 ...I am' date=' Zachary is my real name....I would have thought that Obvious, sense it's talking about me.[/quote'] I would love to talk (not really face-to-face of your writing skills and poetic skills as well. I just want to know how modern people right nowadays. Why? what's there to know about it. It's more along the style of the Poet, and the creativity of it all. There's nothing to do with a Fashion Style for Modern Poetry anymore, sense every style is so diverse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 ...I am' date=' Zachary is my real name....I would have thought that Obvious, sense it's talking about me.[/quote'] I would love to talk (not really face-to-face of your writing skills and poetic skills as well. I just want to know how modern people right nowadays. Why? what's there to know about it. It's more along the style of the Poet, and the creativity of it all. There's nothing to do with a Fashion Style for Modern Poetry anymore, sense every style is so diverse. True, I will take your words in to hands. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Did you read the spoiler at the top of the page? That's the poem I entered with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 lol i noticed that the rhyme sceme in the first 2 lines dont match, but ill admit... you would have beaten me. i cant rhyme that well :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 It's called slant rhyming. I learned it from reading Emily Dickenson's poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 This is incredible. You and your family must be very proud. :D -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 congtas Zach. after you read your poem you should say "To everyone who didn't think i would be here i would like to say the following-I did it and you didn't, nanananana" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Nah, I'm not one to make myself look like a Smart-Alyc and a Prick infront of the world. I'll just say -"-Thank you for letting me share my poem to the public and I would dearly hope that you have enjoyed it." And then I'll add the list of people I am thanking for this poem, and then I'll say "So have a safe night. Again, I hope you enjoyed my poem here, and God Bless." And then that's that. But I'm not reading this poem, I'm reading my "There will be no Gray" poem because I find that to be alot better worked and more realistic and serious, other than this one, which is just about me playing computer games all day. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 anyway this poem is epic imao. can you pm me the one you will use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Actually, I have it another thread. Just look under my threads for "There Will Be No Gray" or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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