dillon123 Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 here are a few i will also be posting more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Theres some OCG errors in the text. The 1st letters of the words need tobe capitalized. Also a monster can only have one Type, unless you make the card have the effect of changing it's Type. Robotic Dragon from the Nether Realm: When this card attacks a Warrior-Type monster increase the ATK of this card by 500 points. When this card attacks a Divine Beast-Type monster decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points. Robotic Beast from the Nether Realm: Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points for every Machine-Type monster on the field. I fixed the cards up 4 ya. Make these changes and the cards will b good. 8/10.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Theres some OCG errors in the text. The 1st letters of the words need tobe capitalized. Also a monster can only have one Type' date=' unless you make the card have the effect of changing it's Type. Robotic Dragon from the Nether Realm: When this card attacks a Warrior-Type monster increase the ATK of this card by 500 points. When this card attacks a Divine Beast-Type monster decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points. Robotic Beast from the Nether Realm: Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points for every Machine-Type monster on the field. I fixed the cards up 4 ya. Make these changes and the cards will b good. 8/10.:D[/quote'] You fixed his OCG for him, but that still leaves the cards so overpowered that they'd be banned before they were made (well, the first one at least). dillon123, if you're going to make monsters have really high ATK/DEF like that, you gotta make them really hard to summon or have some serious drawbacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asii Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Power aside, the only real flaw is the grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dillon123 Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 good point mage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Time= more realistic cards, you'll get there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dillon123 Posted June 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 ya i couldnt get very good pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted June 7, 2008 Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 ummmm, hmm. When making cards, first find the pics or make them, then do the card making great cards nonethelessbut if you could balance the ATK and DEF more, and maybe improve the grammar and uniqueness of the effects, you cards will be the best Awesome cards Man/Woman^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark sanji Posted June 7, 2008 Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 WTF realm? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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