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learn... your... OCG... please.

You wrote:

Dimond Dragon

1-tuner monster+1-non tuner monster

 

When this card is normal summond destroy one monster on your opponets side of the field after that you loose 500 life points.Once per turn you may pay 1000 life points to sepial summon a level 4+ monster from your deck

 

I think:

Diamond Dragon

1 Tuner monster + 1 non-Tuner monster

When this card is Synchro Summmoned, pay 500 Life Points to destroy one monster on your opponent's side of the field. Once per turn, you may pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon a Level 4 or higher monster from your deck.

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hopelessly overpowered. 1000 Life Points to summon Dark Magician of Chaos, Ultimate Tyranno, Arcana Force XI - the World, etc... and its only level 5 too!

For your "Tuner Dragon", powerful is spelled with one "l", and the Attribute label needs to be: "Dragon / Tuner", while you wrote "Dragon/tuner"...

and both pics are horrible. Their both pixelated, and the bottom one looks like it was drawn by a 10-year old

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Magicbunny, that didn't help jordan out at all. If you're going to complain about someone's OCG, then give them a few tips when you do.

 

jordan, I can help you out there. ;) I'll edit my post and submit it when I'm done. So just hang on.

 

EDIT: Just copy and paste this in your card text box. ;)

 

When this card is Normal Summoned, destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. The controller of this card then loses 500 Life Points. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon a level 4 or higher monster from your Deck face-up on your side of the field.

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Correct OCG:

 

"1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters"

When this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field, the controller of this card then loses 500 Life Points. Once per turn, you may pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon a Lv. 4 monster from your Deck face-up on your side of the field.

 

 

NOTE: I reduced the effect to only Summon a Lv. 4 since it will be unbalanced if it were any higher.

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Correct OCG:

 

"1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters"

When this card is Normal Summoned' date=' destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field, the controller of this card then loses 500 Life Points. Once per turn, you may pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon a Lv. 4 monster from your Deck face-up on your side of the field.

 

 

NOTE: I reduced the effect to only Summon a Lv. 4 since it will be unbalanced if it were any higher.[/quote']

 

I didn't edit the effect other than putting losing 500 LPs before destroying a monster. Couldn't think of how to word it. But you did a good job with it. But I said that because I didn't balance his card for him. Guess I should have, though, so you did a good job. ;)

 

BTW, it should say "...opponent's side of the field. The controller of this card..." instead of "...opponent's side of the field, the controller of this card...". The comma makes it a run-on.

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