Sbamber Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 OK this is my song, but I don't know were to put it? So I put in in Showcase Name: Burn Slow it bleeds in the night with all othersomething black growing into all of seakilling me sopain is my only last resortscares all on meahh crap the deeds are burning all the bad insidewhy can't I find the answer in the dark of dayvolcanoes ashes showdeath is all that I knowyou can't kill me with the death and my emissions I don't know how I feel, what just won't dieI can't just live inside I seehow it killing meand its eating me, the best of mewhat i kill, i don't want to seeso let me show you(show you)about the sins i lead that is how I chose to pick all the flames in meblackened sky deep inside my other soulscars from the future, shakes me in my headi know it's time to go, but i just wanna stayafter this i feel sorry as the day beforesee the scars but still want lots moreanti-kill astonishment with the night beforemy life is screwed and i still don't fix it I don't know how I feel, what just won't dieI can't just live inside i seehow it killing meand its eating me, the best of mewhat i kill, i don't want to seeso let me show you(show you)about the sins i lead showing, showing allthe light reaches out my soul, and crumbles in the dustfight, fighting allmy will to kill is all i havewhen others would sleep init's only as light as you see it i seehow it killing meand its eating me, the best of mewhat i kill, i don't want to seeso let me show you(show you)about the sins i lead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bastionsgirl Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Pretty good song, but you're right, it is in the wrong section. It should be put in General. No hard feelings, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 well since he made it, it would be in showcase, right? Good song though! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 I just didn't know if it should be in General or Showcase, so if it is in wrong place a Mod will move Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 no actuall this belongs in general Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Yeah, for some reason Showcase is reserved for graphix. They really need to make a Music Only section, with "Custom Songs" sub-section and "Band" sub-section. That way we have somewhere other than General to put all this stuff. Anyway, nice song, though I don't really know what the rhythm is supposed to be, but nice Lyrics.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Yeah or a Music Section like my Forum (Meti might know what I'm talking about) anyway yeah nice song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 I do know what your talking about, as if it is ever made, I would probably be the first one to sign up to Mod it...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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