Backstabbing Fear Knight

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

Here's a new card by me, hope y'all like it. ^_^

Effect: When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, place it face-up in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card. During each of your the controller's Standby Phases, the controller must Tribute 1 monster on their side of the field. If the Tributed monster's ATK is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.

[Titus]

So, once your opponent gets it, then the effect gets done on you? You should say "the controller of this card" instead. Also, I think you should either increase its level or lower it's ATK. But it's good. ;) Nice effect.

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

Good idea, thanks, I'll make it "the controller" I think it's stats are pretty good since it isn't really attacking, and Frostosaurus, Summoned Skull, and Malicious Edge have similar stats.

 

Ok, text changed. ^_^

[Hanimir]

Great idea, just lower the ATK a bit, it's hard for your opponent to

come up with a monster which ATK is higher than 2500 when he has

to tribute one of his monsters every turn XD

9/10

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

K, ATK has been lowered to 2200.

[Titus]

Good. ;) And I wasn't talking about lowering it's ATK for attack. I just meant so your opponent isn't losing LPs so fast. Because if your opponent could use it as a monster, I'd say keep the ATK up.

 

Oh, and one more thing that I didn't notice. "inflict the difference as Battle Damage" I don't think it should be battle damage...just damage.

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

I think I'll keep Battle Damage 'cause it makes it seem like it's attacking the opponent's monsters from behind.