Hioco Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 Non of my fan-fics are ever about yugioh so i thought i'd make this one into a yugioh fan-fic Please enjoy ^_^ Characters Kai Thompson Kai is the only pearson who uses a deck without a name. He is 13 years old and a really good duelist. His goal is to become chancellor of the Supreme Duel Academy. His deck ranges of 40 cards with Cyber Dragon and more. His deck doensn't have a theme hi just calls it pearsonal. Brad Taylor Brad is Kai's best friend. They share tactics they discuss decks and they have known each other since kindergarten and have been friends ever since. Brad runs another deck with no theme but he does have a name he calls it Life saver because it has got him out of a lot of trouble and he runs a few life point recovery cards in his deck to. So those are the main characters and none will need adding because you will get to know more during the Fan Fiction [spoiler=Chapter 1-Enter the Academy (I hope)] [align=center] Today was the biggest day of kai and Brad's lives as they both head off to the duel academy tests which will decide who gets in and who doesn't. Kai: Come on Brad we're gonna be late and you don't want t be the one who kills my dreams!! Brad: Okay don't cry your heart out i'm comin' They both head out of the door and start running hoping to get there on time. 1 Hour later Kai: We're here!! Brad: Ok but dont get your hopes up last year my friend from school Micheal got rejected for dropping his hand in reaction to getting hit from a petit moth. Kai: Yeah? well your friend must be nervous at times Brad: It was just pressure Kai: Well i always say confidence is key! Brad: Errm no you don't Kai: Well i should do They both walked through two huge doors and seen two massive men standing in front of them Guards: Out you go! They threw a helpless boy out of the building's doors Helpless Kid: But that teacher cheated!! Guards: Shut up little boy before we make you go home and cry to momma Helpless Kid: What you gonna do duel me ha ha ha ha! Guards: Bring it on Little Boy!! They both bring out their duel disks and Kai notices that the guards have gold ones but he doesn't really take interest in them Helpless Kid: Normal duel 4000 lifepoints Guards: Yeah but you'll be waving bye bye to them in about 5 seconds Helpless kid: Okay we'll se about that Kai and brad stood back watching in excitement knowing that the finishing time for the tests are in another 4 hours so they decided to wait and watch. Helpless Kid: Seeming as though you haven't made a move i'll go first! Guards: Fine by us! Helpless Kid: Okay to start off i play Jetroid in Attack Mode!! Then i place 2 cards face down and end my turn! Jetroid1200/1800 Guard #1: Meh i'll handle this one. I'll start by playing Heavy Storm! The kid stares at his two traps (Solemn Judgement and Dust Tornado) Guard #1: And you can wave your life points goodbye beacause i Special Summon Cyber Dragon!! Cyber Dragon2100/1600 Cyber Dragon gets placed on his duel disk and it comes to life on his side of the field!! Kai: How did he do that! Guard #1: and now because i have Cyber Dragons i play Polymerization and fuse the Cyber Dragon with my other Cyber Dragon in my hand!! Another Dragon comes out of his card and then mixes with the other and a Cyber Twin Dragon comes out of the mix! Cyber Twin Dragon2800/2100 Guard #1: You gonna get running then! Cause i attack your hopless Jetroid Helpless Kid: Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!! Guard #1: Whats so funny! Helpless Kid: This!! He plays down Magic Cylinder from his hand and backfires the blast right back at the Guards lifepoints! Guard #1: Impossible!!!! His life points go to 1200 and so the other guard takes over Kai: This isn't Fair i'm Steppin In!! Kai jumps on the Helpless Kids side and gives him a hand Dylan: Hi my names Dylan Kai: Hi i'm Kai and i'm here to help!! Guards: Well Well Well who do we have here?? Kai: My names Kai and this kid will not get hurt without you guys getting through me!! Guard #2: Well this should be like ripping a wet peice of paper! Kai: Don't count on it! Kai brings out his duel disk and draws 5 cards Guard #2: Well since i have another 2 attacks on your monster i'll use one of them, Go Cyber Twin! Cyber Twin yet again blasts a huge laser at Jetroid Kai: May I? Dylan: Go for it! Kai: Go Draining Sheild! The laser blasts right through Jetroid but it still stands as if nothings happened! Guard #2: Okay what just happened? Kai: You'll see, is it my go Guard #2: Sure knock yourself out Kai: Well since you hit me earlier im gonna have to kill your Cyber Twin Dragon! Guard #2: And how do you plan to do that?? Kai: Like this, Go Jetroid Destory Cyber Twin!! Jetroid flew at Cyber twin and shot rockets Guard #2: Not even gonna scratch my Cyber Twin! Kai: Wanna bet? Guard #2: What! Cyber Twin Dragon had beeen beeten and left the guard for dead. Kai: Dylan! Your go! Dylan: My pleasure!! Go Chiron The Mage!! Chiron The Mage1800/1000 Dylan: Just to finish you off Go Chiron Direct Attack!! Chiron and it's horse charges at the guards who have lost the duel with 0 Lifepoints. Chancellor: Wow boys you two are good together! Kai and Dylan: Thanks Chancellor: Are you trying out for the duel academy?? Dylan: I was but i got thrown out because a teacher drawn 7 cards instead of 6 and put on back on top of his deck! Chancellor: We know and that has been sorted out Dylan: Thanks. Chancellor: Well for that bravery i offer you two a lifetime of dueling in the Supreme Duel Academy Kai: Don't we have to do the tests?? Chancellor: Nope infact we will all go there now i have a limo waiting. Kai: But what about Brad he is my best freind and i will not go any place without him. Chancellor: Well bring him in he is granted as well! Brad: Thanks Sir They all hop into the limo and head for the port where the boat will take them to the Supreme Duel Academy.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 It's pretty nice.Not to short or to long.But remember to capitalize names and the letter I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted May 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 Thanks and i will ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 Uh, although script format might be preferred, I personally found that you using it makes the story very difficult to follow. Just a personal thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted May 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 but what do you think about the story itself?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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