soldaderyan Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 well, this is my 1st card please post something :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lalolalo Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 ouch, I can't see it. u.u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinX Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 to upload ur pic, u need to save it into ur 'My Pictures' or whatever u've got, and then go ono tinypic and upload the picture. There should be an URL link that you just copy straight into ur post. u could also use photobucket or Imageshack, but I find tinypic the easiest to use Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soldaderyan Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 thnx for ur help penguinx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinX Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Your Welcome! Now, to the Rating! The OCG (Original Card Grammar) isn't the best. It should say something like 'If this card is discarded from the hand to the Graveyard by a card effect, Special Summon this card to your side of the Field', kinda like the Dark World effects. Nice Pic, reminds me of Dragon dwelling in the cave or whatever it is. Effect is unoriginal, and slightly overpowered. I would change it so that it has to be discarded by an opponents card effect, or you have to pay 1000 Life Points. OCG - 3/5Pic - 2/2Effect - 1/3 6/10 - Good attempt for a N00b, but next time, try a more original effect, and look at other cards to get a feel for the correct OCG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soldaderyan Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 ok,ok thnx,yeah the effect is unoriginal cuz i was learning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jadenyuki52 Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 sweet first card!! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 6.4/10.Good effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolf Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 I will try to comment this card even if I'm kinda of a noob hehehe.....so I think your card should have 5 stars and I think that the effect should say "If this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard by a card's effect, Special Summon this card to your side of the Field" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soldaderyan Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 5 stars? naaI think 7 is ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
302930 Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Not bad firest card, pretty well balanced and not too overpowered. Keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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