ChronosCrowler Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Well I guys I happened to make new cards! I hope you like! them! And Pls Rate! and Comment!^_^ ------------------------------Thrugelmir - Darkness Incarnate----------------------------------------------------------Thrugelmir - Darkness Incarnatehttp://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/Elementalist001/SoulRipCard-1.jpg' alt='SoulRipCard-1.jpg'>[/center][/b][/i]-----------------------------Trivia-----------------------------The Image on this card shows "Thrugelmir - Darkness Incarnate"(Testament) Slaughtering his opponent. ------------------------------------Thrugelmir - The Judgment-------------------------------------------------------------------Thrugelmir - The Judgmenthttp://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/Elementalist001/JudgementCard-1.jpg' alt='JudgementCard-1.jpg'>http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/Elementalist001/ProminenceCard-1.jpg' alt='ProminenceCard-1.jpg'>[/center]Card Text:This card is used to Ritual Summon "Thrugelmir - The Judgement". You must also remove from play "Thrugelmir - Darkness Incarnate" on your side of the field and tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 12 or more.------------------------------------Trivia------------------------------------The image on this card features "Thrugelmir - Darkness Incarnate" Being Possesed/Inhabited by Darkness, and transforming to "Thrugelmir - The Judgment". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 I'm so glad you posted all the effects up. It'd make it harder to edit your OCG...well, not harder, just longer without being able to copy and paste them. I probably wouldn't have done it. :P This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 "Vampire Genesis" on your side of the field from play. During each of your Standby Phases' date='[/b'] you can send 1 Zombie-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard whose DEF is equal to 2000 or less. When this card successfully destroys a monster controlled by your opponent, you can Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster with a DEF of 2000 or less from your Graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field' date=' [b']each time a "Thrugelmir - Darkness Incarnate" on your side of the field destroys a monster controlled by your opponent, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to 300x the Level of the destroyed monster. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Ritual Of Prominence". During each of your Standby Phases' date=' you [b']can[/b] pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard, regardless of its summoning conditions. Tribute any number of Zombie-Type monsters on your side of the field (excluding this card) to inflict damage to the opponent equal to half the combined original ATK of the tributed monsters. This card is used to Ritual Summon "Thrugelmir - The Judgement". You must also remove from play "Thrugelmir - Darkness Incarnate" on your side of the field and tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 12 or more. BOLD = OCG corrections. RED = Assumption. Did you want to have to remove "Thrugelmir - The Judgement" from play from your side of the field? Or could he be anywhere? Awesoe cards' date=' btw. ;) EDIT: OMG! My [M'] key isn't working sometimes! I think something may be stuck under the key. I'm not sure if I edited anything and added any Ms in there, but if you see somewhere where there should be an M and there's not, just correct it. ;) I just noticed it when I said "Awesoe cards, btw. ;)", but it's been happening a lot tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Minor OCG errorsGreat PicturesOverall they are truly really good. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Wow!Kudos to you CC for such a work of the highest standards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Thanks guys for the! Comments and tips!Specially for titus! advice! thanks alot! Ill edit it right away^_^but as for the tributed part! it should be like that cause that is correct OCG capital T if you use Tributed!^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Deadly cards, love them. My only bit of critisism = Quality of Incarnate's picture could be improved. It is too squished vertically. But other than that, AWESOME!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Thanks guys for the! Comments and tips!Specially for titus! advice! thanks alot! Ill edit it right away^_^but as for the tributed part! it should be like that cause that is correct OCG capital T if you use Tributed!^_^ :) Well, looks like you got that. There are a few words I'm not so sure about if they're capitalized or not (remember that I was away for over 1/2 a year and I just recently came back ;)), but seems like you know some of your OCG, too, so you can correct any mistakes I made. And I'm more focused on the way the sentences should be written, rather than capitalization, so I make a few mistakes on that ever now and then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 You could lower it's ATK a bit on the first one. Great job otherwise, 9.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Thanks Guys! Glad you like them!^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Yet more good cards by you!!! [Glad your recognized. ^^]...! All the things I would say have been stated above...! So all I have left to do is rate...: image: 1.5/2ocg: 1.5/2overall card: 1.6/2interest: 2/2effect: 1.5/2 So overall, you got a 8.1/10...Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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