Chaos Impact™ Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 heres my new gladiator beast hope you enjoy.card loreIf this card is summoned by the effect of a gladiator beast each main phrase you can roll a die destroy all monsters thats level is more then the number rolled on both sides of the field. If this card attacks or is attacked you can return it to your deck to special summon one gladiator beast from your deck onto the field.This image belongs to the devinart memeber Pinkuh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimitri Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Nice card, dude. :) 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Nice card. Finally, a Gladiator Beast card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 the effect is a stronger version of reloutte barrel(spell check).......... you ocg is way off......... its not so bad tho..... its balance....6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Nice art, but work on your OCG and spelling. Otherwise, I'm getting a good feeling. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 card loreIf this card is summoned by the effect of a gladiator beast each main phrase you can roll a die destroy all monsters thats level is more then the number rolled on both sides of the field. If this card attacks or is attacked you can return it to your deck to special summon one gladiator beast from your deck onto the field. needs a bit of ocg work....you should fix the areas that i bolded for starters. ^_^ 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma Zero Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 I guess I could take a stab at the OCG on this one. ;) "If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of a "Gladiator Beast" monster, once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can roll a six-sided die. Destroy any monsters whose Level is greater than the number rolled. At the end of the Battle Phase, if this card attacked or was attacked, you can return it to the deck to Special Summon 1 "Gladiator Beast" monster from your Deck, except "Gladiator Beast Venomous". There...I think that's right. For anyone who wants to give me grief about the last "Deck" being capitalized...look at an actual Gladiator Beast. ;) Ok, so now that we have that out of the way. There are a few minor changes I would make to this card. Considering it's name is "Venomous" I would consider making it a Reptile like Secutor. Also worth considering would be that since this effect is kinda on the horrific side you might want to tie it into another Gladiarot Beast similiar to how Alexander is summoned. That would, at least, be some kind of downside towards balancing it more. Hope this helps. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exiro Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 The effect reminds me of many cards that have massive destruction. Also, very bad OCG. The pic and name are nice. 5,67/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Pic fits. OCG Errors. Not a bad job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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