EliminateHRN Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Well here is my newest Fan-Fic, Legion's Breath. I hope you like it I will update this as much as possible and I have a fan-site for this Fan-Fic PM me for the link. Anyway here is the characters and more [align=center]~Banner made by Simplicity Ninja~[/align][spoiler=Characters][spoiler=Riley Ally]Riley Ally is the main character of this story. He loves to duel and also loves to take walks before the sun even comes up. He has had a bad feeling in his mind and will it come through? He is also a 15 year old. You will learn more about his past once the story progresses. [spoiler=Deck]Riley's Deck is based off of Dragons with a few Dragon Support cards. His strategy is to summon some of his most powerful cards in hardly no time. If he can't just stall his opponent until he can Summon his Dragons. he will inflict damage using effects. [spoiler=Riley's Duel Disk] Image found off somewhere called Duel Evolution [spoiler=Maddie Kecline]Maddie Kecline is one of Riley's best friends and has a big crush on him. Riley doesn't know about Maddie's feelings for him though they do make a good couple XD. She is still new to dueling but she is a pretty good dueler for a beginner. She is also 15 years old. [spoiler=Deck]Maddie uses a LIGHT Deck. It focuses around, not monsters, but trying to inflict to your opponent Life Points with card effects. And if that doesn't work, she works out some powerful monster and attack your opponent's Life Points. [spoiler=Maddie's Duel Disk] [spoiler=Arron Elise]Arron Elise is Riley's Rival. He thinks he is better at dueling than Riley. He doesn't believe anything Riley says only himself. He has a cold heart and only cares for himself. He is also 16 years old [spoiler=Deck]Arron uses a Fiend Deck. His strategy is to get out his most powerful monsters, alot like Riley, and doesn't have any other Strategy. [spoiler=Arron's Duel Disk] [spoiler=Ryan Speed]Ryan is a character Maddie, Riley, Arron, and Spirit meets while in the prairie after Riley got bit by a Scorpion Snake. His past is still pretty unknown but he has said that he has lived in the prairie for years and been a duelist for years but that is all known of his past. [spoiler=Ryan's Deck]Ryan's Deck is still unknown though it is rumored that he plays a Gladiator Beast Deck. [spoiler=Ryan's Duel Disk] [spoiler=Spirit]Sprit is Riley's pet baby dragon. He can talk. He loves talking to Riley and Maddie. He decides to help out Riley and Maddie during this story. Riley found him in a river while walking on his daily walk and decided to keep him. And Riley even has a card in his deck that is based off his pet and friend. I'll add more characters later [spoiler=Episode Guide]PrologueEpisode 1. Alone but Not Alone (this post)Episode 2. Slight Danger (posted)Episode 3. Breaker Reveals (posted)Episode 4. Infinite Hole (posted)Episode 5. Invisible Force (posted)Episode 6. Busy Crush (posted)Episode 7. Charge! (posted)Episode 8. Tag Team Duel! (posted)Episode 9. Potion Recovery (posted)Episode 10. Ambush! Dragon's Promise (posted)Episode 11. Shadow Day (coming soon)Episode 12. Castle of the Forgotten (coming soon) Here is the first episode Episode 1 - Alone but Not Alone [This takes place 3 days after the Prologue...........] Riley yawned and got out of his bed. He washed his face and got on his clothes. He lived in a house in a forest a little ways from the town though he liked living here. Spirit, his pet dragon, came in. Spirit: Good morning, Riley. Can I help you with something? Riley: Thanks but no thanks, Spirit. He looked at his clock. It was 8:00 AM. He didn't get much sleep after he went on his daily walk. He decided to go get something to eat. He went downstairs to the kitchen. The kitchen was dark until he turned on the light that layed on the table. The kitchen had a sink, dishwasher, stove, and anything else you woulf ind in a normal home. He decided to eat some cereal. He poured the cereal then the milk. He sat it on the table. Riley: Do you want something, Spirit? Spirit: Sure. Riley made Spirit a bowl of chicken wings, his favorite, and put it down on the floor. They started eating. Riley lived in this cabin by himself. His parents died when he was younger, around the age of 5. He then lived with one of his friends, Maddie Kecline, until he was 13 and built this cabin, with help from Maddie's dad, Will, they built this log cabin. He got done and put the bowl in the sink. They was a knock on the door. Riley opened it. It was Maddie Kecline. Riley: Oh, Maddie, didn't know you were coming. Maddie: Sorry, just came to see what was up. They walked into the kitchen. Maddie: Hi, Spirit. Maddie started peting Spirit and looked at Riley. Maddie: So how was the walk? Riley: Same as everyday, chilly and dark. Maddie laughed and Rile went to the living room. The living room was decorated with beautiful flowers and drawings. Riley got his backpack and looked around for his duel disk and deck. He found his deck, lying on a pillow case on the couch. He then found his duel disk in the closet. He put them in there. Maddie: Ready? Riley: Yep. Riley grabbed some of his money and went out with Maddie. The air smelled sweet in the forest. The forest has colorful trees and flowers. Spirit followed them. Maddie: So how old is Spirit again? Riley: Almost 3 years old.***************************???: So, my Lord? Voice: Yes? ???: I can't find it, I'm sorry I failed you. Voice: Well you BETTER find it or you know what would happen. Then a screaming voice came out from the shadows and then a voice said "Please, stop....." then it went silent. ???: Fine, I'll look harder.****************************Riley was sitting on a tree trunk while Maddie went to her house. He was drawing on a piece of paper. He didn't even know what he was writing. Maddie came back. Maddie: I got my Deck, do you want to duel? Riley: I would but I'm trying to figure out what I'm drawing. Riley showed her. It had a like a wierd pattern on it with a wierd kinda writing on the side of it. Maddie: That is cool, what is it? Riley: That is the problem, I don't know. I just started writing it. They looked confused, and Maddie sat beside him to try to figure out what it was.****************************???: So what is this desert alled, again? ???: Shinaro Desert or Shinaro Death Desert. Someone swallowed. ???: Wonder when we get to the Army-base? ???: I'm not sure.******************************Riley put it up, as he couldn't figure out what it was. Riley: Well c'mon. Maddie followed Riley back to his cabin. When they got there, Maddie sat down on the couch and Riley went into the kitchen. Riley: Do you want something? Maddie: No. Riley: Okay. The next few hours, they just sat there and talked until Maddie went home. Riley went to bed at 10:50 PM. There was a cloaked man walking through the woods. ???: Where is the Infinite Savior? It echoed in Riley's head. Then he woke up. Spirit: What's wrong? Riley: Well I think I had a bad dream.................don't worry it is fine *or is it*. He got up for his daily walk at 6:00 AM. He went back to bed 1 and a half hours later. He woke up at 10:00 the next day. He started off slow. He meet Maddie at the end of the forest at noon. He told her about the dream he had. Maddie: Well seems wierd. ???: Or does it? They looked behind them and saw Riley's rival, Arron Elise. Maddie: What do you mean by that? Arryon: *ignores Maddie* Riley, duel now. Riley: Now? Arron: Yes Riley: Fine. They activated their duel disks. Both: DUEL! to be continued......................... Ending Theme Well hope you like this and please Rate/Comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 So far, seems interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Thanks maybe this time I can keept this going XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 I hope you carry this one untill the end, rather then starting a new fan fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Experiment_001 Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Yay! It came out now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 I see no reason to keep the fanfiction and the prologue in different threads, other than a desire to clutter up the forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Sorry Umbra I forogot you may LOCK The Prologue if you want I totally forgot sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 please only use one thread to post your fan fic please delete one of them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Can't I'll get someone to LOCK the Prologue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Since I have the mod powahz, I could move the post containing the actual prologue to this thread, and lock the rest of the thread, I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Okay that will be great is you can. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Just realized I couldn't had misinterpreted. Prologue locked however. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Okay :D Also I'll have episode 2 up in a few days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Guys I have added 2 more episodes to the Episode List Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 this is very interesting,keep up the good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Thanks I'm finishing up some cards for the Fan-Fic :D so Episode 2 should be up in a few hours Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Thanks I'm finishing up some cards for the Fan-Fic :D so Episode 2 should be up in a few hoursOh,I'm waiting with joy when I see the new episode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 LOL well also I have all the ideas of the episodes up to episode 28 (that is 2 episodes away from the Season finale) but I only have the Prologue and Episode 1 written down (workin on Episode 2) and I have made a sheet with the ideas for each episode where I won't forget :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 You are surely a well-prepared guy with good foresight as well. (this causes for a rep) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Here is Chapter/Episode 2 hope you like :D but I'm sorry the duel ended very short tho I didn't want to give away their whole deck (as there will be MAJOR duels later) [center][url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vzz_2ISJpKY]Opening Theme[/center][url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vzz_2ISJpKY][/url] [center][b][u]Episode 02 - Slight Danger[/center][b][u][/b][/u] Riley: I'll go first. I draw then place 2 cards face-down. Now I Summon, Undersea Serpent, in ATK Mode, now I end my turn. (4000 Life Points) [spoiler=Riley's Cards] Undersea Serpent WATER Level 4 Dragon / Effect Lore: Each time this card is targetted by an attack of a monster your opponent controls, you may pay 1000 Life Points to negate the attack. As long as this card stays in face-up Attack Position, all Dragon-Type monster gain 500 ATK. 1500 / 1100 Plus 2 face-downs[/spoiler] Arron: DRAW! Now I pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon, Evil Skull Fiend, in DEF Mode. Now I place 1 card face-down, then I play Pot of Greed *draws 2 cards*, now I end my turn. (3200 Life Points) [spoiler=Arron's Cards] Evil Skull Fiend DARK Level 6 Fiend / Effect Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by paying 800 Life Points while this card is in your hand. If this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon up to 2 Fiend-Type monsters in your Deck. Once per turn, by paying 800 Life Points, destroy all face-up monsters your opponent controls. 1000 / 2300 1 face-down card.[/spoiler] Riley: Okay, draw. Now I Summon, Rising Star Dragon, and activate one of my face-downs, Jar of Greed *draws a card* now I play my other face-down, Equal Dragons. This card lets me send 2 Dragon-Type monsters to my Graveyard, from my Deck, to raise my Life Points by 300 for each Dragon-Type monster I control. Now I place one face-down to end my turn. (3600 Life Points) [spoiler=Riley's Cards] Rising Star Dragon LIGHT Level 3 Dragon / Effect Lore: This card is unaffected by Spell Cards. 1100 / 1300 Equal Dragons Normal Spell Lore: Send 2 Dragon-Type monster to your Graveyard, from your Deck, to raise your Life Points by 300 for each face-up Dragon-Type monster you control. 1 face-down card.[/spoiler] Arron: Draw! Now I use ESF's Effect. Now I pay 800 Life Points to destroy all face-up monsters you control. Now Evil Skull Fiend attack his Life Points directly. As Evil Skull Fiend launched forward, Riley activated his face-down. Evil Skull Fiend backed up. Arron: What the - Riley: I played my Trap, Bleeding Dragon. It let's me negate an attack, after a Dragon-Type is destroyed, if I pay 500 Life Points. They looked at each other. The clouds was getting blacker and larger. Arron: Well I end my turn. (2600 Life Points) There was a weak thunder noise from far off. Riley: Draw. Now I play my - It started raining. Riley: Damnit. They stop dueling as it started lightning. Riley: Remember, tomorrow rematch. Arron: I'll still win. Arron walked off. Maddie, Riley, and Spirit entered Riley's house. When Maddie went home, Riley went to bed. He had another bad dream that night. He thought about it during his daily walk each morning. Riley: Maybe it has something to do with that drawing. He went back home and looked for the image. [center]****************************[/center] ???: Where is it? Man: I don't know what your talking about. The cloaked man threw the other man to the ground. ???: Your sick. He kicked him and walked off. ???: If it aren't around here then where? [center]****************************[/center] Riley: Maddie, remember that dream I told you about. Maddie: Yeah. Riley: I think I know what that drawing is. Maddie: What? Riley: It is what that man said, Infinite Savior. Arron came up. Arron: Do you want that rematch, still? Riley: Not right no, I'm sorry but I'm doing something. Then something, like a comic, came out of the sky and landed in the forest. Spirit: What was that? They ran to the place it landed and searched for it. It looked like a stone. Riley: Wait?! Riley took the image out of his backpack and looked at it. The image he drew looked just like that stone. Riley: If this.........thing.........in my drawing is the Infinite Savior then that stone is it cause they look just the same. Maddie, Spirit, and Arron looked at it. Arron: For the first time, your right. They took the stone to Riley's house. Riley: Wonder what it does? Maddie: I'm not sure, but maybe it tells on this writing on it. They looked at the small writing on it. Spirit: Can you tell what it says, Maddie? Maddie: No, it in is some kinda of different writing. I might be able to find the writing out if I had an computer. Riley: Wait! Riley opened the closet and searched around. He finally pulled out a laptop. Riley: Here. Maddie took the laptop and placed it beside the stone. She entered some kind of website. The screen was black with green letters as if it was writing something. Maddie: This wil help trying to find out the writing. Wait let me crack it. She started typing. A few minutes later, she cracked the code. Maddie: It says, "all who controls the Infinite Savior contains unstoppable power and immortal", so I guess anyone who controls the stone can take over Earth. Riley: Wow well no wonder. Then everything turned dark. The cloaked man appeared in front of them. ???: I'll take the Infinite Savior. The cloaked man took the stone and disappeared. Riley: That was the guy in my dream. [center]**********************************[/center] ???: My Lord, I have it. Voice: Good. ???: I'll try to get there as fast as possible. Voice: Fine, I'll send back-up. [center]**********************************[/center] Riley: We just can't let them take it. He could be an enemy and wants to take over the world or something. Maddie: But what can we do? They was a long silence. Riley: Old fashion way, following them. [center][url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MJ4f9lo927g&feature=related]Ending Theme[/center][url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MJ4f9lo927g&feature=related][/url] I hope that you like it this episode was only for the plot so there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 this story is getting better & better now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 I feel that the story's somewhat... generic, if you take a look at the characters. We have the MC, a girl with obvious love interest in the MC, and a main rival. Seen it before. And the antagonists are an evil organisation with inhuman powers. But well, I suppose it gets better as the story progresses and we get to know more characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 I want to see the next episode!!! And please, don't get rid of this. Keep it, untill the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 I will and Umbra they aren't always Humans in this Fan-Fic (they might be different beings) and thanks guys Episode 3 will be up in the next few days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 I will and Umbra they aren't always Humans in this Fan-Fic (they might be different beings) and thanks guys Episode 3 will be up in the next few days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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