Redyear20 Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Hey guys what about this card...I hope you like it. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing a "Dark Lord Ha Des" on your side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF Fiend-Type monsters on your side of the field except this card by 300. Also, when a Fiend type monster destroys a monster as a result of battle, negate the effect of the destroyed monster and remove it from play instead of sending it to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you may Special Summon 1 Fiend-type monster from in your Graveyard, or Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster removed from play. If this card is removed from play, you can Special Summon it by tributing 3 Fiend-Type monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[email protected] Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 neat card and he looks a bit like the evil jaden 10/10 @.@ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redyear20 Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Thanks...any more comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cless Alvein Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 the COOLEST!!! fiend card ever!!! 1000/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redyear20 Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 At least I have a card with 10/10 rating...Thak so much... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[email protected] Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 are you going to do some more if that card was made to every duelist and collector i would enjoy dueling them 0.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cless Alvein Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 no problem bro! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 nice card pic just a bit to much to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Overpowered, but good pic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 overpowered, and some effects arent worded right. good effort though, if you need an effect worked out feel free to pm me ;) ~Icy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adikdid Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 REALLY GOOD ^_^ 10000000/100 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icecube Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Some mistakes with letters, try making it less text. 8/10 but the image is really good, but you'll need a disclaimer if the image is not yours... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAD Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redyear20 Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Thanks for all...the author of the picture is in the picture card.....This picture is from....http://www.waiting4oblivion.com/images/bestiary/dremora.jpg Oh also...sorry for some mistake maked id the Text...is just my native laguage is Spanish and not english....I try make the text as understable as possible....Thanks you all. I very happy that you guys love it. Pleas kip leaving oppinion so i can make betters cards. I change the card effect a little so it can be understaneble. Thanks.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by tributing "Dark Lord Has Des" from your side of the field. As long as this card remain face-up on the field, all your Fiend Type monster except this card increase the ATK and DEF by 300 points. Also, when a Fiend type monster destroy a monster card as a result of battle, negated the effect of the destroyed monster and sent it out of play. Once per turn, you may Special Summon from your graveyard or card(s) removed from play, 1 Fiend type monster in any position. If this card will be removed from play or is all ready remove from play, by tributing 3 Fiend type monster from your side of the field, you may Special Summon this card. Summoned Summoned Tributing remains Fiend-Type Fiend-Type destroys monster negate remove it from play Graveyard Fiend-Type Tributing Fiend-Type Many OCG errors also, but seeing as your spanish i suppose you can be let off ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redyear20 Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Thanks Dj Osiris...card effect have been fix. Thank you. PLEASE KIP LEAVIN OPINIONS SO I CAN MAKE MORE BETTER CARD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redyear20 Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Ho no more people want to rate this card....i find it cool you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Don't double post. Take out the signature inside the picture or else it ruins it. 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redyear20 Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 I haven't doble post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 I haven't doble post. Yes. Yes you did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 I'm sorry, but I think you can do better. First, it's Dark Ruler Ha Des, not Has Des. Second, use past tenths. The first Normal Summon should be Normal SUmmoned, the first Special Summon should be Special Summoned. I'll just re-type the effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing a "Dark Lord Ha Des" on your side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF Fiend-Type monsters on your side of the field except this card by 300. Also, when a Fiend type monster destroys a monster as a result of battle, negate the effect of the destroyed monster and remove it from play instead of sending it to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you may Special Summon 1 Fiend-type monster from in your Graveyard, or Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster removed from play. If this card is removed from play, you can Special Summon it by tributing 3 Fiend-Type monsters. Also, one other thing, how do you Special Summon it when it's removed from play if it can only be Special Summoned by tributing Dark Ruler Ha Des? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_bakura Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 I'm sorry' date=' but I think you can do better. First, it's Dark Ruler Ha Des, not Has Des. Second, use past tenths. The first Normal Summon should be Normal SUmmoned, the first Special Summon should be Special Summoned. I'll just re-type the effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing a "Dark Lord Ha Des" on your side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF Fiend-Type monsters on your side of the field except this card by 300. Also, when a Fiend type monster destroys a monster as a result of battle, negate the effect of the destroyed monster and remove it from play instead of sending it to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you may Special Summon 1 Fiend-type monster from in your Graveyard, or Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster removed from play. If this card is removed from play, you can Special Summon it by tributing 3 Fiend-Type monsters. Also, one other thing, how do you Special Summon it when it's removed from play if it can only be Special Summoned by tributing Dark Ruler Ha Des?[/quote'] I have to agree... Very many OCG errors and your card's effect contradicts itself... It'll pay to rethink and rewrite this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redyear20 Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Hoe thank for the help here...well...you see...sense upperdeck like to make rules...here are the rules of this card. He cannot be special summon except by tributing 'Dark Lord Ha Des"...But...if you summon it well...you can. But if you don't havent summon it correctle...forhet about is last effect. You may said this is like a ritual monster like an example of summoning condition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 Actually, that only works with the following text: This card can only be Special Summoned by _______ It doesn't work for the following text: This card cannot be Special Summoned except by ______ So yeah, change to example 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_bakura Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 Actually' date=' that only works with the following text: This card can only be Special Summoned by _______ It doesn't work for the following text: This card cannot be Special Summoned except by ______ So yeah, change to example 1.[/quote'] Agreed, change to Dark Edo's 1st example... I would wipe the effect of bringing it back from the removed from play lot to be honest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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