Blazemann Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 My first realistic card: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 "This card can only be activated when a FIRE monster on your side of the field is attacked. Increase the ATK of all FIRE monsters on your side of the field by 1000." Nice card, but OCG problems. I fixed it for you. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazemann Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Thanks, updating! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lalolalo Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Hmmm... I think it is a little bit overpowered, maybe make it a normal trap instead of a Continuous would do it. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazemann Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Fixed! Hmmm... I think it is a little bit overpowered' date=' maybe make it a normal trap instead of a Continuous would do it. XD[/quote'] Well, I am taking the actual physics into effect. The idea is that hydrogen makes fire bigger, and that would work on all fire, until the source is destroyed.(the card) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 OMG, my bad. :P I wasn't paying attention. New effect is being added. EDIT: Added. Oh, and lalolalo's probably right. In a FIRE deck, this card would be overpowered. Maybe make it less ATK gained. Maybe 600-700. Axe of Despair increases by 1000, but that's only 1 monster. If every monster (if you have a FIRE deck) on your side of the field got 1000 LPs, that's a bit much, even if the game isn't about ATK any more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Cool card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazemann Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 OMG' date=' my bad. :P I wasn't paying attention. New effect is being added. EDIT: Added. Oh, and lalolalo's probably right. In a FIRE deck, this card would be overpowered. Maybe make it less ATK gained. Maybe 600-700. Axe of Despair increases by 1000, but that's only 1 monster. If every monster (if you have a FIRE deck) on your side of the field got 1000 LPs, that's a bit much, even if the game isn't about ATK any more.[/quote'] OK, two to me, you all win. 700 it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Way better now. ;) But you didn't re-edit the effect. I messed up because I had my mind somewhere else (texting people). Change both times you see "Fire-Type" to just "FIRE". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Some OCG errorsOk PicOverall it's decent: 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Some OCG errors There's only 1 right now and I told him what it was. Don't know why he hasn't fixed it yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Some OCG errors There's only 1 right now and I told him what it was. Don't know why he hasn't fixed it yet. I know it's 1 error but it's wrong twice in the effect, so 'some" ocg errors :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 lol Well, I thought you just meant that there were other things wrong with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazemann Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 lol Well' date=' I thought you just meant that there were other things wrong with it.[/quote'] It is because I was sleeping that it hasn't been fixed yet. Thankyou for the OCG help, I am new at this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 No problem. And you did pretty good with it by yourself. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinX Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Hydrogen doesn't make fire bigger! It just makes a pop sound. Oxygen makes it bigger! Anyway onto the card. If the effect is continuous, its a bit overpowered, and shouldn't it be a Field Spell? Wouldn't that make more sense. Also, you need to give credit to the owner of the pic. Uhhh, 7/10. The effect is kinda basic, and the chemistry behind it is wrong, but I like the pic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exiro Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 This is basically a stronger version of Burden of the Mighty for Fire monsters.6.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 I don't like the pic much, but the effect is alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazemann Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Hydrogen doesn't make fire bigger! It just makes a pop sound. Oxygen makes it bigger! Anyway onto the card. If the effect is continuous' date=' its a bit overpowered, and shouldn't it be a Field Spell? Wouldn't that make more sense. Also, you need to give credit to the owner of the pic. Uhhh, 7/10. The effect is kinda basic, and the chemistry behind it is wrong, but I like the pic![/quote'] 1) I am sorry if I sound mean in this post... 2) Ever heard of Hindenburg? If not, google it. Hydrogen is highly flamable. 3) No, this shouldn't be a field card because it isn't. It works like one, but it isn't. 4) I made this picture myself in photoshop, so I don't need to give credit. This one wasn't something you would of already known, though, so you don't get blamed for it. 5) Thanks for appreciating the pic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parallel Gunshot Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 make it a normal trap instead of a continuousits a bit overpowered as a continuous...good now OCG is ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ender4449 Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 well 3 of these would overpower the attack so a field spell would be best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoodat1994 Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 hydrogen duznt powa up fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it destroys it!!! it makes up water!!! [partially] first card 1/10... second card 5/10... i wanna see the ritual card!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ender4449 Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 di-hydrogen mon-OXIDE (oxide is oxygen the other 1/3 of the water equation so saying that hydrogen puts out fire because it is a part of the chemical composition is stupid) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazemann Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 hydrogen duznt powa up fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it destroys it!!! it makes up water!!! [partially] first card 1/10... second card 5/10... i wanna see the ritual card!!! As Endor said, Hydrogen by itself is nothing like water. And the second card is my signature. To see that set, go to the finished sets forum. And Endor, I will not make it a field card. This card is meant to be overpowered. It is in the beginning of my BLA series. Not all of them will be overpowered, but the first ones will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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