Egyptian Pharaoh, Ra

[EliminateHRN]

Wel I'm improving my card making each time I make a card. I remember I wasn't so good at making cards when I first joined but now I'm making some pretty cool cards so all new members that thinks they aren't good at card making well you will improve as everyone learns :D

 

That was just something I wrote for inperation to new members if they do not think they are good at card making and all that stuff anyway here is the card. Please tell me if over or underpowered and any OCG Errors. Thank You

 

I do not own the pic I only use it to increase the quality of my cards. The real artist is Genzoman

 

Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 2 Winged Beast-Type monster in your Graveyard from play. If this card attacks your opponent's Life Points directly, draw 1 card. If the card is a Effect Monster, Special Summon it in face-up ATK Position. If it is a Normal Monster, add it to your hand. If it is a Spell or Trap Card, put it back in your Deck and shuffle it.

[PenguinX]

You only say ATK when refering to its actual ATK and DEF points. Otherwise, say attack. Thats the only real reason I see, but it may be slightly overpowered, being able to summon an effect moster straight to the field. I see how you lowered the ATK to make up for this, but it is still too strong. The pic doesn't really show it as much of a winged-beast, seeing as it has no wings.

 

OCG - 4/5

Pic - 1/2

Effect - 2/3

 

Overall - 7/10! Great!

[EliminateHRN]

Yeah I thought so and the pic is just becuase it looks like a bird. also I was going to actually only have it 1600 ATK I'll fix it now

[PenguinX]

I don't think that you should lower the ATK and DEF, but change the effect so that it isn't as powerful, like make it that the drawn monster can be Special Summoned if it has 1800 ATK or less ATK. Otherwise, you could deal too much damage to your opponent in a single turn, because the special summoned monster could attack too.

[EliminateHRN]

Aw... well most of those kind of monsters need a different kind of Special Summon (example: Dark Armed Dragon needs 3 DARK monsters in the Graveyard to Special Summon)

[alvarosv]

I say he should be Beast-warrior and you say attack position not ATK position. 8/10 not bad at all!

[EliminateHRN]

I'm not changing it to Beast-Warrior if anything it will be Warrior or Beast and I know I haven't chenged it yet

[Exiro]

Lol, you're just playing with the Ancient Egyptian beliefs.

Ra was not a pharaoh.

 

Nice card, though.

[EliminateHRN]

I know Ra ain't a Pharaoh he is a Sun God right but I just made the name that because he looks like Ra and a Pharaoh but thanks

[alvarosv]

I'm not changing it to Beast-Warrior if anything it will be Warrior or Beast and I know I haven't chenged it yet

Spellcaster would be good since he has a staff.

[EliminateHRN]

Yeah didn't think of that I'll make some changes

[Wyhe]

good,but you could make the effect better (7/10)

[EliminateHRN]

Well I know and I haven't had time to change it so I'll change it up a bit tomorrow

[Crystal Alien]

If u don't mind if i make like a whole egytion set if u arent all ready doing one?

[fireball_dragon]

I don't think that you should lower the ATK and DEF' date=' but change the effect so that it isn't as powerful, like make it that the drawn monster can be Special Summoned if it has 1800 ATK or less ATK. Otherwise, you could deal too much damage to your opponent in a single turn, because the special summoned monster could attack too.

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Just so you know, monsters can't attack the same turn they're Special summoned.

 

This is a good card 9/10

[EliminateHRN]

Thanks and also ryan you can make one tho thast was Spam

 

Also I'm fi nishing up some changes to the card