DuelWinner Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Joining Duel Academy This takes place sometime in the future as Aster runs to the Duel Academy Exams. He hits someone and his decks falls. "You are!!," said Aster flappergasted."Take this," said the man to Aster handing him a winged kuriboh."Thanks," said Aster he knew he was the king of Yugioh."Aster Yuki present," said Aster as he got to the Entrance Exams. Aster Yuki was the last one to duel. He had to face Dr. Crowler.8000/8000"Ok I go first," said Crowler."I place two face downs and activate Heavy Storm. Now I sacrifice my face downs to summon Ancient Gear Golem and I end my turn.""Ok," Aster thought. "I summon Dark Effigy in Attack Mode and I play two face downs and I end my turn.""Pathetic, Ancient Gear Golem use Mechanized Melee on Dark Effigy.""I activate my face down Magic Cylinder now you take 3000 points of damage. And I activate Compulsory Evacuation Device sending Golem back to your hand."5000/8000"Fine I end my turn.""I activate Dark Grepher's special ability since I send Shadow Delver to the Grave and I can Special Summon him. Now I tribute Dark Grepher and Dark Effigy to summon The Wicked Dreadroot now attack him directly.""Ahh!""Now I end my turn."1000/8000"I summon Ancient Gear Soldier and I end my turn.""The Wicked Dreadroot attack Ancient Gear Soldier and win this duel," said Aster as The Wicked Dreadroot destroyed Ancient Gear Soldier and Crowler lost the rest of his lifepoints. "Fine your in," grumbled Crowler as he got up and he shake dust off him. End of Chapter 1 Hope you like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 way to short duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Way way way way way to short try to make it longer 3.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Also breaking the rules of the TCG. (Ex: Crowler summons two face-downs, then summons Gear Golem, Aster activates Magic Cylinder when AGG attacks, which it's effect cancels, discarding a Level 4 to summon Dark Grepher,and using Dark Effigy as two Tributes for an Effect monster.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Way to short.Plot isn't good.First part is a total-rip of GX Episode 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 2.34/10. Very short and why did you rip off YGO GX. Its best to think off something new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DuelWinner Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Ok this is over going to revamp it but need to come up with new name and he still has to go to duel academy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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