yugiohluffer Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 so what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
302930 Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Some capitalization errors and a little bit overpowered, but pretty good for a beginner. Y0u should give him an effect that makes him take 3 tributes (just a suggestion;)] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lalolalo Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Some writting errors, overpowered, u.u... I don't like the pic. 8/10 for the effort. Sorry I can't comment more, Normal Monsters are hard, you can only rate the pic, stat (ATK and DEF) and writting (grammar, caps, etc...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Prince Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 it to over powered 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohluffer Posted May 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 ok.how about this one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 it is way overpower.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohluffer Posted May 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Some capitalization errors and a little bit overpowered' date=' but pretty good for a beginner. Y0u should give him an effect that makes him take 3 tributes (just a suggestion;)'] thanks for the suggestion :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoodat1994 Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 it's o.p.!!! its a dragon not a beast!!! bad ocg... 5/10, ok job... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 lots of grammar errorsthis belongs in any other cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohluffer Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 ok.thanks.ill see to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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