Cyber_Master Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 My first card plz rate More on same subject to come Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Evil! Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Not bad, great idea.Correct Grammar would be:This card can only be Fusion Summoned under the effect of "Cybernetic Uprising" During each of your end phases, you can activate one of the following effects.-Pay 500 life points, if you do not, this card is destroyed-Pay 1000 life points to add 1 card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. If you do not, this card is destroyed.When this card is destroyed, add one level 5 or below Machine-type monster from your graveyard to your hand.Thats what i think anywayMainly, underpowered. I will underline the bad bits, and what it should be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber_Master Posted May 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 thanks for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killer1596 Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 how do you post cards plezzzzzzzz tell me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Evil! Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 @killer 1. dont hijack threads.______________________________-repped prob 4 hijack 2. use image tags by clicking your card on card maker @Cyber Dude, i mite b able to help u develop this further.________________________+repped for gr8 card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killer1596 Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 i dont know were or what to do somting else will pop up or im doing someting rong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Evil! Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 oh rite. ok. i neut'd you so no change on rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Well, just some ocg errors but for a newbie, these are o.k. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killer1596 Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 this will pop up.Uploading to Image Shack... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫Griffinsusername♫ Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 some OCG problems and a more balanced (and OCG friendly) effect is:"This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Cybernetic Uprising." During each of your End Phases, you can activate one of the following effects. If you do not this card is destroyed: Pay 1000 Life Points to add 1 card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand, pay 500 Life Points. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, add one level 5 or lower Machine-type monster from your Graveyard to your hand." other than that, good idea! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkeypooop Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 aweaome 10/10 it could be better if the monster pic had a black backround but awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
302930 Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 how do you post cards plezzzzzzzz tell me If they are saved on your computer, go to the bottom of your post and it has something called "attachments". Click browse on that, click on the card you want to post, and then click the button that says "add attachment" 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uchiha Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 8/10OCG/Grammar Errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 its good for your first try. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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