lewdabomb Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 this is not my art work, but the idea is mine, wud appreciate comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 yea good cards 8/10 i like them!! check out my post wil you im jst about finished doin it it has my 1st 5 cards!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 These are really shitty.. 4/10OCG and pictures and some misunderstabndings in effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antiinferno Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 They're not that shitty :x but the OCG is really bad on some of them. For example one card has "b" instead of "be". Also with the Baby Dragon, "would be destroyed as a result of battle it is not" simply does not flow right at all! I know you were probably trying to phrase it differently from the egg to add variety to the descriptions and not make them sound so similar... Good idea in general you know. But really you should just change it back to the way you wrote it with the egg. If flows better and keeps continuity with the set :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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