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*RUNSP - Rise of the UNiversal SPirits

 

From the Creator of "Fiends of Forever" and "World Dragon & World Elementals" comes....

 

THE UNIVERSALS!

 

Note: None of the artwork was mine, at the bottom of this post there is a list of the artists used.

 

# In Balancing Stages.

# If there is OCG problems, comment/PM me the problems.

# Let me know if cards are under/overpowered.

 

 

Grain:

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Effect:

This card is also treated as a Plant-Type monster. During you or your opponent's Battle Phase, if this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of Battle, draw 1 card from your Deck.

 

 

Glyph:

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Effect:

This card is also treated as a Fish-Type monster. By discarding 1 card in your hand, negate all of your opponent's attacks until the End Phase of the turn that this card's effect was activated.

 

 

Grash:

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Effect:

This card is also treated as a Pyro-Type monster. During each of your Standby Phases, increase the ATK of 1 monster on the field by 200(if you increase this card's ATK, it cannot exceed 2600).

 

 

Gaila:

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Effect:

This card is also treated as a Beast-Type monster. By discarding 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard, this card can attack twice during your current Battle Phase.

 

 

Universal Turn:

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Effect:

Select 1 or more "Spirit of the Universe" monsters from your Graveyard. Remove monsters on your side of the field from play whose total Level Stars exactly equal the Level of the selected monster(s). Then Special Summon the selected monster(s) from your Graveyard.

 

 

 

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Glyph, I'd maybe make it where you can discard a card to use its effect. But then you'd have to lower it's ATK.

 

Grash is kinda underpowered. You can raise his ATK to at least 2400 and take off the limit. And maybe make it 200 instead of 100.

 

Giala's good. But you could probably change it to this Battle Phase if you want.

 

I think Universal Turn is pretty good. But I don't think it should be a continuous. Maybe just normal. Would be good as a quick-play, though, but I'm not sure if it'd be broken.

 

And just remember to not change your cards because of what one person says. I don't know all the cards in the game, so I can't always determine if a card is underpowered, overpowered, broken, etc. Try to get a few opinions before you go changing your cards drastically. ;)

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Glyph' date=' I'd maybe make it where you can discard a card to use its effect. But then you'd have to lower it's ATK.

 

Grash is kinda underpowered. You can raise his ATK to at least 2400 and take off the limit. And maybe make it 200 instead of 100.

 

Giala's good. But you could probably change it to this Battle Phase if you want.

 

I think Universal Turn is pretty good. But I don't think it should be a continuous. Maybe just normal. Would be good as a quick-play, though, but I'm not sure if it'd be broken.

 

And just remember to not change your cards because of what one person says. I don't know all the cards in the game, so I can't always determine if a card is underpowered, overpowered, broken, etc. Try to get a few opinions before you go changing your cards drastically. ;)

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Glyph - I want to Limit the card's effect, discaring 1 card from your hand can run the effect too many times during a Duel.

 

Grash - Ahh, but you also have to remember it can give the ATK points to ANY monster on the field. Also with cards like "Glyph" it could stop Grash from getting destroyed.

 

Giala - Ah, I said next Battle Phase to give your opponent a little "time" since if it is used with equip cards and etc. it can be a OTK which I don't like :P.

 

Universal Turn - Now, i'm changing that to Normal since it doesn't state on the card WHEN the effect can be activated ;)

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Glyph, well, it's not a broken effect or anything. When you think about it, discarding 1 card to stop your opponent's Battle Phase is like you didn't have that turn at all, but your opponent gains an extra card. (I know that sounds kinda confusing)

 

Ex. Say you have only Glyph on field and no cards in hand. You draw and end your turn. Your opponent has Blue-Eyes on the field. He's going to attack, but you activate Glyph and discard the card from your hand. Your opponent ends his/her turn. Now you're back where you started 1 turn ago, but your opponent gained an extra card.

 

That wasn't the best example, but I showed you why you could just discard a card for that and the card would still be balanced. But you might have to lower Glyph's ATK a bit.

 

Grash, yes, but 100 extra points a turn doesn't mean much when Grash'll be destroyed in 1-3 turns.

 

Giala, well, you won't get to see his effect in action much. You could say "halve the damage this card inflicts" or something. I think that would be fine.

 

But still. Nice set. And I see you added a new card. Only thing I have to say about this card is that I think you should be able to use his effect even if he's destroyed during your opponent's Battle Phase as well.

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Glyph' date=' well, it's not a broken effect or anything. When you think about it, discarding 1 card to stop your opponent's Battle Phase is like you didn't have that turn at all, but your opponent gains an extra card. (I know that sounds kinda confusing)

 

Ex. Say you have only Glyph on field and no cards in hand. You draw and end your turn. Your opponent has Blue-Eyes on the field. He's going to attack, but you activate Glyph and discard the card from your hand. Your opponent ends his/her turn. Now you're back where you started 1 turn ago, but your opponent gained an extra card.

 

That wasn't the best example, but I showed you why you could just discard a card for that and the card would still be balanced. But you might have to lower Glyph's ATK a bit.

 

[b']Grash, yes, but 100 extra points a turn doesn't mean much when Grash'll be destroyed in 1-3 turns.[/b]

 

Giala, well, you won't get to see his effect in action much. You could say "halve the damage this card inflicts" or something. I think that would be fine.

 

But still. Nice set. And I see you added a new card. Only thing I have to say about this card is that I think you should be able to use his effect even if he's destroyed during your opponent's Battle Phase as well.

 

 

1st bold - Fair enough, will be changed to 200.

2nd bold - That card was there the whole time haha, and yeah, I'll be changing that effect.

 

And Glyph.. You've proven your point, IT IS CHANGING! :P

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2nd bold, really? o.o That's weird. lol It didn't show up at all the first like 3 times I checked out this thread. Guess it just had a hard time loading. lol

 

But cool. Though, you still might want to get more opinions before you change your cards. I'm just stating my opinions, but I could be wrong about the balancing. Just letting you know. ;) Well, night.

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Excuse me? Glyph not overpowered? That's kind of insane...

 

Glyph's ATK makes it a great aggro card, right? His ATK is enough to undermine most 4-stars, and if your opponent summons somthing bigger than Glyph, he has a fallback strategy that you can move back to in order to save yourself. If you're going to give him an effect that stops all your opponent's attacks, then you're going to need to make him a high-DEF monster instead of a high-ATK monster.

 

Grash is... alright, I think. His parenthesis confuses me. Do you mean "this card" as in the card selected by his effect, or just Grash? If its the former, then he's balanced, but if the parenthesis is just talking about Grash, then this effect is controversial... I'm not too sure about what to say just yet.

 

Grain and Giala are excellent, but Universal Turn is both broken and has bad OCG. First of all, its OCG sounds like you can summon a number of monsters equal to the level of the monster you tributed, which isn't intentional (as I see). There is a problem with this card. Taking a look at the card Puppet Magic of Dark Ruler, you can see it only targets Fiend-Type monsters, and its the only card out in the TCG (as far as I can remember) that has this effect. You're card designates any type of monster, meaning I can use "Foolish Burial" on my Ultimate Tyranno, and then use this card to tribute 2 four-star monsters on the field and get him out. If this happens during the beginning of the duel, it would be an aggro rampage! So, change the card to select only 1 type of monster.

 

OCG: Grain's effect says, "During your or your opponent's..." and it should read "During you or your opponent's" (that's minor, but its there!). Glyph reads: "... negate all of your opponent's attacks that Turn." Effect unchanged, it would be: "... negate all of your opponent's attacks until the End Phase of the turn that this card's effect was activated." (it can be simplified, but you have textspace to spare, and i'm not in the mood for simplifying anyway). For Grash, part of the text is, "...increase 1 monster on the field's ATK by 200", and it should be flip-flopped: "...increase the ATK of 1 monster on the field by 200." Giala is great as far as OCG goes, but "Universal Turn" really needs modification. Rewrite the card text completely, using Puppet Magic of Dark Ruler as a reference.

 

I like Giala best, its the most accurate. Then Grain, Grash, and Glyph.

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Excuse me? Glyph not overpowered? That's kind of insane...

 

Glyph's ATK makes it a great aggro card, right? His ATK is enough to undermine most 4-stars, and if your opponent summons somthing bigger than Glyph, he has a fallback strategy that you can move back to in order to save yourself. If you're going to give him an effect that stops all your opponent's attacks, then you're going to need to make him a high-DEF monster instead of a high-ATK monster.

 

Grash is... alright, I think. His parenthesis confuses me. Do you mean "this card" as in the card selected by his effect, or just Grash? If its the former, then he's balanced, but if the parenthesis is just talking about Grash, then this effect is controversial... I'm not too sure about what to say just yet.

 

Grain and Giala are excellent, but Universal Turn is both broken and has bad OCG. First of all, its OCG sounds like you can summon a number of monsters equal to the level of the monster you tributed, which isn't intentional (as I see). There is a problem with this card. Taking a look at the card Puppet Magic of Dark Ruler, you can see it only targets Fiend-Type monsters, and its the only card out in the TCG (as far as I can remember) that has this effect. You're card designates any type of monster, meaning I can use "Foolish Burial" on my Ultimate Tyranno, and then use this card to tribute 2 four-star monsters on the field and get him out. If this happens during the beginning of the duel, it would be an aggro rampage! So, change the card to select only 1 type of monster.

 

OCG: Grain's effect says, "During your or your opponent's..." and it should read "During you or your opponent's" (that's minor, but its there!). Glyph reads: "... negate all of your opponent's attacks that Turn." Effect unchanged, it would be: "... negate all of your opponent's attacks until the End Phase of the turn that this card's effect was activated." (it can be simplified, but you have textspace to spare, and i'm not in the mood for simplifying anyway). For Grash, part of the text is, "...increase 1 monster on the field's ATK by 200", and it should be flip-flopped: "...increase the ATK of 1 monster on the field by 200." Giala is great as far as OCG goes, but "Universal Turn" really needs modification. Rewrite the card text completely, using Puppet Magic of Dark Ruler as a reference.

 

I like Giala best, its the most accurate. Then Grain, Grash, and Glyph.

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Excuse me? Glyph not overpowered? That's kind of insane...

 

Glyph's ATK makes it a great aggro card' date=' right? His ATK is enough to undermine most 4-stars, and if your opponent summons somthing bigger than Glyph, he has a fallback strategy that you can move back to in order to save yourself. If you're going to give him an effect that stops [i']all[/i] your opponent's attacks, then you're going to need to make him a high-DEF monster instead of a high-ATK monster.

 

Grash is... alright, I think. His parenthesis confuses me. Do you mean "this card" as in the card selected by his effect, or just Grash? If its the former, then he's balanced, but if the parenthesis is just talking about Grash, then this effect is controversial... I'm not too sure about what to say just yet.

 

Grain and Giala are excellent, but Universal Turn is both broken and has bad OCG. First of all, its OCG sounds like you can summon a number of monsters equal to the level of the monster you tributed, which isn't intentional (as I see). There is a problem with this card. Taking a look at the card Puppet Magic of Dark Ruler, you can see it only targets Fiend-Type monsters, and its the only card out in the TCG (as far as I can remember) that has this effect. You're card designates any type of monster, meaning I can use "Foolish Burial" on my Ultimate Tyranno, and then use this card to tribute 2 four-star monsters on the field and get him out. If this happens during the beginning of the duel, it would be an aggro rampage! So, change the card to select only 1 type of monster.

 

OCG: Grain's effect says, "During your or your opponent's..." and it should read "During you or your opponent's" (that's minor, but its there!). Glyph reads: "... negate all of your opponent's attacks that Turn." Effect unchanged, it would be: "... negate all of your opponent's attacks until the End Phase of the turn that this card's effect was activated." (it can be simplified, but you have textspace to spare, and i'm not in the mood for simplifying anyway). For Grash, part of the text is, "...increase 1 monster on the field's ATK by 200", and it should be flip-flopped: "...increase the ATK of 1 monster on the field by 200." Giala is great as far as OCG goes, but "Universal Turn" really needs modification. Rewrite the card text completely, using Puppet Magic of Dark Ruler as a reference.

 

I like Giala best, its the most accurate. Then Grain, Grash, and Glyph.

 

Alright then, all done :) Thanks again Bunny O Magic!

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