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Lord of the Dragons PLZ RATE!!


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These are great cards! My only comment would be to improve on the uniqueness of bothe your effects and images, and to improve on the quality of you images as well. Also, try and work on your capitalization, punctuation, and grammar, in your card effects. Otherwise, incredible effort! Keep up the good work!

 

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thank for the advice but i have a question. what do you mean to improve on the uniqueness and quality?

 

some of the images are "choppy" and effects are rather lackluster and simple. lacking zest.... nothing to say, "these are my cards deal with it!"....

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Delta plz don't double or triple post. Anyways... I like these cards but I agree with glasstin10, they have slightly lackluster effects and are fairly redundant. Some of the images are poor quality and I take images into consideration a lot. For your first cards though these are excellent. I have 3 tips for the future. Make many unique effects, tone these cards down a bit because they're a little overpowered, and try and get good images even if it takes a while to search for them.

 

8/10 Great job for your first cards!

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Quote Google Define:

 

"A Lord (Laird in some Scottish contexts) is a male who has power and authority. It can have different meanings depending on the context of use. Women will usually (but not universally) take the title 'Lady' instead of Laird or Lord. An example of a female Lord is the Lord of Mann."

 

You have female lords... It's the wrong word. Sorry :P

 

Other than that, neat. 6.8/10

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i powered down bahumut but that was the only card i saw that was overpowered. antiinferno dragon lord is given to those who have dragon companions. they are not real lords or ladies. also the girls would then sound retarded if they were called dragon ladies instead of dragon lords

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