Huntar! Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 [align=center]I dont own the artwork for this card. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Meh, stop ur productions!!! I think its a bit OP isn't it :P? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Maybe. I dont know. It is a little difficult to get out, then you have the whole 'wait a turn' then he blows up your face-up monsters. I dont know. My cards have been overpowered lately. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lolimar Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Pretty good card but maybe a bit overpowered. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
odin557 Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 what everyone els said 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Ok. Thanks.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Hmm, its quite good. I don't find it overpowered AS such. But still nice :) 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pengeo Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Nice Card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Thanks. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 I like it. I think it's pretty fair, good for when you're getting swarmed. The only thing I could critique would be the picture, it just looks a little too...reptilian and four-legged to be a phoenix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 it is good,though sending it to the graveyard immediately after its summoning is bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma Zero Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 I agree, it looks a bit more Griffin than Phoenix, but that's just my opinion on the art. As for the card itself, it's not terribly hard to get into play and the effect is pretty hard to stop. It's essentially an easier to summon Dark Dust Spirit that doesn't go away at the end of the turn. Unlike the Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys, this card doesn't repeatedly come back into play if destroyed by a card effect. As a means to more effectively balance this card, might I suggest that you add an effect similiar to Gravekeeper's Chief where you can only control 1 of these at a time? That might be enough to balance out this card's power. Just a suggestion, hope it helps. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Thanks. I'll take that into consideration Enigma Zero. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 I see some OCG Errors. Type isn't supposed to be capitalized. And I think that last part of it's effect should be re-worded a bit. It conflicts with the effect before it. It says when it's special summoned successfully, send it to the graveyard right? So when it's special summoned the second time wouldn't that effect still send it to the Graveyard, not activating the effect? I don't know, it's a hard effect to put into perfect OCG, but I make a lot of OCG mistakes so... I'm not rating the card on OCG though, cause it's stupid. It's a tad bit overpowered. Remove 1 Winged Beast and Thunder-type is pretty easy in the right deck. The special summon part the first time is good because it gives the opponent a chance to counter, but that probably won't happen. The destroying all other monsters except for him is a tad strong though. 7.5/10 Sorry I've seen better from you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 I see some OCG Errors. Type isn't supposed to be capitalized. And I think that last part of it's effect should be re-worded a bit. It conflicts with the effect before it. It says when it's special summoned successfully' date=' send it to the graveyard right? So when it's special summoned the second time wouldn't that effect still send it to the Graveyard, not activating the effect? I don't know, it's a hard effect to put into perfect OCG, but I make a lot of OCG mistakes so... I'm not rating the card on OCG though, cause it's stupid. It's a tad bit overpowered. [b']Remove 1 Winged Beast and Thunder-type is pretty easy in the right deck.[/b] The special summon part the first time is good because it gives the opponent a chance to counter, but that probably won't happen. The destroying all other monsters except for him is a tad strong though. 7.5/10 Sorry I've seen better from you 1st Bold - Type is capitalized mate. 2nd Bold - Thunders and Winged Beast may be easy, but this card isn't "Devastating" on the field as such. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 I see some OCG Errors. Type isn't supposed to be capitalized. And I think that last part of it's effect should be re-worded a bit. It conflicts with the effect before it. It says when it's special summoned successfully' date=' send it to the graveyard right? So when it's special summoned the second time wouldn't that effect still send it to the Graveyard, not activating the effect? I don't know, it's a hard effect to put into perfect OCG, but I make a lot of OCG mistakes so... I'm not rating the card on OCG though, cause it's stupid. It's a tad bit overpowered. [b']Remove 1 Winged Beast and Thunder-type is pretty easy in the right deck.[/b] The special summon part the first time is good because it gives the opponent a chance to counter, but that probably won't happen. The destroying all other monsters except for him is a tad strong though. 7.5/10 Sorry I've seen better from you 1st Bold - Type is capitalized mate. 2nd Bold - Thunders and Winged Beast may be easy, but this card isn't "Devastating" on the field as such.It is? My bad I always do it with lower case. Thunder-type looks more practical than Thunder-Type to me. I didn't say devastating now did I? I said a tad bit strong. Of course theirs a lot of reasons why it isn't devastating. The effect does give a big field advantage monster-wise though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 why is everyone doing production? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 @CI: Shini started it, I stole it, Chronos stole it. @Shini: Always looking for an arguement aren't you? I know it isn't my best. I am in a slum. @AJW: Thanks. I edited this card so it makes a little more sense. Yes, this thing dies when it is summoned, but it activates first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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