Some help for DARK and LIGHT

[Apocolypse]

Fantasy Fine Art

Reworked version of Dark Portal

[Titus]

Change "the selected monster" in the first card to "this monster", since the effect is being added to the monster, it's not selecting itself.

 

And what happens if the LIGHT monster for the second card gets equipped with that card while in attack position and then gets changed to defense? Is the card destroyed? Also, the 2nd card needs a little better OCG. If you need help with that, just ask. ;)

 

But nice effects. :)

[Kizzi]

Dark needs no help. Overpowered.

Also, what's attack energy?

[Titus]

Yeah, well, it is overpowered, but I was just helping with OCG.

[Apocolypse]

Thanks Titus, your probably right. As far as the 2nd card, I had a hard time trying to word it the way I meant, so did the best I could think of at the time.

[Wyhe]

Let Dark Portal replace the special summoned monster's original effect with the new effect stated.

[Titus]

Thanks Titus' date=' your probably right. As far as the 2nd card, I had a hard time trying to word it the way I meant, so did the best I could think of at the time.

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No problem. And if you need any help with OCG, feel free to ask me. ;)

 

Also, you should take what lord wyhe said into consideration.

[Apocolypse]

Thank you gentlemen, I'll think on your comments.

[Titus]

Again, no problem. ;)

[Apocolypse]

I like the new version better myself, hope it satisfies.

[Wyhe]

[looks at new version of Dark Portal]That's much better now.