odin557 Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Image belongs to bearcavestudious at deviant art. OK I saw this and ya, this is how it turned out. Tell me what you think.Ok it is fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
302930 Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Cool card, good pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Slight Grammatical and OCG errors. Good card. The effect is that of an inverted Nimble Momonga. Image could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
odin557 Posted May 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 good card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wilson91 Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Grammar errors, however, it's original. Well done. 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
odin557 Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 what are the grammatical errors, I would like to improve upon them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Take out "Direct" and change "Deffence" to "Defense". Nice card btw. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
odin557 Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Much better. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Higure-san Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 I Love Insect Cards!!! :D This is amazing!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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