Kale Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 [align=center]Here's a set preview of a new set that will be featured in my fan fic The Edge of Justice. They are called the Gravatics, dealing mostly with the effects of 'gravity.' hence the name. ^_^ they deal damage for how many cards each play controls at the end phase, so they are meant to go a bit quicker than usual play. The monsters are a little like spirit monsters, where they return to your hand at the end phase.... but not all of them do that, i assure you. The entire set revolves around the field spell 'Dark Gravity Spike', and keeping it on the field. ^_^ Feel free to correct ocg as you feel it's needed. ^_^1.As long as this card remains face up on the field, each player loses 500 Life Points for each card they control (excluding this card) during the End Phase. This card cannot be destroyed due to the activation of another Field Spell Card. not my pic, found on google. 2.When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned you can select 1 Field Spell Card who's name includes "Dark Gravity" in your Deck or Graveyard and activate it. If you activate this effect, destroy this card during your End Phase. not my pic, wolfberserker's. 3.This card is returned to the owner's hand during the End Phase of a turn that it is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If it does, the battle damage inflicted is halved. not my pic, wolfberserker's. 4.Release 1 monster on your side of the field. Select 1 monster from your deck that is 1 level higher than the released monster and Special Summon it to your side of the field in face-up attack position. That monster is removed from play during the End Phase. 5.You may Normal Summon this card with out a tribute. If you do, you opponent must Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from their deck to their side of the field in face-up attack position. If you Normal Summon this card in this way, it is destroyed during the End Phase. 6.You can only control 1 "Gravatic Defender" monster. You may Special Summon this card to your side of the field during your opponent's Standby Phase. If you do, this card is destroyed during the End Phase. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, draw 1 card. 7.Special Summon up to 3 "Gravatic" monsters from your hand or Graveyard to your side of the field. Destroy all monsters Special Summoned by this effect during the End Phase of this turn, and inflict 100 points of damage x the combined levels of all the monsters destroyed by this effect to both players. if credit for the image is not given below the card lore, it is either written on the card, or it is not mine. I only claim the pictures that i state on the card that i own. ^_^[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 [align=center]Here's a set preview of a new set that will be featured in my fan fic The Edge of Justice. They are called the Gravatics, dealing mostly with the effects of 'gravity.' hence the name. ^_^ they deal damage for how many cards each play controls at the end phase, so they are meant to go a bit quicker than usual play. The monsters are a little like spirit monsters, where they return to your hand at the end phase.... but not all of them do that, i assure you. The entire set revolves around the field spell 'Dark Gravity Spike', and keeping it on the field. ^_^ Feel free to correct ocg as you feel it's needed. ^_^1.As long as this card remains face up on the field, each player loses 500 Life Points for each card they control (excluding this card) during the End Phase. This card cannot be destroyed due to the activation of another Field Spell Card. not my pic, found on google. 2.When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned you can select 1 Field Spell Card who's name includes "Dark Gravity" in your Deck or Graveyard and activate it. If you activate this effect, destroy this card during your End Phase. not my pic, wolfberserker's. 3.This card is returned to the owner's hand during the End Phase of a turn that it is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If it does, the battle damage inflicted is halved. not my pic, wolfberserker's. 4.Release 1 monster on your side of the field. Select 1 monster from your deck that is 1 level higher than the released monster and Special Summon it to your side of the field in face-up attack position. That monster is removed from play during the End Phase. 5.You may Normal Summon this card with out a tribute. If you do, you opponent must Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from their deck to their side of the field in face-up attack position. If you Normal Summon this card in this way, it is destroyed during the End Phase. 6.You can only control 1 "Gravatic Defender" monster. You may Special Summon this card to your side of the field during your opponent's Standby Phase. If you do, this card is destroyed during the End Phase. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, draw 1 card. 7.Special Summon up to 3 "Gravatic" monsters from your hand or Graveyard to your side of the field. Destroy all monsters Special Summoned by this effect during the End Phase of this turn, and inflict 100 points of damage x the combined levels of all the monsters destroyed by this effect to both players. if credit for the image is not given below the card lore, it is either written on the card, or it is not mine. I only claim the pictures that i state on the card that i own. ^_^[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Nice cards Dark Kale. Can't wait to see more. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Nice cards Dark Kale. Can't wait to see more. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Nice cards Dark Kale. Can't wait to see more. 10/10 wow, a 10? i didnt think they warrented a 10/10, but i wont argue... :lol: im glad you like them. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Nice cards Dark Kale. Can't wait to see more. 10/10 wow, a 10? i didnt think they warrented a 10/10, but i wont argue... :lol: im glad you like them. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 I like them, especially the pics. 10/10. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 I agree with everyone else here,a 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 im glad you guys like them, but they are no where near being finished. i have a ton of ideas for cards, i just need to make em. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Nicely done, 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 thanks! Again, I am glad you like them. I guess I should get started on the rest of the set... I designed these as the polar opposites of my allies, they stay on the field I'm groups and the gravatics stay off. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Interesting... 8.5/10, want to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Interesting... 8.5/10' date=' want to see more.[/quote'] alright, alright, im working on it! if you want to see them in action, just wait for my fan fic to have em. ^_^ they will be featured... EDIT: i added card three. enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Gravatic Mercenary is underpowered,give it a higher ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Gravatic Mercenary is underpowered' date='give it a higher ATK.[/quote'] alright, i was thinking it was overpowered, but i will take your advise. ^_^ 1800 alright? EDIT: changed to 1800 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Hmmm pretty good, can't find anything wrong...much... 9.5/10 For some reason it doesn't seem like a 10 to me...but you can round up xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Hmmm pretty good' date=' can't find anything wrong...much... 9.5/10 For some reason it doesn't seem like a 10 to me...but you can round up xD[/quote'] thanks! i never rate a 10 on anything, because that signifies perfection, and nothing in the world is perfect... so i understand what you mean. ^_^ i have more ideas, so dont worry. i hope to get that 9.5 to a 9.9.... ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 [justify]As long as this card remains face-up on the field' date=' each player loses 500 Life Points for each card they control (excluding this card) during the End Phase. This card cannot be destroyed due to the activation of another Field Spell Card.[/justify']As long as this card remains face- [align=justify]Unless you meant for there to be 2 Field Spell Cards on the field at a time, I'd change the last sentence to "Field Spell cards cannot be activated while this card is face-up on the field." Also, I think you should lower the damage. With only 6 cards on your side of the field, you lose your 8000 LPs (plus more) in just 3 turns. And yes, I know that it affects both players, but you'd only activate that card when you're way ahead. That's what makes it broken. I'd maybe lower it down to 200.[/align] [justify]When this card is Normal Summoned' date=' Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, you can select 1 Field Spell Card who's name includes "Dark Gravity" in your Deck or Graveyard and activate it. If you activate this effect, destroy this card during your End Phase.[/justify]When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, [justify]This card is returned to the owner's hand during the End Phase of a turn that it is Normal Summoned' date=' Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card attacks directly, the battle damage inflicted is halved.[/justify]This card is returned to the owner's hand during the End Phase of a turn that it is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card attacks directly [justify]I only noticed 1 OCG problem in each card. I'm not completely positive about the last one, but I'm pulling my hair out of my head because I couldn't figure out how to word the last one correctly! lol That's the best I could come up with...guess I'm just not thinking straight right now, so you might want to get a second opinion. But the first two do have 1 problem with each, but it's nothing big. Check the red.[/justify]I only noticed 1 OCG problem in each card. I'm not completely positive about the last one, but I'm pulling my hair out of my head because I couldn't figure out how to word the last one correctly! lol That's the best I could come up with...guess I'm just not thinking straight right now, so you might want to get a second opinion. But the first two do have 1 problem with each, but it's nothing big. Check the red Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 i shall give you a 9/10. For good Pics. Good OCG and just overall goodness. However i would like to see more cards from you as i expect a lot from you! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 i shall give you a 9/10. For good Pics. Good OCG and just overall goodness. However i would like to see more cards from you as i expect a lot from you! XD of course the pics are good, there wolf's! :lol: thank you for your rating, and your compliment. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Oh, I guess I forgot to comment your cards before. :P They're really good. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Oh' date=' I guess I forgot to comment your cards before. :P They're really good. ;)[/quote'] thats okay! ;) i need to make more of these guys and soon... you guys like em too much.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 lol Yeah...looking forward to seeing more. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 lol Yeah...looking forward to seeing more. ;) cool, thanks. ^_^ ive got a definite idea for one monster, and some vague ideas for some spells and traps.... but ill figure it out in do time. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Cool. :) And I don't know how you people do stuff like that. I can't make sets, because I can never find good enough pics for them. All my cards are completely random. I find good pics and then base the effects off the pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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