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Just a few problems with the card:

 

1. A few OCG errors; Special Summon (needs capitals), ...effects of Normal Trap cards (this card is still treated as a Continuous Trap card). [in that, Normal, Trap, Continuous need to be capitalized and a full stop was placed after "trap.(" which isn't needed].

 

2. The card is extremely overpowered. 4000 ATK points from a Trap card which needs no tributes is very overpowered. Try to keep the card in balance and add something like... Pay 3000 Life Points, Tribute 3 Monsters on your side of the field, Your opponent gains 3000 Life Points if this card is activated, etc.

 

Overall: 6/10 (fix up these mistakes and I could probably give you an 8/10, missing 2 for originality).

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