foonix Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 ok my former cards werent so good.hope this one is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antiinferno Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Changes I might make "if at least two of the flips result in a tails," - Because 'results' in that sentence just sounds kind of... I don't know it doesn't seem to flow right. But this one is just a personal taste for word flow so completely ignore it if you wish to. "destroy" instead of "destroi" - spelling! Possibly "except for this card" instead of just "except this card" Stats are well balanced, a clever opponent could take this guy out. But it would be useful all the same... Not too over-powered I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
foonix Posted May 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 "if at least two of the flips result in a tails' date='"[/quote']Possibly "except for this card" instead of just "except this card" those r things i copied from real cards so i gues there is nothing wrong whit it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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